My Poems

aww i like it!

To Kamron <3


I never really knew you
You were just another friend
But when I got to know you,
I let my heart unbend.
I couldn't help past memories
that would only make me cry
I had to forget my first love
and give love another try
So I've fallen in love with you
and I'll never let you go
I love you more than anyone
I just had to let you know
And if you ever wonder why
I don't know what I'll say
But I'll never stop loving you
each and every day
My feelings for you will never change
Just know my feelings are true
Just remember one thing
I Love You!

I love the last poem a lot. smooth flow and great emotions packed in there.

Just the last line... maybe you could add a few words into it, to make it less abrupt. Because the last line seems short of syllables. Maybe 'really do' would be good? (:

sweet thanks xD

Psycho cocian addict

Makes me high

When I wanna die

Solves my problems

Crazy psycho insane

Cocain addict

I really wanna die

Stop this blood from flowing

Or im gonna go cocain crazy

Psycho psycho psyco

Cocian crazy

White nose

Dead teeth

Do you really want me like this

Heal me know

Or I might just go

psycho cocian crazy



(ignore my spelling errors to lazy to fix them)

Remember friend, whatever that makes you want to die, try to do something to oppose the desire to die because the success of proving a cause of your misery wrong is the sweetest fruit ever in this world. You don't have to stay optimistic, but just don't die.

When you're alone in pain, the more you should try to stay happy, self-encourage, self-motivate, self-entertain, make your way through and see the light that you'll reach which is at the end of the tunnel. Life is dark, and is like crap, but if we try, we can walk out. It's not trying to be optimistic, but accepting life as it is and not thinking life sucks and wanting to 'escape' it by dying. Anyway, you aren't escaping if you die my friend, because you're just fooling yourself that that's the way out, it isn't. The end of life is death. So to die an unnatural death (by suicide) is just going to the end faster which deprives you of the chances that life gives you, to enjoy, to reap what you sow. Live on my friend. Dying isn't all that fun.

[For a chance to stand up and be known: join 'thread for the forgotten - poetry contest' (: I see that your thread is pretty quiet, do join it. For all you may know, that may be the changing point of your poetry ((:]

Life is a roller coaster

We have our lows

When we get our highs

Life is a road of misfortune

When we die

Hold on tight

For the ride is hard to hell

Or even heaven if your perfect

But these are just words

For all you know

there is neither hell nor heaven

but just an empy pit

of darkness

were we linger and

relive our lives alone.