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| | Subject: My poems Fri Mar 04, 2011 10:03 pm | |
| Nothing Is
Nothing is good,
Nothing is perfect,
Nothing is special.
Is that how you see the world?
You walk like there's no tomorrow,
you don't stop and see what's infront of you.
So Nothing is good,
Nothing is perfect,
Nothing is special.
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EmoAngel
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sat Mar 05, 2011 12:33 am | |
| wow. this is really really good | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sat Mar 05, 2011 12:42 am | |
| ahah thanks but not really ... it;s about my dad he left 10 years ago and came back but now everything is falling apart again so..yeaaa... | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sat Mar 05, 2011 12:41 pm | |
| Lonley and sad...
Cold and hurt...
Holding on as the days drag on,
Tears threaten to spill,breath comes shallow,
Days get longer,nights get colder.
People pass me by,I fake a smile,
You ask me if I'm alright and I just nod.
But truth is I'm hurt and cold...
all alone in the dark,all I need is a friend... | |
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EmoAngel
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sat Mar 05, 2011 1:54 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sat Mar 05, 2011 4:23 pm | |
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*~Dreamer~*
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sun Mar 06, 2011 2:34 am | |
| i can completely empathize with your last poem. just that... i locked them out because of betrayal, and then find myself lonely and bitter about life.
cheer up! (:
Life's great weather there're friends or not because it's just the way you take the things life throws you. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:48 am | |
| Yeah I know, there are happy poems on the way  | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Mon Mar 28, 2011 4:37 pm | |
| What Do You Think...? We sat there joking and laughing, then I looked at you and said,"What Do you think about me?" You looked at me and shook your head,"I can't say,"was all you said. I smiled,"write it down.." All that night I thought about what you would write,the very next day you hand me a peice of paper. Smiling I opened it but the paper was blank. Tears came to my eyes as I tried to run,but you blocked my way and whispered,"The paper is blank because I can't tell you what I think.. their are a thousand words... but I'll sum them up to a word.. Mine is what I think about you." | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sat Apr 23, 2011 7:24 pm | |
| My Irish part:
Cad a tharla an lá inis tú dom grá agat dom?
An raibh duillÃn sé ar shiúl leis an chuid eile ar fad ár n-fhada
Chaill cuimhnà cinn?
An raibh sé ar shiúl céimnithe sa chúlra, bheith ina dubh agus bán
pictiúr.
Nó an bhfuil sé fós anseo, fós ag snámh thart timpeall orainn agus muid féin drown
i trua féin agus brón.
Ach má tá an lá sin fós anseo is féidir, é a bheith inár todhchaà nó beidh sé ach
fanacht san am atá caite? My English Part:
What happened the day you told me you love me?
Did it slip away with the rest of our long distance
Lost memories?
Did it fade away in the background, becoming a black and white
picture.
Or is he still here, still swimming around us and ourselves drown
in self pity and regret.
But if that day is still here, can it be in our future or will it just
stay in the past
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JCP1987
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sun Apr 24, 2011 2:43 am | |
| Wow your poems are really beautiful i really like the love one the write it down and nothing was there one, very beautiful. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sun Apr 24, 2011 2:44 am | |
| Thanks | |
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JCP1987
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sun Apr 24, 2011 2:47 am | |
| Welcome, they are alot better than mine. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sun Apr 24, 2011 2:51 am | |
| No I'm sure their nt.. min barley make sense... | |
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JCP1987
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sun Apr 24, 2011 4:29 am | |
| Usualy the person writing the poems doesn't think they make sense but to others they do, lol | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Sun Apr 24, 2011 7:31 am | |
| lol well do they make sense?! | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Tue May 24, 2011 10:05 am | |
| I gave you love,
you gave me pain,
I gave you warmth,
you gave me coldness
I gave you everything,
you gave me nothing. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Tue May 24, 2011 10:08 am | |
| I asked for a friend,
you gave me a lover,
I asked for confort,
you gave me love and warmth,
I asked for a shoulder to lean on,
you wrapped your arms around me
and gave me streagth.
I asked for friendship,
and you gave me all your love in the world,
I guess what I am trying to say is that if you
asked for something little like me
I'll give you everything I can. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Thu Jun 16, 2011 2:02 pm | |
| My hero
My hero isn't superman,
No he can't fly,and no he
doesn't have x-ray vision
My hero isn't the kind
that fights a house fire,
and he doesn't put a crazy
person behid bars.
No my hero is the man in
the camouflage army suite,
the one that represents
his country proudly.
The one who knows he might never get to see he's family,
or see the sun rise another day.
My hero is my Uncle,
the man who fights till the very end.
Lots of love Uncle Tim! | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:16 am | |
| my hero was a touching piece to read. very engaging.
the idea of 'no it isn't' something repeated makes the reader wonder what you'd want to say.
your hero isn't a fictional character, isn't a soldier, isn't anything that comes to our mind. So it gets us thinking and gets us engrossed into reading your write because we're fascinated to know what/ who your hero is.
beautiful. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:53 pm | |
| Thanks Dreamer ! | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:30 pm | |
| My duty, just pm me or swing by my thread if you need a review to keep you going! Always ready to give you one!  | |
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