Schizo's Poetry.

Subject: Re: Schizo's Poetry. Sat Oct 09, 2010 10:03 am

nice writes you've got here. Simple ideas brought to the audience (: No sophistry in the phrasing either, plain and straight out.. Just like what we are nowadays, a reflection of present day life. We are honest, but only to words that we keep to ourselves.

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Most of my poems have swear words in, I'm being honest. I changed them though.

Subject: Re: Schizo's Poetry. Sat Oct 09, 2010 4:27 pm

they are really good

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I know. I started writing poetry when I was like thirteen. I've just fallen in love with it.

Subject: Re: Schizo's Poetry. Sat Oct 09, 2010 4:48 pm

ur amazing at it. u've got a real talent

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I'm mainly a strong writer when it comes to either poetry or creative writing.

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seems lk u would b

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The Way He Made Me Feel

He made me feel as if I was the only thing that mattered in life
But I didn't understand why
It wasn't love
It was never meant to be
I surpose he was young and foolish at the time

The way he made me feel
Was like a dream come true
I would write him poetry
Everything I hated, I'd do for him

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Will You Save Me?

I feel like I'm being consumed
By some sort of evil
I don't see how this could be
Do I really mean anything to you?

Thats what I'm confused about
Constantly
I just don't see how I mean anything
Do you really like me that much?

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interesting i must read more of ur poems

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Give Me A Second Go

How can you love me when I'm ugly?
Do you see past that?
How can most things just disappear
Thats what I don't get

One to five - I'm half alive
Six and nine - I'm out of line
Ten to twlve - I'm not myself
All I wanted to know

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