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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
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| It all was going great awesome family, great freinds, good grades but then evrything changed. I fell in love with darkness.
Sidney- the main charecter
Briella- her bestfreind
Castiel- Sidneys brother
Derik- the second main charecter
Carol- Deriks sister
Richord- Carols boyfriend
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Ivy
Loving the feeling
 
Age : 26
Posts : 1285
Location : Falling Off A Cliff
Join date : 2009-12-07
Character sheet
Name: Carter
Age: 15
Affinities : able to take other people's affinities
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:08 pm | |
| do you know what i am getting ticked cause evrytime i am ready to send it takes me back to the home page so i need to write it first then i will but it up | |
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Ivy
Loving the feeling
Age : 26
Posts : 1285
Location : Falling Off A Cliff
Join date : 2009-12-07
Character sheet
Name: Carter
Age: 15
Affinities : able to take other people's affinities
| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Mon Oct 18, 2010 9:24 pm | |
| that sounds incredbally annoying | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Tue Oct 19, 2010 6:42 pm | |
| yea but i will do it tonight | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Tue Oct 19, 2010 7:45 pm | |
| Chapter 1
it was my friends 17th birthday so we were going to an Adam lambert concert. we were about 10 minutes away. at the last right turn some idiots on motercycles cut us off and we started swerving. we screamed and swore. i finally got control of the wheel and got back to our directions to the stadium. when we got there i saw the motercycles that cut us off. i went over to them while Briella was getting our waters and blankets.
"WHERE DID YOU GET YOUR LICENSE, WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU. YOU ARE ALL IDIOTS AND SHOULD GET YOUR LICENSES AWAY!" i yelled at the first guy he still had his helmet on but i could still see his gray eyes. then the one with his helmet off went into my face, he had bleach blonde hair with green eyes. he looked like he should belong in a mens magazine for what women want. "WHAT IS WITH YOU. YOU'RE JUST A B****. I SHOULD SHOW YOU HOW NOT TO TALK TO A GUY THAT WAY." we got more in eachothers faces until the chick came over and pulled him back. "Come on Richard i wanna go shes boring me." my mouth dropped a little and just started counting back from 10. he nodded and started walking away. and purposly shoved his shoulder into me, i fell. he and the girl started laughing as they walked away. the one with the helmet came over and gave me a hand up. "Are you okay, he can be a jerk like that. i have to deal with it." he chuckled a little and turned around to put his helmet on the bike, but before he turned around i was at the car because Briella called me over i yelled thanks.
[color=violet]"You okay Sidy."color] she looked at my shoulder and noted that it was gonna briuse.
"Oh well lets goo i wanna get a good seat. | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
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| chapter 2
the concert was amazing we were dancing and screaming, Briella went to get us some food, so i stayed and was dancing like crazy, until someone accidently bumped into me. "Oh crap im so sorry i wasnt looking." the guy offered me a hand up.
"Oh no problem dude it was an accident, see no harm." i spun around so he can see nothing is wrong. then i saw him and was in complete shock, he was fricken HOT, he had shaggy black hair with these snakebites. and his eyes they were the most melting silver, wait i know those eyes! "your the jerk that cut us off and then your jerk friend push me over!" i turned away and got back to enjoying the concert. then some guy came over and started grinding on me. i tried to push him off me but he was fricken strong. "what the hell get off of me. HELP!!" i yelled and then the motercycle guy pushed the creep off me and right hooked him. the guy fell to the floor and i backed up until i was next to the guy. "hey are you okay, did that *edit your post and this will go away* hurt you?" He turned me around and made shure i was okay.
"Um thanks im fine, im Sidney. who are ya?" i had my had ready for a shake. he took my hand and shook it.
"Im Derik. it cool to meet ya, i am so sorry of how my sister and her boyfriend pushed you. are you okay?" we didnt let go of each other hands but that was fine. it was like he read my mind cause he shook his head and looked closley at my bruise. i shook my head.
"hay do you want to dance? i love this song." it was if i had you. we started dancing and it was funn but instead of dancing with us only hold one had we were holing each others hands and dancing. i was sing along with it. and it was so fun.
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Fallen_warrior
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Age : 33
Posts : 3825
Location : other side of the veil
Join date : 2010-08-17
Character sheet
Name: Reaper
Age: 19
Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Mon Oct 25, 2010 10:04 pm | |
| how about CUT OFF, as the title? | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Mon Oct 25, 2010 10:05 pm | |
| yea thats sounds pretty sweet!! thanks | |
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| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Mon Oct 25, 2010 11:18 pm | |
| Then what?  Keep going. |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Tue Oct 26, 2010 5:08 pm | |
| hold on my brain can only think of two chapters for 2 diffrent stories and it was a monday so im really slow | |
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Blue Moon
Going about a regular day
Age : 29
Posts : 8
Location : Sweet Home Boring, Dumb, Stupid, Broke Down Alabama
Join date : 2010-10-19
Character sheet
Name: Blue Mary Ann Moon
Age: 15
Affinities : Earth. At night when the moon she can see clearly and when she looks at a person she sees a bit part of their future.
| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Tue Oct 26, 2010 7:38 pm | |
| I like it
It's completly awesome. | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Wed Oct 27, 2010 5:11 pm | |
| thanks i write some then give it to my bff to read and i always have a cliff hanger and she gets so mad it fuunny | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Wed Oct 27, 2010 11:04 pm | |
| it might take me a while i have writers block now!  | |
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Fallen_warrior
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Age : 33
Posts : 3825
Location : other side of the veil
Join date : 2010-08-17
Character sheet
Name: Reaper
Age: 19
Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Thu Oct 28, 2010 3:31 am | |
| Awwww, that's a bummer, I'm sure you'll find inspiration again. | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Thu Oct 28, 2010 8:07 am | |
| Thanks i probably just hahve halloween on the brain. and now i have a great idea of what to do!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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Ninjagurl
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Age : 26
Posts : 58364
Location : Everywhere,but nowhere
Join date : 2010-02-10
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| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Thu Oct 28, 2010 4:22 pm | |
| Omg love it  | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
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| Then Briella got back to see us dancing and bumped into Derik and we all started laughing. "Hay, Brie this is Derik, Mr. Motercycle. Derik this is my best friend Briella." they shook hands and we started dancing agian but Derik and i werent holding hands. i left to use the bathroom when another band played so adam lambert could take a brake. but i really needed a pick me up so i too a small flask out of my boots and took a sip. but before i took another sip someone took it out of my hands. "Sidney I thought you where clean. you promised me!" Briella looked at me and dumped the liquor on the ground. "Brie im so sorry i just needed a sip." i sat down while she went back inside pissed. i felt so bad i started to cry a little. so i just went to the car. i was gonna wait for and hour or so. i was laying down reading in the backseat. then after 10 minutes i heard a tap on the door. but no one was there. | |
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Ninjagurl
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| | Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Sat Oct 30, 2010 9:51 pm | |
| Cliffie?awwww .... lol i like it this is defentliy a story imma be reading daily ... well everytime you post | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
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| which hopefully is daylie | |
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Ninjagurl
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| yes wich hopefully is | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
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Ninjagurl
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
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