Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:25 pm

I opened it and looked outside. no one. i heard voices. i followed them. it was Derik and that guy that i almost punched in the face. i hid behind a tree. "What it taking you so long?" the guy siad to Derik. "Im having a good time. i dont want to feed on them." Derik siad looking at the ground. "Well then ill feed on her. im still mad at that." he siad smiling. he walked off. he was really mad. i saw him punch a tree. "Dammit." i siad.
I woke up to my name being called i fell asleep in the car. i saw Derik and Briella outside telling me to open the door

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Fri Dec 17, 2010 3:07 pm

I opened the door. "What?" I asked sleepishly. "We were worried. Im so sorry I flipped out on you." She hugged me. "No im sorry." I hugged her back. "Can we talk?" Derik asked me. "Yea sure." i got out and we started walking. "You okay?" "Yea... Well no im not. I had fun. But I got head back. Can I have you number." "Yea sure." I put it in his phone. He did the same. "Bye." I smiled and walked back. "Soo?" I laughed and got in. "Got his number." We drove back, It was a saturday so she slept over. She collasped on the couch. I sat on the loveseat and watched tv. I got a text. it was from Derik.
Hey
I smiled. Hay.
So whats up?
not much, Briella is passed out on the couch. You?
Just chilling in my room my sister has friends over.
Cool, cool concert huh?
Yea it was, Man. Its late.
Lol yea it is.
Then good night.
Good night. XD.
I turned my phone off and fell asleep

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Sat Dec 18, 2010 1:31 am

lala-like it! xD Keep it up, girl. It's way better to finish it than to leave it hanging...Trust me, I have about 50 unfinished stories and it bugs me ALL THE TIME! Razz

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Sat Dec 18, 2010 1:31 am

I know same here. LOL

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Sat Dec 18, 2010 1:40 am

Moonwalker12 wrote:: I know same here. LOL

I love Adam Lambert BTW!
Great choice of artist xD
(so see it is NOT off-topic...or that much anyway)

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Sat Dec 18, 2010 1:51 am

LOL i know right. Hes da bomb

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Sat Dec 18, 2010 4:07 pm

I woke up. Briella was still sleeping on the couch, it was 10:30 in the morning. My parents already left for work. I got up and scratched my head, hmm. I got up and went to the bathroom my hair was in a bush like form. I laughed and put a hat on. I walked into the living room. "Yo, Briella wake up." I poked her.
"No." she said waving her hand randimly trying to hit me. "Okay." i pulled the blanket she used and she fell, i laughed and walked into the kitchen

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Mon Dec 20, 2010 2:03 pm

I walked into kitchen and got a cup off coffee. I grabbed an apple and sat at the table. "Hurry up before the coffee gets cold." I yelled to her. "Yea yea," She got up and grabbed some milk. "So I think we are just going to go down to the lake." I said taking a bite from my apple. "Sounds good. But did Derik text you yet?" I smiled. "Yea he did like 20 minutes after you fell asleep." I finished my stuff and went to to my room. I got my clothes and Briellas bikini she left last time. "Here." "Thanks. I call bathroom first." She ran in and got ready.

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Mon Dec 27, 2010 3:24 pm

I waited for her to get out. After she did I got in. I got ready and walked out. "Okay lets go." I grabbed my sunglasses. "Great. I need to get a tan." I laughed and walked out to the car. I got in. "Im turning the stereo up." She cranked it. I laughed and pulled out of the driveway. We made it to the lake. "Turn it down!" I yelled over the music

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Mon Jan 03, 2011 1:47 pm

thats really good. i want to read more!!! geek

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Mon Jan 03, 2011 2:31 pm

Amazing story !! I enjoy reading it Smile

Keep going!!

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Mon Jan 03, 2011 5:26 pm

thanks.Ill make more I just have so much to write and only an hour so....

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Mon Jan 03, 2011 11:05 pm

okay take all the time you need.

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Tue Jan 04, 2011 2:12 pm

thanks

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Tue Jan 11, 2011 6:46 am

this is really goood. Razz

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Tue Jan 11, 2011 2:12 pm

Its not really good.

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Tue Jan 11, 2011 2:43 pm

yes it is its really goood

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Tue Jan 11, 2011 8:01 pm

no. I thinks its deseant

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Tue Jan 11, 2011 8:05 pm

i think its awesome and good

Subject: Re: Now known as "Cut Off". Thanks Tue Jan 11, 2011 8:06 pm

well its your opinion. you win

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