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PostSubject: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 18, 2010 9:58 am

Here are some poems i wrote. I hope you like them.

My Own Path

i walk down a path alone

I take each step carefully as if i
might fall hard with one wrong move

I kept walking until the path stopped
Far ahead of me was no pavement

I seen others take the same path
and turn around walking the way they
came

Thing is i am not like others I'm
different, the odd one out So what was
I going to do?

Make my owm pathand keep moveing
forward instead of moveing back like you

Just watch me go I don't care Your not
my boss

Move on

Forget Me

i'll be gone and won't come back

Say your last goodbye

As i walk into the mist of my own path
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 18, 2010 7:04 pm

that was really good
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 18, 2010 7:21 pm

thank you. i finshed it yesterday Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 18, 2010 7:26 pm

its really good
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 18, 2010 7:28 pm

cute
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 18, 2010 7:32 pm

lol
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 18, 2010 7:53 pm

that is a good poem, makes you think about where the future will lead you
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 18, 2010 8:06 pm

thank you. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 18, 2010 8:19 pm

welcome Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyWed Oct 20, 2010 11:49 pm

My Secret

I can't make you
happy or proud all i
do is make you upset
or disapointed in me

I cry in silence so you
don't know the truth

I am not the golden
child she is and i am
a liar from want your
saying to me

You yell at me a lot
I am not perfect but
you always want me
to be

I am stressed and
you don't seem to
care

I hide all of my feelings
and thoughts so you think
i am ok and think
i am strong when i am not

You know how hard it is to
please you? its very hard

I wish you would beileve me
and say i am a truthful
person

I want to be the golden child
and to be rewarded for
when i do something good

I hope to see you care
someday and tell me you
love me

But for now don't look
into my eyes or touch my
wrist it will give away
my secret


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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyFri Oct 22, 2010 1:30 am

oh wow that is a good poem
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptySat Oct 23, 2010 1:34 pm

thank you
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptySun Oct 24, 2010 1:22 pm

sweet. connected because of the incomplete lines, which also gives it a sense of irony.
Last stanza stands out most (: Love that.
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptySun Oct 24, 2010 1:25 pm

i am glad you like it. thank you. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptySun Oct 24, 2010 8:07 pm

That is good, speaks to the heart. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptySun Oct 24, 2010 9:56 pm

awesome Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 25, 2010 7:05 pm

Invisable

I am right in front
of you and you still
don't see me

You say i am a big
part of your life and
i mean a lot to you

But how can i mean
so much to a person
who i am invisable to?
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 25, 2010 7:14 pm

good question, lol, Keep going Emily
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 25, 2010 7:20 pm

ha ya. thank you Rob. i will.
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyMon Oct 25, 2010 7:29 pm

good. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyThu Oct 28, 2010 9:32 pm

Alone

I feel like i
am stuck in a
corner I have
no where to go
no where to run
i am alone

I scream in pain
nobody can hear
me so i suffer in
silence i am
starting to lose
everything i care
about

I cry for help but
nobody is coming
i look around i see
nothing but my
shadow

The pain still stays

It seems i'll never heal

I still ask why did you
bring me this pain but
i am alone so i am
talking to nobody

Someday I'll be strong

Someday I'll be happy

But that day never
seems to come because
i am alone

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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyFri Oct 29, 2010 1:30 am

Ummm..... wow, are you ok? that one worries me.
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyFri Oct 29, 2010 1:46 am

Oh wow seams like relationship brake-up poem or a death of a loved one
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyFri Oct 29, 2010 1:25 pm

well when i wrote that one. i just felt alone inside and out. I also felt like i wasn't important. but i am ok. i think. Well nobody in my family has died yet. um as for break up poem i wrote a different one for the subject.
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PostSubject: Re: Midnight's Poems   Midnight's Poems EmptyFri Oct 29, 2010 1:40 pm

The feeling of being in an endless abyss? Forgotten by the world, left behind by the people, forsaken by everyone else?

Vacuum-like feeling?

I totally know how that feels... Sucks big time... I won't be able to give you much advices... But yeah, try to get out of it. Don't be like me... It makes you sadistic, makes you emo... Makes you everything you don't want to be.
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