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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 18, 2010 9:58 am | |
| Here are some poems i wrote. I hope you like them.
My Own Path
i walk down a path alone
I take each step carefully as if i might fall hard with one wrong move
I kept walking until the path stopped Far ahead of me was no pavement
I seen others take the same path and turn around walking the way they came
Thing is i am not like others I'm different, the odd one out So what was I going to do?
Make my owm pathand keep moveing forward instead of moveing back like you
Just watch me go I don't care Your not my boss
Move on
Forget Me
i'll be gone and won't come back
Say your last goodbye
As i walk into the mist of my own path | |
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EmoAngel Attending your first ritual
Age : 27 Posts : 183 Join date : 2010-10-07
Character sheet Name: Shell Age: 13 Affinities : Can control a persons emotions, and can see a persons hearts desire
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 18, 2010 7:04 pm | |
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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 18, 2010 7:21 pm | |
| thank you. i finshed it yesterday | |
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EmoAngel Attending your first ritual
Age : 27 Posts : 183 Join date : 2010-10-07
Character sheet Name: Shell Age: 13 Affinities : Can control a persons emotions, and can see a persons hearts desire
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 18, 2010 7:26 pm | |
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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 18, 2010 7:28 pm | |
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EmoAngel Attending your first ritual
Age : 27 Posts : 183 Join date : 2010-10-07
Character sheet Name: Shell Age: 13 Affinities : Can control a persons emotions, and can see a persons hearts desire
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 18, 2010 7:32 pm | |
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Fallen_warrior Temporary Mod
Age : 33 Posts : 3825 Location : other side of the veil Join date : 2010-08-17
Character sheet Name: Reaper Age: 19 Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 18, 2010 7:53 pm | |
| that is a good poem, makes you think about where the future will lead you | |
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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:06 pm | |
| thank you. | |
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Fallen_warrior Temporary Mod
Age : 33 Posts : 3825 Location : other side of the veil Join date : 2010-08-17
Character sheet Name: Reaper Age: 19 Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:19 pm | |
| welcome | |
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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Wed Oct 20, 2010 11:49 pm | |
| My Secret
I can't make you happy or proud all i do is make you upset or disapointed in me
I cry in silence so you don't know the truth
I am not the golden child she is and i am a liar from want your saying to me
You yell at me a lot I am not perfect but you always want me to be
I am stressed and you don't seem to care
I hide all of my feelings and thoughts so you think i am ok and think i am strong when i am not
You know how hard it is to please you? its very hard
I wish you would beileve me and say i am a truthful person
I want to be the golden child and to be rewarded for when i do something good
I hope to see you care someday and tell me you love me
But for now don't look into my eyes or touch my wrist it will give away my secret
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Fri Oct 22, 2010 1:30 am | |
| oh wow that is a good poem | |
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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Sat Oct 23, 2010 1:34 pm | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Sun Oct 24, 2010 1:22 pm | |
| sweet. connected because of the incomplete lines, which also gives it a sense of irony. Last stanza stands out most (: Love that. | |
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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Sun Oct 24, 2010 1:25 pm | |
| i am glad you like it. thank you. | |
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Fallen_warrior Temporary Mod
Age : 33 Posts : 3825 Location : other side of the veil Join date : 2010-08-17
Character sheet Name: Reaper Age: 19 Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Sun Oct 24, 2010 8:07 pm | |
| That is good, speaks to the heart. | |
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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Sun Oct 24, 2010 9:56 pm | |
| awesome | |
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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 25, 2010 7:05 pm | |
| Invisable
I am right in front of you and you still don't see me
You say i am a big part of your life and i mean a lot to you
But how can i mean so much to a person who i am invisable to? | |
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Fallen_warrior Temporary Mod
Age : 33 Posts : 3825 Location : other side of the veil Join date : 2010-08-17
Character sheet Name: Reaper Age: 19 Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 25, 2010 7:14 pm | |
| good question, lol, Keep going Emily | |
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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 25, 2010 7:20 pm | |
| ha ya. thank you Rob. i will. | |
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Fallen_warrior Temporary Mod
Age : 33 Posts : 3825 Location : other side of the veil Join date : 2010-08-17
Character sheet Name: Reaper Age: 19 Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Mon Oct 25, 2010 7:29 pm | |
| good. | |
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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Thu Oct 28, 2010 9:32 pm | |
| Alone
I feel like i am stuck in a corner I have no where to go no where to run i am alone
I scream in pain nobody can hear me so i suffer in silence i am starting to lose everything i care about
I cry for help but nobody is coming i look around i see nothing but my shadow
The pain still stays
It seems i'll never heal
I still ask why did you bring me this pain but i am alone so i am talking to nobody
Someday I'll be strong
Someday I'll be happy
But that day never seems to come because i am alone
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Fallen_warrior Temporary Mod
Age : 33 Posts : 3825 Location : other side of the veil Join date : 2010-08-17
Character sheet Name: Reaper Age: 19 Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:30 am | |
| Ummm..... wow, are you ok? that one worries me. | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:46 am | |
| Oh wow seams like relationship brake-up poem or a death of a loved one | |
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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:25 pm | |
| well when i wrote that one. i just felt alone inside and out. I also felt like i wasn't important. but i am ok. i think. Well nobody in my family has died yet. um as for break up poem i wrote a different one for the subject. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Midnight's Poems Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:40 pm | |
| The feeling of being in an endless abyss? Forgotten by the world, left behind by the people, forsaken by everyone else?
Vacuum-like feeling?
I totally know how that feels... Sucks big time... I won't be able to give you much advices... But yeah, try to get out of it. Don't be like me... It makes you sadistic, makes you emo... Makes you everything you don't want to be. | |
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