Midnight's Poems

ya it does feel like that. yes it sucks. As for it makeing me emo. to late for that. I already am. I don't know what i want to be. Its the thing about being young. You have awhile until you have to firgure out what you want to be. but i won't let the loney feeling take over. I need to live my life and have fun. Which is what i am doing

Unfortunately for me... I am not that optimistic... I used to be... BUt it isn't that easy when history just likes repeating itself.

Hidden Self

at times i don't
know what i want

at times i don't
know what i need

i am clueless and
dont know what to
do next

But its like jugdeing
a book by the cover
you dont know
anything until you start
reading it

You have no idea of
what i am capable of

i could be helpful

You may learn something
about me you never
thought you would find out

I am something special

Maybe if you took the
time to find that out
you wouldn't think the
worst of me

I could mean something

I am hiding myself
hopeing you will be the
one to see that

If your the one then
you must go the distance
to find the truth and trust
me

I like that one Emily, although maybe because it describes my feelings at the present,

i like it too. Ya i feel the same way too.

The Truth

it hurts

sometimes its
something you dont
want to hear

It seems to be hidden

I don't even know
whats real or fake
anymore

I know you speak lies

Your fake i can see
your hiding

I deserve to know the
truth

Speak it or just watch
me leave

Now thats something
painful

Thats something you
dont want to see or hear

I want the truth no more
lies

I am tried of you faking it
all

i want to see the real you

Not who you pretending to
be

Dangerous Beaty

on the outside you
see the beauty of me

the inside it the dangerous
side of me

my looks may fool you

but its the only way i attract
my preditors

its like your under my spell

you want me more then you want anything else

the truth is your just a fool

you dont see what i truly am

im the hunter and your the
weak helpless victum

once you fall theres no turning
back

im your beautiful night mare that
can trap you forever

you will see that you made a mistake

to bad you didnt see that earlier

you wish for a second chance

its your fault for falling for me

after all beauty can be dangerous

Greatest Challenge
Freedom is what we seek

We don't wish for money or a
safe place to live

We wish to be free from this
Awful place

If we ever get out will do what
We chose and not let anyone
Control us ever again

After all everyone has their own life
And each one gets to decide what they
Want to do with it

We deserve are chance to live life.
But how we get to freedom will be
Our greatest challenge yet

Midnight Demon wrote:

The Truth

it hurts

sometimes its
something you dont
want to hear

It seems to be hidden

I don't even know
whats real or fake
anymore

I know you speak lies

Your fake i can see
your hiding

I deserve to know the
truth

Speak it or just watch
me leave

Now thats something
painful

Thats something you
dont want to see or hear

I want the truth no more
lies

I am tried of you faking it
all

i want to see the real you

Not who you pretending to
be

true. we want to know whom we're looking at... but don't we just fake and cover up who we are ourselves? it's quite ironic isn't it?

Midnight Demon wrote:

Dangerous Beaty

on the outside you
see the beauty of me

the inside it the dangerous
side of me

my looks may fool you

but its the only way i attract
my preditors

its like your under my spell

you want me more then you want anything else

the truth is your just a fool

you dont see what i truly am

im the hunter and your the
weak helpless victum

once you fall theres no turning
back

im your beautiful night mare that
can trap you forever

you will see that you made a mistake

to bad you didnt see that earlier

you wish for a second chance

its your fault for falling for me

after all beauty can be dangerous

This was a cool piece i must admit. the plot may be a little cliché, but it's true. everyone at one point of time in life probably desired that kind of power... because they were abused by such a power before (don't look at me! I am one too ><).

But I guess you meant 'prey' and not 'predator'? I don't suppose you would want to lure a predator lol (to eat you up?).

Midnight Demon wrote:

Greatest Challenge
Freedom is what we seek

We don't wish for money or a
safe place to live

We wish to be free from this
Awful place

If we ever get out will do what
We chose and not let anyone
Control us ever again

After all everyone has their own life
And each one gets to decide what they
Want to do with it

We deserve are chance to live life.
But how we get to freedom will be
Our greatest challenge yet

How true! I agree that the greatest challenge in life is overcoming the odds and being free. but look, we can NEVER be free. there're universal customs and THAT bounds us to certain behaviors and actions. and if we do certain things it will be a crime and you can be charged. we want to be free, but we want a gracious and safe society. It's impossible. We have to sacrifice one for the other, they can't come together.

and the last stanza 'we deserve are chance to live life'... Did you mean 'All we deserve is a chance to live life. ' or 'We deserve a chance to live life' or 'All we deserve are chances to live life'.

I'm sorry dreamer. i hope your okay. i've been there as well. yea. haha. it's one of my favorite i wrote out of what it seems like a billion. Yea. so true. and in the last stanza i meant to put we deserve a chance to live life.

hey, post more :DD
It will be a good form of relieving stress for me to do reviews on your writes. have been busy lately. so didn't do much reviewing, but I'll review as much as possible.

Okay. I will. =)

awww... Idk, but that sounds familiar to me. Try hard to keep a hold of him. don't let him go. try ways to let him know your situation!

awwwww....make me wanna cry

THanks Dreamer. and it sounds familiar to you? and Amber Rae yea it's sad. Don't cry though. I'll be okay.

Yea. something in it seems common. Like I've read it many times before, on various other sites. well, it's written differently of course, but there are some elements of similarities.

Ahhh. Hm. Well I guess that means I'm not the only one going through this so I'm not alone which is a good thing since i feel alone all the time it seems.

yea, take comfort in numbers ><

Of course.

A Messed Up FariyTale

I'm the Monster

You're the Hero

How can you love
somebody like me?

You saved the day
for those in need
of help

While I ruin the day
for the people who
have it all until they
have nothing left

It's impossible to love
me. Yet you do. You
will end up hurt just like
the rest who tried to
change me.

I want to beileve that
you'll be my hero and
save me from what I've
become but I can't

Theres no such thing in
the Hero Saving the
Monster

awww that is so sad but so sweet

Thank You. I'm glad you like. Yea it's sad.

Sissy I love ur poems!!!!

Thanks You sister!