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Moonwalker12
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Age : 28
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Fri Apr 15, 2011 8:29 am | |
| Thanks i usually writewhar im feeling/ what happened that day | |
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Moonwalker12
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Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Sun Apr 24, 2011 5:48 pm | |
| Im confused.
I want to scream it out..
Buy then everything will fall into the dark
They joke cause they dont know..
But i lie.. i dont want to anymore..
I want to say it to them...
But they would destroy everything i have.
What do i do.. | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Thu Apr 28, 2011 12:53 pm | |
| Were friends right?
I mean we were were before all this crap
We were really close.
Did I riun what we had?
I want us to be close agian. I really do
So what do i have to do? | |
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gamer
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Age : 29
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Thu Apr 28, 2011 1:06 pm | |
| good poem. your an awesome writer  | |
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Moonwalker12
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Age : 28
Posts : 21316
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Thu Apr 28, 2011 4:01 pm | |
| Uh, thanks....  | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Thu Apr 28, 2011 4:24 pm | |
| I did the right thing, right?
I mean who was i kidding
I wish it could be easier.
But it never is, especially for me...
My friends are right, i hope they are
I just have to be strong.
But im not.... | |
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Moonwalker12
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Age : 28
Posts : 21316
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Tue May 03, 2011 2:46 pm | |
| I dont know what I did
my friends were right.
The whole time they were right
But I ignored it.
Should've listened.
But now im p*ssed
and it sucks...
Friends suck..... | |
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Moonwalker12
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Age : 28
Posts : 21316
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Tue May 03, 2011 4:21 pm | |
| I thought he wasnt like them.
I thought he was better..
They made me cry
While you made me laugh.
But i was wrong.
Your just like them
Because im crying
Because of you | |
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gamer
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Tue May 03, 2011 4:29 pm | |
| if your talking about me Kassidy im sorry. | |
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Moonwalker12
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Age : 28
Posts : 21316
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Tue May 03, 2011 4:36 pm | |
| Can you please just tell me whats going on.... | |
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gamer
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Tue May 03, 2011 4:51 pm | |
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Moonwalker12
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Age : 28
Posts : 21316
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Tue May 03, 2011 7:46 pm | |
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Moonwalker12
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Age : 28
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Sat May 07, 2011 12:48 pm | |
| Baby I love you
I love you
your smile, your laugh
the way you make me happy
I was wrong
I know that now.
But as long as your in my heart ill be happy
cause i love you baby | |
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gamer
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Age : 29
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Sat May 07, 2011 12:49 pm | |
| nice poem. | |
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Moonwalker12
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Age : 28
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Sat May 07, 2011 12:56 pm | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
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Join date : 2010-07-19
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Sat May 07, 2011 9:44 pm | |
| Its been eight years since then
And I still cry.
I wish I was strong enough for them
But I wasnt and I ignored it.
I finally understand.
And I cry for it.
For all the memorys that break my heart.
I love you.
I always will no matter what | |
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Run BB Run
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| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Sat May 07, 2011 11:47 pm | |
| Multiple Topics merged. Only one thread/author. | |
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Moonwalker12
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Age : 28
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Fri May 13, 2011 1:02 pm | |
| Its bad...
when you are scared of a day
13 is a horrible number
And on a friday, Im f*cking screwed
So what do I do?
Screw it Ill go down swinging | |
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*~Dreamer~*
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| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Fri May 13, 2011 11:01 pm | |
| beautiful poems. sounds like something from open-mic (on this other poetry site, open-mic is a section where people just come up with poems on the spot).
It flows freely, and it conveys what needs to be.
Just wondering, what did you do that make you fear friday the 13th?
we also have that practice here about friday the 13th being an unlucky day and all that. Still, 7, 13 i've never feared any of these. Because I love magic. I wish i can harness real magic one day. /grins/ and then I can ace my exams without studying /evil cackle. ><
Just joking. But yeah, I like how you take a light-hearted approach... or maybe not?
'I'll go down swinging'... I read it both ways. sounds like a play with words. One's the swing at the playground, the other a swing at the bar. Life's too short to drink bad wine. So always pick the best of the best wines to drink. >< | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Fri May 13, 2011 11:15 pm | |
| lol well when I was in 1rst grade I broke my arm on friday the 13th and ever since that every friday the 13th something bad has happen to me. Like tonight at the dance | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Sat May 14, 2011 2:38 am | |
| well... maybe you could try (on the next friday the thirteenth) pushing out all the fear and negativity and try to harness some hope? maybe something good will happen?  | |
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| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Sat May 14, 2011 2:47 am | |
| By the way, I'd greatly appreciate if you could kindly lend your talent in poetry to my competition. Link's in my signature.
Looking forward to your participation! | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Sat May 14, 2011 12:31 pm | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Tue May 17, 2011 1:07 pm | |
| I shrink away from the light..
I dont want to go.
I want to stay.
With you, with him..
No one can make me go.
Or tell me what to feel..
Only me, forever only me... | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My poems (There bad) Wed May 18, 2011 10:30 am | |
| everytime I close my eyes I cry
Fear fills my heart.
My soul...
I cant escepe from the nightmares no matter how hard I try.
So I stop fighting.
I let those nightmares destroy me..
Destroy my sanity.
My peace.
I wish I had one night of peaceful sleep
Just one....
But no..
Something is warning me.
But what? | |
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