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 The Heart's Never Alone

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Sak-Chan
Trying to stop war
Trying to stop war
Sak-Chan


Female Taurus Rat
Age : 28
Posts : 77791
Location : First Year of collage here I come
Join date : 2010-02-25

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Name: Maria Silversong
Age: 16
Affinities : Air. death.
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PostSubject: The Heart's Never Alone    The Heart's Never Alone EmptyMon Sep 20, 2010 1:02 am
The story The Heart's Never Alone can be found

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ohh keep going.
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Ivy
Loving the feeling
Loving the feeling
Ivy


Female Sagittarius Buffalo
Age : 26
Posts : 1285
Location : Falling Off A Cliff
Join date : 2009-12-07

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Name: Carter
Age: 15
Affinities : able to take other people's affinities
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PostSubject: Re: The Heart's Never Alone    The Heart's Never Alone EmptySun Oct 24, 2010 2:35 am
i like it write more
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PostSubject: Re: The Heart's Never Alone    The Heart's Never Alone EmptySun Oct 24, 2010 10:22 am
Nice!
Keep writing Wink
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Ivy
Loving the feeling
Loving the feeling
Ivy


Female Sagittarius Buffalo
Age : 26
Posts : 1285
Location : Falling Off A Cliff
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Name: Carter
Age: 15
Affinities : able to take other people's affinities
The Heart's Never Alone Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Heart's Never Alone    The Heart's Never Alone EmptyTue Oct 26, 2010 6:30 pm
I like it
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*~Dreamer~*
Combining your affinities to save the day
Combining your affinities to save the day
*~Dreamer~*


Female Gemini Pig
Age : 29
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Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness.
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PostSubject: Re: The Heart's Never Alone    The Heart's Never Alone EmptyFri Oct 29, 2010 11:12 am
Keep writing! Because you'll get it from me if you stop /cracks knuckles/

I like this story because it stands out among all the others I've read. I noticed the used of a wider range of vocab. The idea of recalling, and also the use of different formating to make the story more interesting. Good!
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http://www.fictionpress.com/u/690245/
Ivy
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Loving the feeling
Ivy


Female Sagittarius Buffalo
Age : 26
Posts : 1285
Location : Falling Off A Cliff
Join date : 2009-12-07

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Name: Carter
Age: 15
Affinities : able to take other people's affinities
The Heart's Never Alone Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Heart's Never Alone    The Heart's Never Alone EmptyMon Nov 01, 2010 12:26 pm
i like it
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Ivy
Loving the feeling
Loving the feeling
Ivy


Female Sagittarius Buffalo
Age : 26
Posts : 1285
Location : Falling Off A Cliff
Join date : 2009-12-07

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Name: Carter
Age: 15
Affinities : able to take other people's affinities
The Heart's Never Alone Empty
PostSubject: The Heart's Never Alone   The Heart's Never Alone EmptyTue Nov 02, 2010 12:27 am
Okay so it goes like this
Jason=Air
Chris=Fire
Carrisa=Earth
And The Main Character Who's Name I Cannot Remember=Water
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SerenityLynn
Discovering you have an affinity for Air
Discovering you have an affinity for Air
SerenityLynn


Female Pisces Goat
Age : 33
Posts : 292
Location : Sitting down and on the computer erp a derp!
Join date : 2010-09-17

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Name: Serenity
Age: 19
Affinities : Fire
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PostSubject: Re: The Heart's Never Alone    The Heart's Never Alone EmptyTue Jan 11, 2011 9:09 pm
Is anyone reading my story cause if not i'm going to stop writing cause it would be kinda pointless to keep on writing
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