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Katie-la Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
Age : 27 Posts : 862 Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet Name: Michiko Age: 15 Affinities : Sound, Water
| Subject: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:34 pm | |
| The story Doors (beginning of the story) can be found HereThe story Door [Still undergoing revision and continuations. Please Support] (continuing of the story) Can be found HereOMG I LOVE IT! *fangirl scream* AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! Greatgreatgreat! zOMG. That's like the best story you have EVER written and posted on this site. *trust me, I'd know* | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:36 pm | |
| I thought you would criticize for the lack of information because nothing is mentioned about the whereabouts of the door and all that.
But I'm in the midst of making a new prologue. And I'm also editing part 2 of the story. I'm halfway through now. ((: | |
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Katie-la Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
Age : 27 Posts : 862 Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet Name: Michiko Age: 15 Affinities : Sound, Water
| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:39 pm | |
| Well, I figured you were trying to keep ya guessing. Like...Have you ever read Graceling? You notice at the beginning you had no clue wat was going on. But in the next chapter you were like HOLY CRAP! That's what it meant. AWESOME!!! Kinda like that. So right noaw I am just waiting for that.
Plus, I don't criticize if I see midst of construction and beta-ing....Even if all critics and reviews are welcome, because THEN I won't know if you were already fixing that and I would be wasting my brainpower on stuff like this when I could be downstairs making pizza-bagels... Lawl jkjk <3 | |
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Ivy Loving the feeling
Age : 26 Posts : 1285 Location : Falling Off A Cliff Join date : 2009-12-07
Character sheet Name: Carter Age: 15 Affinities : able to take other people's affinities
| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Sun Oct 17, 2010 4:29 pm | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Mon Oct 18, 2010 6:44 am | |
| Hey Ivy, thanks for reviewing (:
Btw, it seems like you haven't visited your gmail? I've done some editing. I just want to make sure you're active on the story, so that I don't waste time editing a dead story. (Happened to other stories I've beta-ed. Lol. they just to another world, leaving me feeling like a dumbas. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Mon Oct 18, 2010 11:13 am | |
| Prologue is up! Please read and review! | |
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Ivy Loving the feeling
Age : 26 Posts : 1285 Location : Falling Off A Cliff Join date : 2009-12-07
Character sheet Name: Carter Age: 15 Affinities : able to take other people's affinities
| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:00 pm | |
| the prologue is really awesome and im not just saying that | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Tue Oct 19, 2010 6:51 am | |
| Thanks Ivy! That's encouraging (: | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Tue Oct 19, 2010 11:49 am | |
| I will still continue to post, but not as frequently... Especially for this story.
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*PrincessOfDarkness* Trying to stop war
Age : 30 Posts : 12345 Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know Join date : 2010-04-24
Character sheet Name: alyson Age: 16 Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:03 am | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Fri Oct 22, 2010 5:40 am | |
| Thanks a lot (:
Another update in the next post (almost thought I wouldn't be able to finish this editing). | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Fri Oct 29, 2010 10:44 am | |
| [erm... no one interested...?] | |
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Katie-la Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
Age : 27 Posts : 862 Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet Name: Michiko Age: 15 Affinities : Sound, Water
| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Mon Nov 01, 2010 12:32 am | |
| I'm really curious of Mr. Z's (my nickname for Zoruik) past...
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Katie-la Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
Age : 27 Posts : 862 Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet Name: Michiko Age: 15 Affinities : Sound, Water
| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Mon Nov 01, 2010 12:33 am | |
| OPERATION LOVE!!!! YESYESYESS~! (sorry it needed to be seperated...it gets its own post) | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Mon Nov 01, 2010 2:06 am | |
| I don't know if you've watched Down With Love, but when you said 'Mr. Z' I was reminded of the mysterious character in the drama serial.
By the way, I'm establishing the characters slowly. So the background and all that filters in slowly as the story progresses. I'm still editing O: You're so fast OO:
And your signature: You claim lee min ho?? ZOMG I love his newest drama, Personal Preference.
Well it too me a while too, to get what you meant by the second post there. Proposal Daikusen is loved!!! I love Yamapi!!! <333333 But I still love Jrock bands more XDXD
< My favourite Jpop singer/ actor is Kamenashi!!!!!!!! ZOMG ZOMG ZOMG ZOMG ZOMG. I should have changed that drama serial to Yamashita Nadeshiko Shichi Henge XDXDXD <3333333333333333333333333333333 ZOMG. That's a hit man, a hit! With both Kame and Tegoshi in it ZOMG a total hit. Tegoshi KAWAIDESNE~~~~~!!!!!!!!>
Alright, it's time I should stop my fangirling XDXD But yeah, pm me anything about them and I can go on forever. tee-hee~ | |
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Katie-la Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
Age : 27 Posts : 862 Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet Name: Michiko Age: 15 Affinities : Sound, Water
| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Mon Nov 01, 2010 11:48 am | |
| OMG I'm working on Personal Prefernece right now...And I'm so nervous, because every fie minutes In Hee (HATE HER) is up t something...And professor Park is going to be judging the competition...AND AGH!! I can't take this drama...It's so...dramatic. lol It's almost as crazy (but awesome) as Shining Inheritance.
Ive never watched Down With Love, but I just looked it up...And I think that's my next hit after Personal Preference...Have you ever watched Sungkyunkwan Scandal...OMG I love that one...Of course the lead guy is as cute as the dude who never gets the girl...So I was kinda sad about that lol
PROPOSAL DAIKUSEN IS LOVED <3
P.S. Speaking of other news, What do you mean I'm fast? lol
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Tue Nov 02, 2010 5:26 am | |
| You're so fast at reading my story. O: But no worries on that hehehehe. I'm done with part VII editing WAKAKAKA.
Anyway, you sure do watch a lot. I don't I watched quite a deal, but they were a jdrama and and and... I skipped through a lot of it.
and yeah personal preference lee min ho zomg. XDXD Share him with me (:
You probably would snap at me for even making a conversation with him heh. But it's okay~ I have my Kame, Tegoshi, Ueda, MaoNyan, Ryuutaro ((((((:
I've many, many, many... Endless. I love them all.
Tego sampai!!!! He's so cute XDXD | |
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Katie-la Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
Age : 27 Posts : 862 Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet Name: Michiko Age: 15 Affinities : Sound, Water
| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Tue Nov 02, 2010 6:34 pm | |
| I'm getting excited now!!!! Tee-hee-hee!!! (I think we gotted deleted...sorry for the spam xD)
I wish Jade was a bit special...Poor thing must feel outta the loop...Well, if she actually chooses to believe in the first place. I think you should put a bit more dialouge and explanation during the sis and sis meeting. (first critic *WOOT!*) | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:28 am | |
| Hi whichever mod you are who sorta think you were doing a good job of cleaning up threads, I'm the OWNER of this thread.
Very simple reason why I'm posting here -- I want a reason as to why you deleted them.
Thank you. *~Dreamer~*
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Nightchild Mod
Age : 27 Posts : 16373 Location : Sweetie, I don't think so Join date : 2010-01-18
Character sheet Name: Destiny Jez Fall Age: 13 Affinities : Can't miss what I aim at, Spirit and Earth..
| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:01 am | |
| I wasn't the one who did this but what was deleted? The comments or the story? | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:02 am | |
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Nightchild Mod
Age : 27 Posts : 16373 Location : Sweetie, I don't think so Join date : 2010-01-18
Character sheet Name: Destiny Jez Fall Age: 13 Affinities : Can't miss what I aim at, Spirit and Earth..
| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:05 am | |
| Okay...I don't know who did that, but right now the story section is under construction. We are spliting all the topics so that when you read the story you don't have to go through 2 pages of comments just to get to the next part. There should be a link to the comments on here...if you go into the comments section and look for the name of your sotry the comments migh still be there. Or else post it here and I'll look into it.... | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:10 am | |
| Thanks I've just gone there... Alright, my story is there, but the comments...? Nothing is there anymore... All the comments are just... gone.
And the mod who did the splitting should have left a post on here at least??
To add on, all the posts on there, how long ago was it... The prologue has already been changed a long long time ago. And I name my chapters with roman numbers.... On that page, only one part was numbered and it's not in roman numbering.
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Nightchild Mod
Age : 27 Posts : 16373 Location : Sweetie, I don't think so Join date : 2010-01-18
Character sheet Name: Destiny Jez Fall Age: 13 Affinities : Can't miss what I aim at, Spirit and Earth..
| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:15 am | |
| Yeah...okay that's so weird...if you go back into the story section and then to page five (the last page) and click on one of the stories there, you can scroll down to the end of the first post and there should be a *Comments .com link* there. If you go to that link you should come directly to the comments, and on the first comment it should stand the story (whatever it's called) can be found *here*. If you press here you return to the story. It should be the same way here...I honestly don't know what has happened, but if the story is there that's good... | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: Door [still undergoing revision and continuation. Please..] Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:20 am | |
| Wait... this is so confusing! why do I have two threads in the comment section? o.o
One has the story on it (with outdated prologue and unnumbered chapters) and the other has some comments. Which should I be looking at? O.O | |
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