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*~Dreamer~*
Combining your affinities to save the day
Combining your affinities to save the day
*~Dreamer~*


Female Gemini Pig
Age : 28
Posts : 2240
Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness.
Join date : 2009-07-14

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PostSubject: Comments - Trust   Comments - Trust EmptySat Sep 19, 2009 6:02 am

The story Trust can be found Here


This is good, just that the beginning is a little boring. The rest got better.
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http://www.fictionpress.com/u/690245/
ishane
Freaking out
Freaking out
ishane


Female Leo Pig
Age : 28
Posts : 74
Location : anywhere
Join date : 2009-07-21

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PostSubject: Re: Comments - Trust   Comments - Trust EmptySat Sep 19, 2009 3:30 pm

Oh, that must have taken a lot of work. But it's really good! Please continue!!
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alice in wonderland:)
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Female Sagittarius Dog
Age : 29
Posts : 57
Location : nowhere in particular...
Join date : 2009-07-15

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Name: Alice
Age: I lost count...:)
Affinities : Visions

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PostSubject: Comments - Trust   Comments - Trust EmptySun Sep 20, 2009 12:00 am

yay thank you! I'll try to imptove the beginning
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