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Angel of Music
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 28
Posts : 45811
Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about
Join date : 2009-12-08
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Name: Sierrah
Age:
Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| | Subject: Comments - Gone! Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:04 pm | |
| The story Gone! can be found Hereohhh.....I love it keep writing more please | |
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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
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Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:49 pm | |
| - VampHighPriestess555 wrote:
- ohhh.....I love it keep writing more please
Thankyou I will post each chapter I do Ive neally finished the 2 chapter I will post it tonight | |
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:50 pm | |
| - Ageless Vampire wrote:
- Rach, I think you have a great start! Keep going with it and see where it takes you.
*hugs*
-Ageless 
Ps. Don't worry about spelling u can always go back later and fix that... (I have too all the time!)
Check out one of my stories too & tell me what ya think! *grins* Thankyou!! Sure I will cheak now. Blessed Be xo | |
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Mon Jan 25, 2010 12:27 am | |
| I will post the 2 chapter soon | |
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Angel of Music
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 45811
Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about
Join date : 2009-12-08
Character sheet
Name: Sierrah
Age:
Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Mon Jan 25, 2010 12:57 am | |
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Mon Jan 25, 2010 1:01 am | |
| - VampHighPriestess555 wrote:
- yay cant wait
I will get off and finish it now and post it in about 20mins if not tonight becasue going for a walk in half hour. | |
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Mon Jan 25, 2010 4:28 am | |
| By the way AGLAIA Means "splendour, beauty" | |
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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
Character sheet
Name:
Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Mon Jan 25, 2010 5:55 am | |
| - Ageless Vampire wrote:
- I think its great so far, here are some suggestions since you wanted help...
Something that confused me was this part:
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- *edit your post and this will go away* Sophie why should have asked that question dumb, dumb, dumb.
Also, I think making your dialogue more spaced out would be helpful too...like this:
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- I took a deep breath before going in...
Sophie!! A deep sexy voice came from a chair.
Hello? I said a bit confused.
I’ve been waiting for you Sophie; you are now one of us you have to following the way of our goddess Artemis. Hope that helps! Can't wait to read more!
*cheers*
-Ageless Thankyou this has help me soooo much!!! *edit your post and this will go away* Sophie why should have asked that question dumb, dumb, dumb. I got rid of that! and I fixd the rest! Blessed Be xox | |
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Angel of Music
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 45811
Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about
Join date : 2009-12-08
Character sheet
Name: Sierrah
Age:
Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Mon Jan 25, 2010 6:32 pm | |
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Mon Jan 25, 2010 10:00 pm | |
| - VampHighPriestess555 wrote:
- i love it!
Thankyou! I will start writting to third chapter soon | |
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Angel of Music
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 45811
Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about
Join date : 2009-12-08
Character sheet
Name: Sierrah
Age:
Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Mon Jan 25, 2010 10:59 pm | |
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Tue Jan 26, 2010 12:31 am | |
| - VampHighPriestess555 wrote:
- yay cant wait
lol thankyou | |
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Tue Jan 26, 2010 10:49 pm | |
| i'm half way through writting the 3rd chapter | |
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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
Character sheet
Name:
Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Tue Jan 26, 2010 10:56 pm | |
| - Ageless Vampire wrote:
- *cheers*
U go girl! Can't wait til you get it posted!
-Ageless Have you written the 3rd chapter of your book? Rachxox | |
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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
Character sheet
Name:
Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Tue Jan 26, 2010 11:04 pm | |
| - Ageless Vampire wrote:
- Nope, started but that's about it *pouts* oh wells, when I'm feeling more creative I'll work on it!
-Ageless
Ps. Check your friends requests in your profile! *smiles* ok thankyou xox | |
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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
Character sheet
Name:
Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Thu Jan 28, 2010 2:06 am | |
| - Ageless Vampire wrote:
- Can't wait to read your 3rd chapter, I wrote some of mine today! Where's yours?
*waits patiently*
-Ageless sorry at school can only do it at night (school dose like vamp books) | |
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Angel of Music
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 45811
Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about
Join date : 2009-12-08
Character sheet
Name: Sierrah
Age:
Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Thu Jan 28, 2010 2:20 am | |
| thats one reason I dont like school, i cant write my story there and if i try writing it on paper the teachers think its other class homework | |
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Thu Jan 28, 2010 2:23 am | |
| - VampHighPriestess555 wrote:
- thats one reason I dont like school, i cant write my story there and if i try writing it on paper the teachers think its other class homework
I know! And if you get caught she makes you read it out in front of the class adn then she will give me a "B" | |
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Angel of Music
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 45811
Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about
Join date : 2009-12-08
Character sheet
Name: Sierrah
Age:
Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Thu Jan 28, 2010 2:27 am | |
| my teacher didnt make me read it out loud she just said put it away or i'll give u a behavier ticket but ugh teachers r annoying and when I get home I have homework so I cant post or right more | |
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Rach
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Posts : 81
Location : House of Night
Join date : 2010-01-22
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Name:
Age:
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Gone! Thu Jan 28, 2010 2:28 am | |
| - VampHighPriestess555 wrote:
- my teacher didnt make me read it out loud she just said put it away or i'll give u a behavier ticket but ugh teachers r annoying and when I get home I have homework so I cant post or right more
ok byebye!! (It was my first day back) | |
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