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graciella
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| | Subject: Comments - Control Tue Dec 15, 2009 6:40 pm | |
| The story Control can be found Herethat is good | |
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Marked_by_Nyx
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Age : 27
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Location : Give me a cookie and I'll tell you
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Control Tue Dec 15, 2009 6:46 pm | |
| WOW!!
That is kind of scary!
I like it! Very... powerful.
Sort of reminds me of Dr. Jekyl and Mr. Hide.
Or is it the other way around?
Whatever. I like it!
Th climax could be him getting caught. | |
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graciella
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Control Thu Dec 17, 2009 10:43 pm | |
| very scary.
but also really good. | |
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Rachelle
Trying to break up a fight
 
Age : 31
Posts : 1642
Location : has write a paper, due tomorrow. I'll be on later.
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Control Fri Dec 25, 2009 5:17 am | |
| so I updated it, adding some more to the story and I turned it into class. Lets hope it works and I get a good grade!  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Control Fri Dec 25, 2009 7:05 am | |
| if that were an actual book id read it foe sure |
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graciella
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Control Fri Dec 25, 2009 5:06 pm | |
| me too u will get a good grade unless ur teacher doesn't like dark stories or something | |
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Rachelle
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Control Fri Dec 25, 2009 6:04 pm | |
| Then I should get a good grade, I would suggest therapy for her unless she wasn't just a big fan making us read Poe all the time! | |
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Marked_by_Nyx
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Control Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:47 pm | |
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graciella
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Control Fri Dec 25, 2009 10:35 pm | |
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Rachelle
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Control Sun Dec 27, 2009 12:19 am | |
| wow, discriptive replied, lol | |
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graciella
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| | Subject: Comments - Control Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:14 pm | |
| i know we can b so discriptive. lol | |
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