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*~Dreamer~*
Combining your affinities to save the day
  
Age : 29
Posts : 2240
Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness.
Join date : 2009-07-14
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| | Subject: Comments - Toxic Thu Jul 30, 2009 6:29 am | |
| The story Toxic can be found HereYour story is good, just that it has a boring typical composition start. Could help to change that part. ^^ Waiting for more. | |
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Immortal Love
Being chosen by a kitty
 
Age : 36
Posts : 217
Location : NewYork Boring City
Join date : 2009-07-20
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Name: Isabella
Age: 21
Affinities : Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Toxic Thu Jul 30, 2009 1:45 pm | |
| id like to see more cant wait to read whats next | |
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Immortal Love
Being chosen by a kitty
Age : 36
Posts : 217
Location : NewYork Boring City
Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet
Name: Isabella
Age: 21
Affinities : Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Toxic Thu Jul 30, 2009 4:53 pm | |
| i cant believe you stopped the story there i want more | |
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Immortal Love
Being chosen by a kitty
Age : 36
Posts : 217
Location : NewYork Boring City
Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet
Name: Isabella
Age: 21
Affinities : Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Toxic Fri Jul 31, 2009 12:57 am | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Toxic Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:04 am | |
| I love it, this is really good, please write more |
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Immortal Love
Being chosen by a kitty
Age : 36
Posts : 217
Location : NewYork Boring City
Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet
Name: Isabella
Age: 21
Affinities : Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Toxic Sun Aug 02, 2009 12:35 am | |
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Veronica
Freaking out
 
Age : 30
Posts : 60
Location : United States
Join date : 2009-08-18
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Name: veronica
Age: 15
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Toxic Sat Aug 22, 2009 4:37 pm | |
| this story is really good. cant wait to read more. | |
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Katie-la
Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
 
Age : 27
Posts : 862
Join date : 2009-07-20
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Name: Michiko
Age: 15
Affinities : Sound, Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Toxic Sun Aug 23, 2009 12:28 pm | |
| Thank you!  | |
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ishane
Freaking out
Age : 29
Posts : 74
Location : anywhere
Join date : 2009-07-21
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Toxic Sun Aug 23, 2009 10:41 pm | |
| This is great! I can't wait for more. | |
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Immortal Love
Being chosen by a kitty
Age : 36
Posts : 217
Location : NewYork Boring City
Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet
Name: Isabella
Age: 21
Affinities : Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Toxic Sun Aug 23, 2009 11:57 pm | |
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XxLove_Me_Night_RosesxX
Attending your first ritual
Age : 29
Posts : 175
Join date : 2009-07-24
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Name: Elsvyr
Age: 14
Affinities : all musical instuments, air
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Toxic Mon Aug 24, 2009 4:38 pm | |
| keeps getting better, can't wait for more | |
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*~Dreamer~*
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29
Posts : 2240
Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness.
Join date : 2009-07-14
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Toxic Wed Sep 09, 2009 1:24 pm | |
| Wonderful plot. Nice twist with the werewolf part. It's cool.
I love the part where she realizes she's a werewolf and then, the guy disappears with a pop.
and you left the story there? Time to continue! | |
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*~Dreamer~*
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29
Posts : 2240
Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness.
Join date : 2009-07-14
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Name:
Age:
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Toxic Sun Sep 20, 2009 3:09 am | |
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Katie-la
Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
Age : 27
Posts : 862
Join date : 2009-07-20
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Name: Michiko
Age: 15
Affinities : Sound, Water
| | Subject: Comments - Toxic Sun Sep 20, 2009 3:32 am | |
| It is hard to put together right now! What I'm writing doesn't seem to want to cooperate with me or the beginning!
So it's pretty hard! | |
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