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Great beginning...can't wait till you write the rest.

I like it!
very dramatic.

Fantastic start!

thanx for likeing it

write more later

its coming along very very nicely!
Believe in your writing and in yourself! I'll be here reading it whenever you post!

thanx u guys for likeing it.

I like it. It's really really good.

Wow..It;s really good =]
It's interesting although I thik there's one bit where you change from writing in a 3rd person perspective to a 1st but then you go back to 3rd again...I didn't expect the bit about her dad
Keep writing

k thanxs i will it is nice to hear that it is good from someone that is also a good writer

=] Thanks I guess

that was supposed to be a compliment
i said that u are a good writer

Thank you =]
I would hope I am lol...I want to be a journalist and eventually an author...like a proper author..none of the co-written stuff I have published at the minute

<3 it

thanks vitani for commenting

ur welcome

u r the only one that commented

*looks back* huh so i was

yeppers do u know anyone that would like the story if so could u tell them to read it pleaz

k

thanksies mommy

Can you please use ""? Thanks. That can make it easier to understand and maybe you could have Joey drive you to the B+G club. You left your key... buried in your yard! IDK maybe that would work.

i dont know what i am gonna do i have such writers block

i love it grace

thanks bridget

O.O her dad?!