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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
 Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
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Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
| | Subject: Comments - Ember Sat Dec 12, 2009 7:41 pm | |
| The story Ember can be found HereI think you should write more...you've got an interesting start but where does it go?
We want to know!
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Marked_by_Nyx
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 27
Posts : 36866
Location : Give me a cookie and I'll tell you
Join date : 2009-11-04
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Ember Sat Dec 12, 2009 7:46 pm | |
| YES WE DO!! I like it.
Sparky! | |
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Veronica
Freaking out
Age : 29
Posts : 60
Location : United States
Join date : 2009-08-18
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Name: veronica
Age: 15
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Ember Mon Dec 14, 2009 9:02 pm | |
| sounds great so far. cant wait to read more.  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - Ember Fri Dec 25, 2009 7:11 am | |
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twizzlers
Accidentally burning down a tree with Fire
 
Age : 28
Posts : 501
Location : somewhere warm ^_^
Join date : 2009-07-26
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Name: Rhein
Age: 16
Affinities : water, telekineses, teleportation , singing
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Ember Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:42 pm | |
| It's cute, but I dont get why they get together at the beginning of the story, I mean why cant they get to know each other first... but the story is great, totally plz write more. It's interesting, and give more detail.
KEEP GOING!! =D | |
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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
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Name:
Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Ember Tue Feb 16, 2010 5:27 am | |
| *waiting on the weird things* | |
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**__aphrodite __**
Freaking out
Age : 28
Posts : 58
Location : hon
Join date : 2009-11-24
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Name: Shelbyredbird
Age: 14
Affinities : EARTH,SPIRIT
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Ember Tue Feb 16, 2010 6:12 am | |
| yeah tell us how the dream date went | |
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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
Character sheet
Name:
Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
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Utopias' Girl
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 27
Posts : 14151
Location : In the dark corner with him, who says i have to behave?
Join date : 2009-10-10
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Name: Reva
Age: lost track
Affinities : Shadows (Underworld), empath, wolves/bats, writing
| | Subject: Comments - Ember Sat Mar 13, 2010 12:29 pm | |
| thanks i have a long way to go yet... | |
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