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gamer
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Mon Dec 27, 2010 6:23 am | |
| i wrote these after a break up so yeah
all alone i cry
all because one lie
theres nothing left to do
because im all alone without you
beauty as the night
mystical as the dawn
oh how i wish to see it again
the only time
i didnt know would be the last time
you left me here standing
now im sticking the landing
without you im nothing
is that what i am nothing
i know they suck but yeah
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Mon Dec 27, 2010 9:53 am | |
| no they dont suck there good. | |
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*~Dreamer~*
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29
Posts : 2240
Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness.
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| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:16 am | |
| it isn't too bad. But i'd like to throw at you the idea of using synonyms instead of repeating the word. i like the flow to it. Could be a pretty piece of song if it was a little longer. | |
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Dan'sPrincess<3
Seeing the Tracker
Age : 30
Posts : 15
Location : Emerald City
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| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Mon Dec 27, 2010 3:15 pm | |
| It's not bad. It's pretty good. It's just kinda sad. Dx
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Mon Dec 27, 2010 5:39 pm | |
| @MoonWalker12 thanks
@*~Dreamer~* okay
@Dan'sPrincess<3 thanks and i wrote it after a break up so yeah its sad | |
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Caristiona
Head Mod
Age : 31
Posts : 31810
Location : O.o Why do you want to know?
Join date : 2010-03-31
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Name: Lykinia
Age: 16
Affinities : Air & Water, and the color orange. :)
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Mon Dec 27, 2010 5:42 pm | |
| Thats amazing. Sorry about the break up. | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Mon Dec 27, 2010 7:49 pm | |
| thanks and it wasnt meant to be so im getting over it. | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Mon Dec 27, 2010 10:01 pm | |
| You should right some more | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Tue Dec 28, 2010 12:18 pm | |
| i might if something else comes to mind | |
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milly
Walking back to my dorm
Age : 32
Posts : 3792
Location : On top of the world
Join date : 2010-10-21
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Name: Milly
Age: depends on the year
Affinities : None that she was aware of.
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Tue Dec 28, 2010 2:52 pm | |
| that was good. too bad for your inspiration though  sry about that. hope you feel better:) | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Tue Dec 28, 2010 6:08 pm | |
| thanks. and its alright im starting to forget about it. | |
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milly
Walking back to my dorm
Age : 32
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Location : On top of the world
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Name: Milly
Age: depends on the year
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| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Wed Dec 29, 2010 2:04 pm | |
|  that's goo. keep up the good work lol you should post more | |
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little miss nightmare
Being chosen by a kitty
Age : 30
Posts : 226
Location : in my purple and black coffin
Join date : 2009-12-31
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Name: little miss nightmare
Age: 16
Affinities : fire, night time, ice, seeing into the past
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Wed Dec 29, 2010 2:38 pm | |
| i like the first one the best! | |
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milly
Walking back to my dorm
Age : 32
Posts : 3792
Location : On top of the world
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Name: Milly
Age: depends on the year
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| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Thu Dec 30, 2010 2:17 am | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
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Posts : 31096
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
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| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Thu Dec 30, 2010 6:12 am | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Thu Dec 30, 2010 7:54 pm | |
| some more poems
the snow falls
as i stand here listening to the calls
theres no one left to do
but stand here with you
my tears slip down my face
stuck here in my haze
i look around for you
but all thats left is the blue | |
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Moonwalker12
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Age : 28
Posts : 21316
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:35 pm | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
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Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:55 am | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
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Posts : 21316
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:57 am | |
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Crystal Rose
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Age : 32
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Name: Star Light
Age: 18
Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Sun Jan 02, 2011 4:40 pm | |
| those poems are great you should post more you have a hidden talent that is waiting to bloom | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
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Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Sun Jan 02, 2011 7:40 pm | |
| thanks but they cant be that good. | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:44 pm | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
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Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Mon Jan 03, 2011 12:22 pm | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Mon Jan 03, 2011 5:25 pm | |
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Crystal Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
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Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved
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Name: Star Light
Age: 18
Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry(since im told its not crappy :P) Mon Jan 03, 2011 5:34 pm | |
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