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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
  
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:33 pm | |
| Trust...
You hold me close and promise me forever.
How long will forever last this time?
Maybe you want this.
Maybe you mean it this time, but how am I supposed to know?
You've promised her forever too, but did that last?
No, it didn't.
If it had, you wouldn't be holding me this tight.
What's wrong with me?
Why can't I believe you?
The same reasons, over and over again.
I haven't listened to anyone since the last time I was promised forever, not even when she told me he was a cheater.
Maybe this is it...
Maybe I'll believe you...
Just hold onto me.
I've decided to be with you.
I guess I have to trust you... | |
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
 
Age : 28
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:12 pm | |
| it is really good sounds like you were going through a hard time when you were writing it... i like it  | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:24 pm | |
| thanks!its not neccisarily a hard time 4 me just a confusion ive got bout him...but im pretty sure ive got it cleared up now i just had 2 find somethin 2 write bout.thank u 4 ur comment!  | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:27 pm | |
| o and p.s. i will try 2 have a new poem on here everyday im on!hope u check em out! But I might not have them as quick as i plan.
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 28
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:33 pm | |
| your a good writer better then me anyway haha you can check my poems out and comment on em if you want. i would love to read more of your poems | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:34 pm | |
| ok kool ill look at urs!im sure theyre amazing! | |
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 28
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:36 pm | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:39 pm | |
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 28
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:47 pm | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:50 pm | |
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 28
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:53 pm | |
| i have three poems three more poems but they r under the one that is called the perfect man | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:54 pm | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:48 pm | |
| All For You
I'd do absolutely anything for you
I'd jump off of the highest cliff just to catch you
I'd walk around the world and back just to see your smiling face
I'd lie to the president just to keep you out of trouble
I'd tell your grandparents how much I truely love you just for thier exception
I'd pray to God everyday of my life that you hold me close forever and ever
And, Most importantly:
I'd give my one and only phone call to you when they take me away to the madhouse because I'm so crazy in love with you | |
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Midnight Demon
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 27
Posts : 23496
Location : Take a guess ; )
Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet
Name: Rosalina
Age: 15
Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Thu Feb 03, 2011 11:58 pm | |
| oh my gosh your poems are super duper good sis. keep writing. | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:57 pm | |
| Thank u sista!!ur so nice! this reminds me....i need 2 write a new 1 4 2day... | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:09 pm | |
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Out in this old town there ain't a crown sittin on a throne
There's an old hound with floppy ears on the porch
And a sheriff warning a group of teens not to get caught tp-ing and who to get good
There's a little boy rolling in the mud
And a mother complaining about how her son is in his Sunday's Best
There's the good ole' grandpas sittin' in the diner disscussin' the old days
And a waitress slowly taking thier orders
There's our gang gettin' ready to load up and cause a whole lotta trouble
And there's a tank full of gas in a flat bed Ford ready to roll
There's you convincing my father that we'll be safe and be home on time
And there's a shotgun on Daddy's lap, saying we'll be home early with no hearts broken today
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liz
Temporary Mod
 
Age : 31
Posts : 2787
Location : flying through space and time in the Tardis
Join date : 2010-11-30
Character sheet
Name: Liz Valle
Age: 17
Affinities : Fire, Earth and Spirit, Reading minds and can become invisible when feeling in danger
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Sun Feb 06, 2011 4:47 am | |
| Awesome! your poems are good, keep writing :DD | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:14 pm | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:15 pm | |
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 28
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Tue Feb 08, 2011 1:58 pm | |
| ok and no problam and i would love to read it when you put it up | |
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 28
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Tue Feb 08, 2011 2:01 pm | |
| that one isb really good keep writing | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Sun Feb 20, 2011 4:35 pm | |
| Sing a little louder
Cheer a little longer
Smile more often
Speak only the truth, even when it hurts to
Treat others with respect
Dont tick off daddy's little girl
If u cant play with the big dogs, sit on the porch
Cant stand me then sit the heck down
Dont take things personally
You only get bullied when ppl are jealous
Im just sayin | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:21 am | |
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Tue Feb 22, 2011 8:26 pm | |
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 28
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25
Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think) Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:07 pm | |
| omg i like the last one keep writing sis | |
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