My Poems (im a newbie poet so tell me what u think)

Leave me alone.
I dont care anymore.
Go tell her you love her.
I know you do.
You kissed.
I wasn't there though, was I?
Yea.
Last Friday must've been good for you.
Bet you didnt know i was back in town, huh?
You dont know i know.
Wait until tommarrow.
You'll see.
They all will see...

Promises Promises

Promise me forever. I dare you.
I know you already have so many times before, and I know you mean it.
You don't like him, and I can tell.
You know what he did to me.
You promise me you never will.
And I believe you.
I don't ever think you'd cheat.
And I know you'd beat his butt if he trys anything funny.
He wants me back.
But I want you more.

I'm Not Coming Back

You thought you were so high and mighty
Look at you now
You sit alone and think about what you did
You say you're sorry about what you did
I know that you aren't though
You're just sorry that you've been caught
I'm not coming back baby
Maybe she'll give in to your deep blue eyes, your sorry smile
But as for me, forget it honey
You blew your chance
I saw you with her
We both know that I'm not stupid
I can put two and two together
You were selfish and I'm over you
So go on with your life but don't you dare try to get me back because I won't
Promises are made to be broken
Guess they are when it comes to you

Sit and think, Sit and think
I'm imersed in my thoughts
This is so stupid
I can't believe this is happening to me
Why me?!
I don't want this!
None of it!
Can you help me?
No, I don't need it...
Maybe...
Ohh, I'm sorry!
Do you want to know what's wrong with me?
Why I'm so depressed?
Confused?
Unfocused?
Misunderstanding things?

You see, I just can't,
I'm mean I REALLY CAN'T

Find anything to write about and I'm wasting your time with this poem
But by the time you've had realized that you are wasting time
It'll be to late because you wanted to see how this ends
So I've wasted your time, and you're just gonna keep reading?
Well, suit yourself then
But you know what?
I'm to lazy to write much more,
So it looks like you're not getting back the minutes it took to read this
Sorry!
Well, I'm out now...
PEACE!

alrite i came up with this 1 in a DREAM so im sorry if it sux

Like A Candle
Out like a light
I go to bed thinking why me?
Like a candle,
I've been used one too many times
I've been left in a corner
Forgotten
Lonely
And blown out

Ill never forget the way it feels
When you hold my hand
When you kiss my cheek
When you put your arm around my waist, over my shoulder
When we lay side by side in the grassy fields
When I hug you in the dark, and no one's watching
When we stare into each others eyes when we're "watching" a movie
When we play basketball and you don't let me win
When you try to pick me up but I squirm away
When you try to kiss me, but I playfully push you away, making it a game
When you give me your favorite hoodie to wear, and it smells just like you
When I run to you crying, and you ask "who's butt do i need to kick today, Babe?"
When I bury my head in your shoulder when it gets to tough
When you whisper "I love you more than anything in the world"
When you constantly remind me that you don't want to lose me
When you tell me you'll always love me, and I believe you
When you look at me like there's nowhere else you'd rather be than here with me
When you break out your guitar because you know it makes me melt when you play for me
When you laugh as I trip and fall but catch me before I hit the ground
When I know I love you most at the times when i just can't stand you, but I know I could never live without you
When I can go on and on about stuff that you used to do with me, but you now to with her.

Forever rest
Forever play
Forever's a test
Day by day

But do not worry
We'll make it through
Whatever the hurry
I always have you

I like that one. Quite alot

Parents are tough
They think that were in a hurry to grow up
They refuse to let us make mistakes
But how are we supposed to become old and wise?
How are we supposed to learn from our mistakes, if we never get to make them?
So heres what i say:
Let us be young!
Make mistakes to learn from!
Let us be us!
Let us be wild and free!
But most of all,
LET ME BE ME!

lol thanks

actually, your poem is quite true. to the eyes of teens.
but to the eyes of parents, it makes little sense. because all they want is for you to walk a paved route with little bends and rough falls. they only wish for the best for you. so they teach you not to take the tough route to growing up and they forbid you to near the route of mistakes because they know the pain, grief and agony of that route. they wish not for their beloved children to walk a route which can be avoided, a route which they can tell them of through words and lessons. teach them all the things needed to grow up, so that they they won't have to go through all the pain that they did when they were our age.
'let me be me'. that's what every teenager says. but really, which 'you' is you? we put on masquerades. we're just existences trying to find ourselves in this journey called life.

You can ignore all of the above and stick to how you feel, because THAT (all those above) is what i feel.

I think parents just want to protect us.

thank you very much for your opinion XD i appreciate it and yea, i see what you mean

time to do a little updating, friend. (:

What do you mean updating?

add more

i agree you are very good !!!!!!!!

Oh thanks! Sorry I'm not on here very much.. But I'll post some more today though!

Peace, yet another word lost in the floating clouds of day dreamers.
For people tell these dreamers to get thier heads out of the clouds, but I don't see why..
It is peaceful up there, in this place where imaginations can run free
The land where there are no limits, no boundaires
Why would anyone want to leave a place like that?
Certainly not me.
I have respect for those day dreamers
For they don't let others take them away from the place of dreams
The place of hope
The place of peace
I am proud to be among day dreamers today
Because without day dreamers, the world would be dull
There would be no excitement
And who wants that?

In the eyes of a child....

I see curiosity of the world around them
I see excitement of the fun they can have.
I see adventures they might have in thier future.
I see inventions and promises of the world forming around them.
I see craziness right before a sugar rush.
I see broken hearts and teardrops.
But of all the things I see in this baby's eyes, here in this delivery room,
The thing I like the most,
I see the love of this child's mother and family, and love it has for them, and will have in the future.

Broken and bruised
For you leave me in a corner
In the dark
What happened to me?
You did
You see, you've become heartless
You're a player
You fall for any girl nowdays
Which means one wasnt enough
So you left me there
Dont play with mind
I wish I could forget you
Wish I could let you go
Now that I think about it,
I don't truely think I was in love with YOU
I think I was in love with what you did instead
So farewell
So long
I'll find someone else, like you did
I'm moving on
A new dawn
I'll find someone better
I'll go and move on...

Life is a scary thing
But love is even worse
So live each minute of your life
With love towards those you know
And love to those you don't
With love for all those weirdys out there
With love to anyone who's done you wrong
And love to anyone who's done you right
Life is not a fight
To see who you can love most
Or who will love you the most
It's about learning to love anyone and anything with all your heart and soul.
No matter what.




With that being said, I juss wanna say that I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! XD

AWWWW I LOVE U MOMMY!!!!!!

Lol i love u too sissy!!

<3

These poems are pretty good I really like the way you write truth. That's what needs to be out here, truth. So many people are either scared of the truth or they know the truth but are in denial.

You write very well, sugar, and you should keep it up. Like my aunt says, you have a gift and now you should use it for good