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FleursDuMal77 Seeing the Tracker
Age : 30 Posts : 13 Location : In my field of paper flowers Join date : 2009-07-30
| Subject: FleursDuMal77's Poems. Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:42 pm | |
| So here goes nothing...
This is a free verse poem titled "Immortal Dark". It's about a fight between two opposing forces (represented here by Light and Dark) and the girl caught in between.
Rain falling The calm descending My little meadow green Forever ongoing
Eternal light Disappears into Immortal dark
Hope fading A strange peace settles The always enemies Prepare for the war
Eternal light Readying to fight Immortal dark
Tears cascading A suffocating hurt Melt into the Earth Hide behind the mask
Eternal light Ready to duel Immortal dark
The weapons fierce The quill and the scroll The wit and the tongue It’s nothing or all
Eternal light Marches to battle Immortal dark
Armies merging Fighting in my meadow Peace and calm gone Abandoned the field
Eternal light Defeated by Immortal dark
Light falls Dark prevails forever The life burned In my little meadow
Eternal light Slayed by Immortal dark
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alwaysamongashes Attending your first ritual
Age : 30 Posts : 190 Location : In a dark room Join date : 2009-07-28
Character sheet Name: marina Age: 15 Affinities : fire
| Subject: Re: FleursDuMal77's Poems. Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:57 pm | |
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FleursDuMal77 Seeing the Tracker
Age : 30 Posts : 13 Location : In my field of paper flowers Join date : 2009-07-30
| Subject: Re: FleursDuMal77's Poems. Thu Jul 30, 2009 11:02 pm | |
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alwaysamongashes Attending your first ritual
Age : 30 Posts : 190 Location : In a dark room Join date : 2009-07-28
Character sheet Name: marina Age: 15 Affinities : fire
| Subject: Re: FleursDuMal77's Poems. Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:15 am | |
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FleursDuMal77 Seeing the Tracker
Age : 30 Posts : 13 Location : In my field of paper flowers Join date : 2009-07-30
| Subject: Re: FleursDuMal77's Poems. Fri Jul 31, 2009 11:53 am | |
| Okay, this is a song called "Midnight's Company". I had tried to write a dark song and epic failed, and then I fixed it. Here's the revision:
Are you ready For the night? So full of darkness Devoid of all light?
I can see your fear In your eyes Deep down in your core Is where it resides
[Chorus:] Under the lightless moon The wind sings a soft tune The clouds are black and you will see Midnight's company
Trapped in the silence You won't last for long They're just waiting for Something to go wrong
[Chorus]
Do you want The wind's soft tune To be your Funeral song?
[Chorus] | |
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Dami-am Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 30 Posts : 86 Location : In the forest feeding Join date : 2009-07-13
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| Subject: Re: FleursDuMal77's Poems. Fri Jul 31, 2009 12:02 pm | |
| why do i find so many good poets on this site
Your poems a re great btw | |
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alwaysamongashes Attending your first ritual
Age : 30 Posts : 190 Location : In a dark room Join date : 2009-07-28
Character sheet Name: marina Age: 15 Affinities : fire
| Subject: Re: FleursDuMal77's Poems. Fri Jul 31, 2009 2:05 pm | |
| She's a great Poet and song writer I must say! I glad to be her friend! | |
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FleursDuMal77 Seeing the Tracker
Age : 30 Posts : 13 Location : In my field of paper flowers Join date : 2009-07-30
| Subject: Re: FleursDuMal77's Poems. Fri Jul 31, 2009 11:43 pm | |
| Wow...thanks! I'm blushing right now...I'll post some more when I can. | |
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alwaysamongashes Attending your first ritual
Age : 30 Posts : 190 Location : In a dark room Join date : 2009-07-28
Character sheet Name: marina Age: 15 Affinities : fire
| Subject: Re: FleursDuMal77's Poems. Fri Jul 31, 2009 11:59 pm | |
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FleursDuMal77 Seeing the Tracker
Age : 30 Posts : 13 Location : In my field of paper flowers Join date : 2009-07-30
| Subject: Re: FleursDuMal77's Poems. Sat Aug 01, 2009 7:57 pm | |
| Here's another poem. I got the idea from the short story "The Pit and the Pendulum". By the way, the song "The Poet and the Pendulum" by Nightwish is amazing. Go 14 minute songs! And yes, you read that correctly. Anyways, this is called "The End".
I chose the pit. Its gaping mouth is swallowing me whole.
But I don’t resist.
I lean back into its Shady embrace.
I’m giving myself To the dark That never felt right Until now.
Air rushing by Steals my breath.
The wind and silence Lull me into a calm. I know it will last For an eternity.
I’m glad I chose the pit. The pain will end sooner. I can’t watch my death Come slowly closer As it swings back and forth.
I finally meet my end. | |
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FleursDuMal77 Seeing the Tracker
Age : 30 Posts : 13 Location : In my field of paper flowers Join date : 2009-07-30
| Subject: Re: FleursDuMal77's Poems. Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:47 pm | |
| Here are a couple of sonnets I had to write for school. They don't have a rhyme scheme. The first is in iambic petrameter (10 syllables) and the second is in iambic tetrameter 98 syllables)
I can feel the betrayed look on my face As I fly away from my so-called home. Breathless, I fall to the ground, far from fear. The rhythm of your dark wings above me Scared again, I drag myself up, and run. Why am I so afraid of an angel? One whom I thought was oh so trustworthy? I guess I didn’t notice that you were A messenger of the Underworld, not A deliverer of hope, love, and peace. The black feathers of your wings block the stars. Their shady embrace wraps around my soul. I shriek, and yet, now I have awakened. Perhaps now my nightmare will fade away.
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The dark sun sets; full moon rises. Wolves howl as he draws his last breath. My heart weeps and mourns for lost love As he makes his final journey To a stone grave and deep darkness. Rain steadily falls as I go To visit him just one more time. The sky cries because I refuse. It’s accepted reality When I myself haven’t quite yet. The ground beneath me is muddy. I won’t move, even though I’m cold. Curled up beside him, I’ll be with Him until the end of the stars. | |
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