hzp5050's poems

This poem is a fanpoem sorta a sonnet I made in 7th grade enjoy

olivia benson

She's always ready to lend you a hand
Her dedication to her work is great
When she comes in the room strike up the band
Others say her police work is first rate

She puts other people before herself
For her there are no case too difficult
When undercover she always shows stealth
Her interrigation skills are sublime

For All these reasons she's the very best
This great detective stands above the rest

For a 7th grade (that should be when you were 13 i suppose? correct if i'm wrong.), it's a very well-written piece.

The first stanza was very nicely rhymed, and a nicely tuned sonnet. (:

It strayed a little in the second stanza due to a lack of rhyme.

And the last... i think it's too short.

Okay, ignore me >< I don't really know how sonnets work, but seen them online. tend to be a little long.

But I think your sonnet is sweet.

Keep writing alright? write for yourself, not for others.

Don't stop because there aren't readers, or rather, there aren't reviews. You're the most authentic reader of your writes.

I don't know who olivia benson is, but from the way she is described, i think she's some sort of investigator or PI in a police force. Those who go round investigating murders and searching crime scenes. Which sort of reminds me of deka wanko (japanese drama).

She's a police officer in a fictional drama they got going in the united states, law and order svu. thanks for the review, im planning on writing more but, i don't know.

just keep writing. write once you have inspirations. don't ever stop. don't let your wonderful skil degenerate to waste.