Prototype

Subject: Re: Prototype Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:09 pm

You continued it =) It´s a amazing as all you write .

Subject: Re: Prototype Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:00 am

PLEASE write more!!!!!!!

Subject: Re: Prototype Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:13 am

Subject: Re: Prototype Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:24 am

Im serious though! Its really good and i want to read more

Subject: Re: Prototype Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:27 am

i continued to walk home. i knew by now my parents were freaking cause i wasnt in my room. and i would probly be grounded for life for sneaking out. but in a way it was worth it to know. so i was faster and stronger now. i thought to myself. time to test that out. i started to run. down the sidewalk. i was definitly faster and stronger to since i didnt fell like i was pushing myself to go that fast.i kept running at the speed for a block or so. i stop and start to walk again.i wonder what the side effect was going to be. would it be noticeable. as i got close to home. i looked at my house from a distance the lights were off. which was a good sign or bad. depening on how you looked at it.

Subject: Re: Prototype Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:40 am

Yay! Thats gooooood

Subject: Re: Prototype Fri Aug 19, 2011 1:43 pm

i walked around the side of my house.i did my best to climb back in through my window which wasnt to hard. and like i knew it. my mom and dad were in my room waiting for me. "what the heck were you thinking" my dad said instantly as i got my footing."i..i just needed some fresh air." i said. it wasnt a complete lie."we told you that you was grounded that means you stay in your room till dinner and when you have to leave for school no other time"my dad said sternly.i sigh."i know i shouldnt have but i im sorry...." i said. "what if something happened to you." my mom broke in. i basicly got grounded even worse.they ended up leaving me to myself. i sat on my bed. how was i going to figure out if there was some bad side affect if i was grounded. i was going to just forget about what the guy had said and try to go back to my normal life. well almost normal that is.

Subject: Re: Prototype Fri Aug 19, 2011 1:45 pm

Chapter 3

the next day started out like usual. i woke up to my stupid alarm clock. got dressed in some black jeans, a white shirt, and my black hoodie. i headed downstairs grabbed something for breakfast and left. i had been quick enough to have left before my parents had had a chance to tell me to get out right after school and blah blah blah.

Subject: Re: Prototype Fri Aug 19, 2011 1:47 pm

i've lost intrest in writing this story

Subject: Re: Prototype Sun Aug 21, 2011 10:13 am

Why? I think it is pretty good .

Subject: Re: Prototype Thu Sep 01, 2011 7:29 am

i just dont see what i could really write for this story