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| | Subject: Comments - On The Brink of Insanity Wed Jul 15, 2009 9:57 am | |
| The story On The Brink of Insanity can be found HereWoah, that first chapter really grabs the reader's attention! From the start you have action that ensures the reader has to read on to find out what happens next. It's a brilliant way to open a story  Are you putting anymore on here? |
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Katie-la
Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
  
Age : 27
Posts : 862
Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet
Name: Michiko
Age: 15
Affinities : Sound, Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - On The Brink of Insanity Tue Jul 21, 2009 5:32 pm | |
| Love i!!!!!
Are you putting up anymore? | |
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Sylvia
Finally mastering Spirit
 
Age : 30
Posts : 1309
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: Comments - On The Brink of Insanity Sat Jan 23, 2010 1:50 am | |
| Been a while since I've seen this story  I'll see if I can pull out more from somewhere... | |
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Katie-la
Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
Age : 27
Posts : 862
Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet
Name: Michiko
Age: 15
Affinities : Sound, Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - On The Brink of Insanity Sun Jan 24, 2010 12:19 am | |
| Okay! I won't pressure though. *knows the feeling* | |
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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
Character sheet
Name:
Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
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twizzlers
Accidentally burning down a tree with Fire
Age : 28
Posts : 501
Location : somewhere warm ^_^
Join date : 2009-07-26
Character sheet
Name: Rhein
Age: 16
Affinities : water, telekineses, teleportation , singing
| | Subject: Re: Comments - On The Brink of Insanity Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:19 am | |
| i told you your stories were always awesome!  you should put the flashbacks in italics though, cuz at first I was confused a little bit. | |
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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
Character sheet
Name:
Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
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Sylvia
Finally mastering Spirit
Age : 30
Posts : 1309
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: Comments - On The Brink of Insanity Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:19 am | |
| Thank you Jojo, Ageless.
I probably should Jojo. That would make the first chapter easier to understand. | |
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twizzlers
Accidentally burning down a tree with Fire
Age : 28
Posts : 501
Location : somewhere warm ^_^
Join date : 2009-07-26
Character sheet
Name: Rhein
Age: 16
Affinities : water, telekineses, teleportation , singing
| | Subject: Re: Comments - On The Brink of Insanity Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:01 pm | |
| mhm but like I said your stories are always awesome. | |
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Sylvia
Finally mastering Spirit
Age : 30
Posts : 1309
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: Comments - On The Brink of Insanity Sat Feb 20, 2010 8:29 pm | |
| Made the flashbacks in italics. Working on the third chapter. have it written out, just typing it. | |
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twizzlers
Accidentally burning down a tree with Fire
Age : 28
Posts : 501
Location : somewhere warm ^_^
Join date : 2009-07-26
Character sheet
Name: Rhein
Age: 16
Affinities : water, telekineses, teleportation , singing
| | Subject: Re: Comments - On The Brink of Insanity Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:26 pm | |
| awesome!! can't wait!! | |
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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
Character sheet
Name:
Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
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Sylvia
Finally mastering Spirit
Age : 30
Posts : 1309
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: Comments - On The Brink of Insanity Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:52 pm | |
| Thank you.
I did that on purpose~
-Kana | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
Character sheet
Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - On The Brink of Insanity Tue May 25, 2010 8:21 pm | |
| Cool story, will you be adding more? | |
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Sylvia
Finally mastering Spirit
Age : 30
Posts : 1309
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Comments - On The Brink of Insanity Wed May 26, 2010 11:24 am | |
| I should in the next couple weeks. Don't have this spiral with me.. | |
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