Angel of Music
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 27
Posts : 45811
Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about
Join date : 2009-12-08
Character sheet
Name: Sierrah
Age:
Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
 | | Subject: Comments - Fire on the Foundation Sat Feb 06, 2010 10:35 am | |
| The story Fire on the Foundation can be found Heresad! good story but sad! | |
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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
Character sheet
Name:
Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
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Angel of Music
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 45811
Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about
Join date : 2009-12-08
Character sheet
Name: Sierrah
Age:
Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Fire on the Foundation Sat Feb 06, 2010 7:45 pm | |
| poor them! To find the house burning and them being the only ones who sees it | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
Character sheet
Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Fire on the Foundation Thu May 27, 2010 8:12 pm | |
| Nicely written. Is there more to the story, like him avenging his parents death? | |
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Beastbearer
Meeting new friends at Lunch
  
Age : 38
Posts : 148
Location : Oklahoma City, OK
Join date : 2010-01-23
Character sheet
Name: Chayton Yellowfeather
Age: 17
Affinities : Air; Totem is the Thunderbird
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Fire on the Foundation Thu May 27, 2010 9:46 pm | |
| - earth-spirit wrote:
- Nicely written. Is there more to the story, like him avenging his parents death?
There is. I recently rewrote the entire story. I'm at work atm, but I'll post the new version later today. | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
Character sheet
Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Fire on the Foundation Thu May 27, 2010 9:47 pm | |
| Excellent, I will keep an eye out for it. | |
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