Comments - Apocalypse or Kingdom

The story Apocalypse or Kingdom can be found Here

Great start.

Wow, nice, please continue

I finally thought of a title, hope it goes. And thanks for reading my story.

Waiting to read more. Please

Wow, you actually like it. I never thought that someone would actually like it. Ill write more. Cross your fingers that i dont get writers block. I barely ever finish stories cause of it.

Yes, I like it. I wouldn't worry too much about the writers block. Most of the stories on here never seem to get finished anyway. Take it as far as you can and I will continue to read it.

Wow. Amazing! Keep going! =]

lol woah, love triangle =D

Yup, I wasnt even planning that. It just sorta happened. Actually I didnt even think this story was going to go this far. I'm just making it up as i go along. Glad you like it. Hopefully it adds a twist.

Well, I hope you continue, if you can.

Love itt

Thanks. I didnt want to put too much detail since im only 11, but turning 12 in 8 days. I think its good enough. Glad you like it. I'll probably post more either later today (might not since ive been on almost all day and my mom is getting sorta mad) or hopefully tomarrow, but depends with school.

OMG! I can't wait

I cant wait either! And im the one writing the story. When this came to mind i was like on the edge of my seat writing it.

lol

Lovin it!

Wow, I am loving this story. I can't believe how young you are. You have a great imagination.

Thanks. A lot of peopler have told me i have a good imagination, nut im glad to hear it from you.
I cant wait to turn 12 on Monday the 14. I didnt think i was that young, though.

your only a year younger than me.

:O two love triangles! I love it!

Really? I thought itd be too much. Guess not. Glad you like it!
~Spoiler~
Brandon and Prue
Derik and Connie
Hope you figure it out. [/center]

Oh No! What hit?

You'll see.

Im be taking a creative writing class in school next year. If i end up finishing it or at least part of it, should i bring it in, but make it appropriate ofr school? Or if i do should i just start a whole nother story.Just wanted you guys opinions. Im not really sure how a creative writing class works, so... yeah

Alright. Ive been having trouble writing lately and ive found the problem. When im writing im always writing it as if im telling a story (technically i am, but you know what i mean) So what im gonna do is from now on Im gonna put "I" instead of the character's name. It just makes it easier for me and maybe you for reading it. If you dont like it, just tell me and ill change back. Thanks for baring with me.