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PostSubject: Untitled Story   Untitled Story EmptySat Dec 19, 2009 6:46 pm

Ok...so this is the first 2 chapters in my untitled story...hope you like it!

Chapter One:
I am Kay-Lynn Balans. Some may think I am one of the most depressed souls on earth, sometimes their right. I stand about 5’4, short angled black bob hair, pale as snow dressed in almost all black (on a good day my ensemble contains teal, purple and black plaid skirts). This is my story.
As I was walking off the big yellow limousine for my first day of school in Gleestown High (home of the overly peppy kids. Barf) I saw him. I had no clue who he was but something drew me to him. Maybe it was his dark demeanor or his leather bad boy jacket but I knew I had to say something. Quick. “Um…do you know where the main office is?” Ok I knew where it was but I couldn’t think of anything else to say. “Yeah, its-“ out of nowhere a tall, tan blond stepped out from behind him, “See buildings 2 and 4 well in the middle there is a number 3. It’s marked OFFICE. It’s kind of hard to miss. Do you need an escort or are you a big girl?” She said with a mean and sarcastic sneer. Not wanting to start anymore trouble on my first day I walked away.
Just as I was about to reach my first class I saw him again. This time there was no blond witch around so I jumped at the chance, or I almost did. I got sideswiped by a twanging hurricane of pep. “Hi! Are you new? Well of course your new you have a ‘new student’ pass! Well any who my names Stephanie Jean but you can call me Steff.”
Completely blown away by the amount of up-ness a person could have I stammered out “K-k-Kay-Lynn Kay Lynn. Um…nice to meet you?”
“Oh well hello Miss Kay-Lynn! What classes do you have? Yippie you have the same afternoon classes as well as the same lunch!” Fun. Well I guess I can make the best out of it.
“Cool do you we have assigned seats or anything?” I asked
“Nope! One of the great things about our teachers! Do ya’ll wanna sit by me?” She inquired.
“Sure”, remembering the mysterious guy I added with a nod in his direction, “Who is he? I tried to ask him where the Main Office was but his little blond body guard attacked me and acted like I was a kindergartener.”
“Oh, that’s Sean Gallahoy and Tanya Murry. He is the bad boy of the school.” With an apologetic look she added, “He’s the only one here that dresses like you. No offence you look very uh well nice. And well, Tanya there’s no beating her queen-ness. She is like the horrible hag from down under, if you know what I mean” Steff pointed to the ground. “Do you like, well like like him? Because I could arrange a meeting…?” She kindly asked
“I really don’t know I mean he’s cute and all,” who was I kidding he was GORGEOUS! “but I don’t want to mess with Tanya’s property. Thanks but no, I’m all set.”
“Okay if you insist. Opsie were gonna be late if we don’t get a move on. I’ll see you at lunch!” She said before she flew off.
As predicted I was the last student to enter the class and there was only one seat left, right next to him. The Greek god, I am going to faint. “About time you enter the class Miss Balans. I have a seat for you next to Mr.Gallahoy.” My history teacher Mr. Centry told me.
During the first five minutes of class I felt a poke in the arm. I peeked out of the side of my eye and found Sean passing me a note:

Sorry about Tanya today. Told her it wasn’t cool. U k?
-S
Oh. My. Goddess. Was I k? WAS I K!?!?! Of course I was k!

Yeah. Fine. Thanks.
-K
I passed the paper back and got an immediate response

K. I’ll make it up 2u. Coffee u. Me. Friday nite. I insist. Cell: 555-1553
-S

Coffee. Him. Me. Date. EEEEEEEKKKKKKKK!!!!! I would have to talk to Steff about this! For the rest of class I was floating on air. You know how I said there was possibly the most depressed person on earth? Well think again suckas! I got a date with McHottie! I’m so happy I could do a mini happy dance but it would ruin my gothic demeanor.
Chapter 2
I never thought I would be so glad to see a girl as peppy as Stephanie. The second I told her what happened she flipped. Literally flipped. Right in the middle of the lunch room.
“Oh! My dear sweet mother of corn!” She yipped. “Yes! Yes! Yes! You totally have to! It would be a waste of your precious social life. Ya know ya only get a couple of chances at this kind a thing right?” She asked me in a rushed exited tone. I never thought anything could go wrong with my day.
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It came in the form of an IM:
CheerHottie56: You think your sooo lucky don’t you!
DarknDeprst666: Who are you?
CheerHottie56: Tanya Murry? Ya no Seans “blond bodyguard”? Yeah well you think your sooo cool bc he invited you out to coffee on not just pitty but also a bet. Yes that’s right a bet. Suck it in new girl!
DarknDeprst666:How did you get my screen name? he would never do that to me you liar!
CheerHottie56: Sure think what you will he’s the liar
CheerHottie56 Signed Off
He wouldn’t do that to me would he? I had to get to the bottom of this. So what did I do? Well first I call Steff and see what she says I should do. After three incredibly long rings she answers.
“Hello?” she answers
“Hey Steff? Its Kay-Lynn. I just got an interesting IM from Tanya…Can you help me I don’t know what to make of it.” I repeated our short conversation to her word for word.
“That witch! She’s probably lying but did he give you his cell number?”
Did he? I took out our note again and re-read it. ‘Cell: 555-1553’ I guess so “Yeah I just looked at our note and he did write it.”
“Well…? Why are you talking to me instead of calling him to clarify!? Go! Get off the phone with me! GO NOW” She practically screamed into the phone.
Great…I guess I have to call him. It’s not like I was nervous or anything I mean I’ve had plenty of boyfriends before and I called a bunch of guys up a bunch of times, but why am I freaking out about this? Just one little tiny phone call…well I guess I’ll get it over with.
Ring. Ring. Ring. Ring “Hello, you have reached the cell phone of Sean Gallahoy please leave a message at the ton---Hello?” Gah! I thought I was getting off easy too! He sounded sleepy, “Hello? Any one there?” Crap here is my time. “Hi…um…this is Kay-Lynn Balans. I have a question I need to ask you.” After a slight hesitation I heard him let a breath out I heard him say, “Yeah. What?” “Well I know this is stupid but I was wondering if you just asked me for coffee out of pity or because of a bet?” After a long pause heard him reply “Did Tanya tell you that? Because she can be a really wicked person sometimes.” That left me awestruck. “O-o-ok cool yeah cool. So what time are we meeting? Or are you picking me up. But I can get a ride I don’t want to make you pick me up if you don’t want to because I’m totally not li-” “Kay-Lynn chill out. It’s alright I’ll be there to pick you up around 5 o’clock ok?” he said cutting me off. “I have to go I’ll talk to you in History tomorrow.” Click. That went well. I managed to sound like a bumbling idiot. Great I can tell this is going to end with a second date. Totally. Not really.
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PostSubject: Re: Untitled Story   Untitled Story EmptyMon Oct 04, 2010 7:47 pm

ha ha i love it
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