Reaper School

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A scyth appeared in my hand. I held back a scream and threw it to the ground. I kept on running. I tried to rip off the braclet around my wrist. What's happening? A cloaked figure now appeared in front of me with a hand out. I skidded to a stop.
"What's going on?" I managed to squeak to the stranger. I was still fiddleing with the braclet. It had two black beads beads and in the middle a very light blue scyth on it.
"You are becoming a reaper," the figure said as he removed the hood of his cloak. The cloak was a very dark purple, almost black. The boy appeared my age, 16, with hair as purple-black as his cloak. His eyes were a peircing blue and they bore into mine.
The scyth again appeared in my hand. I yelped and dropped it to the ground again. "What's a reaper?" i asked.
"Come, ill show you." He reached and gripped my wrist. I struggled, but we already had disappeared in a swirl of shadows.

Nice, I loved "Dead like Me" I hated that they canceled the series.

Ive never heard of it, but the title sounds cool. Should i continue the story?

Yes of course. It was a great show. It was about a girl that was killed by a toilet seat from a plane or something, it has been so long. Anyway she becomes a reaper. There was some seriously funny stuff in the show.

I can tell from a person dieing from a toilet seat lmfao

It had some serious stuff too but it was really funny. Anyway continue with your story

I found myself in a coartyard. I swayed and almost fell, but the boy caught me.
"First time shadow walking is always dizzying. My names Coal, by the way." he said. I just stared at him and then looked around. The courtyard was creepy, and it had no light except for the moon and twinkle of the stars. There was a building ahead stretched across the grounds. It looked like a big black and red chirch or chapel.
"Where aam i." i asked Coal.
"You're at reaper school. This is where you will be trained to be a reaper and find your full potential to be one." Coal answered like he had done this a dozen times.

Ill post more soon or tomarrow cause i gtg.

Ok, looking forward to reading more

"Can you see where we are?" Coal asked.
"Yeah. Why, im not suppose to? I can always see where im at. Even at the darkest of times." I looked at him. His face was alight with joy. His eyes sparkled as he looked at me. He didnt answer. That irritated me.
"Can i just go home?" I asked Coal. I wasnt really in the mood for the any practical jokes.
"You can go home in a couple of weeks. Now, come meet the Headmaster." He was still smiling as we continued deeper into the courtyard

Nice, keep going.

Coal described each of the buildings as we past them.
"Over there is Boys Dorm," He said pointing to a semi-large building with ancient writing. "And there across the walk is the Girls Dorm where you will spend your days and sometimes nights. "This is the main building where you will have your studies, unless they are in the courtyard. And this is i guess you would call it the administatives building." We walked into the building. A man in black robes was standing by a huge fireplace watching the flames lick up the wood,
"Ahh, Ms. Alice. How has your tour of the grounds been coming along?" The man asked in a withering voice. It sounded as if it was about to float away if he strained it too much.
"Uhh, i guess alright, considerikng...Ouch!" I trailed off as Coal jabbed me in the ribs.
"This is Headmaster Numbes," He whispered to me.
"Thank you, Coal. I will call you back so you can take Ms. Alice to her room." Numbes dismissed Coal and he trailed away to do whatever he does.

Im going to change the age of Alice aand Coal. I edited it in the first paragraph.

I stood there akwardly. I had no idea what to say or even how to act. This was a headmaster of a reaper school for crows sake! What was i suppose to think.
"Now, Alice." Nimbus began. "I know what you must be thinking. You think im some horrid person for training kids to be reapers. But in reality its just who these kids were born that way." I just looked at him. That was only half of what i was thinking.
"What are reapers?" I asked. I probably sounded like i wasnt the brightest star in the galaxy. I was one and i didnt even know what they were or what they do. He didnt seem surprised by this, however.
"Reapers are apecial people, who are rarely adults. They are basiclly angels who reap on people who have done bad things in their lives. Reapers have powers, too. Do you know if you can do anything that you dont think anybody else does?" He told me. I somewhat got it.
"Umm... well Coal acted weird when i said i could see the courtyard when he brought me here. Does that have any signifigance?" I answered partially.
"Yes"
"I love the dark and night. I can handle the day, but it really bothers me. People say im really pretty." I looked in a mirror i hadnt noticed before. I had long, straight, black hair that had almost a blue shine. My eyes were a steel gray shadowed by long thick lashes. I had high cheekbones and plum lips. I hardly ever wore makeup. People thought this was pretty? They must have brain damage. "Sometimes i think i know how someone is feeling or know what they might be thinking, but that could be m imagination. I love to fence or anything that has to do with some sort of sword or weapon. I think thats it." I finished my list of oddities.
"Hmm. Im going to have to speculate farther." Nimbus shut his eyes and Coal walked into the room. "Coal, can you take Ms. Alice to her room in the Girls' Dorm. I think she should retire for the night."
"Yes Headmaster." Coal answered and motioned for me to follow him.

GOOD REALLY GOOD I WANT MORE PLEASE

Sure ill keep going. Glad you like it.

We walked down the walkway silent.
"So, what'd you guys talk about?" Coal asked me.
"Well, he asked if I had any traits that might be odd." I answered. We kept walking only a little ways to go till we reached the dorm.
"Hey. What's up with the seeing in the dark thing. The Headmaster said it had sinifigance and you smiled. What's so important about it?"
"Well, only certain reapers have the gift of seeing in the dark. This means you will be a dark reaper. You will do most of you reaps at night. Im a dark reaper and will be you mentor. You know if a reaper is light or dark by the color of their robes. Here's your schedule and some papers you will need." He said handing me papers. A chart was on top. It read:
Dark Reaper Ranks:
New Reaper---Light Blue robes
Junior Reaper---Blue robes
Reaper---Purple robes
Master Reaper---Black robes

Light Reaper Ranks:
New Reaper---Red robes
Junior Reaper---Hot Pink robes
Reaper---Light Pink robes
Master Reaper---White robes

"So this is the list of ranks?" I asked Coal. "Your a Master Reaper?"
"Yup, thats the list. And no. Im not a Master Reaper. The purple of my robes is so dark it seems almost black. Im the next Dark Master Reaper, though. The color of your scyth, scyth on your braclet, and your robes all tell your rank." He said. I could tell he was bursting will pride by the tone in his voice. We approched the Dorm door.
"Can you come in the Girls' Dorm?" I was curious.
"Since i will be your mentor and your new, im allowed. But once you know where your going, im forbidden." We walked through the door into a commen room. There was a bunch of couches and love seats scattered around the room. There was about three flat screens propped up in three different parts of the wall. The walls were painted green and there was hard wood floors. Girls were clustered around each of the TVs. They all went silent and looked up when i walked in.
"Girls," Coal announced. "This is Alice. She is the newest reaper here and you are to welcome and respect as if she has been here for a long time."
"Hi," I said weakly, very embarresed. A girl with metallic blue hair stood and walked up to me.
"Hi, Alice. I'm Sapphire. Its nice to have you at Reaper School. Do you know what room your staying at?" she asked me. I looked at Coal.
"She's in room 75." he answered for me. Sapphire gasped and gave me a huge.
"We're roomies!" she squeeled and let go.
"Thank you Coal. I think Sapphire will show me to our room. See you tomarrow?" Of coarse i was going to see him tomarrow. He was my mentor.
He gave me a quirk of his lips, nodded and stalked out of the dorm.

Im going to change the colors of Coals robes and Alice's scyth and braclet. I hadnt decided on the colors at the time and realized that they have the wrong colors.

ok and its good

thanks

i might post some pics of the characters, just have to find them. They wont look exactly like the character, so get creative.

Alice

Coal, but has blue eyes

cool

Sapphire and I walked to our room.
"This is going to so great!" she exclaimed excidedly. "I finally have a room mate!" she seemed nice, but first impresstions can be deciving. We walked into our room. On each side there was a bed. The bed on the right side was made and had an ocean-blue green confiter on it.