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PixieRose
Seeing the Tracker
  
Age : 31
Posts : 14
Join date : 2010-10-02
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Name: Rose
Age: 19
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| | Subject: My Poetry ♥ Would be very grateful if you could tell me what you think (good or bad) Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:59 pm | |
| I have written pooetry before  but lost it all in a fire  This is the only poem I have written lately. It doesn't have a title, as most of my poems. Clovers clovers everywhere,
but is that you hiding there?
I've been searching high and low
for the one that will bring me luck I know.
There you are with your four leaves,
let me pick you please, oh please!
Some luck I could do with today
to make all the bad things go away.Thanks, leave comments, anything would be grateful.
Last edited by PixieRose on Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:38 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 29
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry ♥ Would be very grateful if you could tell me what you think (good or bad) Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:05 pm | |
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PixieRose
Seeing the Tracker
Age : 31
Posts : 14
Join date : 2010-10-02
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Name: Rose
Age: 19
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| | Subject: Re: My Poetry ♥ Would be very grateful if you could tell me what you think (good or bad) Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:06 pm | |
| Thank you  I'm mid-way through writing another one. Will post it when it is done. | |
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PixieRose
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Age : 31
Posts : 14
Join date : 2010-10-02
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Name: Rose
Age: 19
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| | Subject: Re: My Poetry ♥ Would be very grateful if you could tell me what you think (good or bad) Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:23 pm | |
| Okay next one Again no title. Tears I cry, day and night,
till I get to see the light.
Till you show me how
to live my life, and live it now!
Just exisiting day by day,
lettinng the seconds tick away.
That cannot be right for anyone,
no matter what they've done!
There must be something to make it worth it,
to make everything seem so perfect.
There are many things that make this life worthwhile
like faith, and hope, and seeing someone smile.
But there's somethig that rises way above
and that thing is love!
It is wonderful and perfect,
it makes everything seem better and good!
No matter how bad things get,
as long as you have love, you're all set!
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Zoey Redbird
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 7265
Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come
Join date : 2009-08-01
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Name: Sarah Belle
Age: 18
Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry ♥ Would be very grateful if you could tell me what you think (good or bad) Tue Mar 08, 2011 5:44 pm | |
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ZoeRedbird
Mod
Age : 28
Posts : 9363
Location : Somewhere wearing a Deadpool costume
Join date : 2011-02-28
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Name: Dock
Age: 18
Affinities : Telepathy
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry ♥ Would be very grateful if you could tell me what you think (good or bad) Wed Mar 23, 2011 3:55 am | |
| i am sorry about all your poems being lost in the fire your poems are very good. | |
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JCP1987
Eavesdropping on her conversation
Age : 33
Posts : 3971
Location : In Kalona's closet.
Join date : 2011-03-31
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Name: Haruhi Yuki
Age: 16
Affinities : Sword/Judo/Tai quan do
| | Subject: Re: My Poetry ♥ Would be very grateful if you could tell me what you think (good or bad) Fri Apr 01, 2011 9:39 pm | |
| I like your poems very creative | |
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PixieRose
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Age : 31
Posts : 14
Join date : 2010-10-02
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Name: Rose
Age: 19
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| | Subject: Re: My Poetry ♥ Would be very grateful if you could tell me what you think (good or bad) Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:40 pm | |
| Okay here is another one I could climb to the top of a mountain, or sail every sea.
But to find my home, I just need you beside me.
It will not matter if you’re far or near
I will only feel I belong, if I have you here.
My life would be as dark as an endless night
Without you there to hold me tight.
My love for you grows more each passing day
My love for you will never fade away.
My heart and soul are both belong to you
Please take good care of them, and of me too. | |
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Grandma Redbird
Going about a regular day
Age : 29
Posts : 9
Join date : 2011-11-06
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| | Subject: Re: My Poetry ♥ Would be very grateful if you could tell me what you think (good or bad) Sun Nov 06, 2011 11:16 pm | |
| thats really good:D i can't write poetery worth anything. haha. i loved it tho(: | |
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PixieRose
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Age : 31
Posts : 14
Join date : 2010-10-02
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Name: Rose
Age: 19
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| | Subject: Re: My Poetry ♥ Would be very grateful if you could tell me what you think (good or bad) Mon Nov 07, 2011 5:33 am | |
| Okay this one I didn't write, but it was written for me this morning, got woken up by this being texted to me at 1.55am even though the person who sent it was laying beside me
Her lips are as sweet as the first winter fruit
Her smile as perfect as fresh fallen snow
Her eyes shine like a thousand suns
Her skin as soft as fresh silk
and as i write these words for you
she lay here close in my arms
and all the world shall know my love
for this woman of unimaginable charm | |
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