| | presenting the:Can can't poem |  |
|
|
| Author | Message |
|---|
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
  
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: presenting the:Can can't poem Tue Aug 25, 2009 7:02 pm | |
| CAN,CAN'T
I can touch you,but i cant feel you
I can hide you,but i can't find you
I can talk to you,but i cant make a sound
I can hit you,but i can't hurt you
I can kiss you,but i can't hold you
I can love you,but you can't love me
I can,but won't,give up.
By:Rianne
Tell me,what do you think???
Last edited by Rickey on Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:39 am; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Tue Aug 25, 2009 7:09 pm | |
| RIGHT & WRONG
There's the smoke,but wheres the fire?
The sound of waves,but no water?
There's the sun,where's the light?
A bird song,with no bird to sing?
There's the moon,where's the night?
The tree's sway,with no wind?
There are living,but where's the life?
It's time to do things right.
What about this one??
Last edited by Rickey on Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:38 am; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Tue Aug 25, 2009 7:11 pm | |
| A DARK SONG
There are smiles,but they are eveil.
There are sounds,but theye are wrong.
There are shapes,consumed with shadows.
There are birds,but they are mockers.
These are words,the darkest song.
ohh i like this one.
Last edited by Rickey on Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:37 am; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Veronica
Freaking out
 
Age : 30
Posts : 60
Location : United States
Join date : 2009-08-18
Character sheet
Name: veronica
Age: 15
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Tue Aug 25, 2009 7:20 pm | |
| there really good. i cant wait to read more. | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Tue Aug 25, 2009 7:51 pm | |
| thank you! i am going to wright more in my poetry book tonight and post it on here tommorrow. | |
|
| | |
Veronica
Freaking out
Age : 30
Posts : 60
Location : United States
Join date : 2009-08-18
Character sheet
Name: veronica
Age: 15
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Tue Aug 25, 2009 8:09 pm | |
| great  | |
|
| | |
lexiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Seeing the 'ghosts' of dead students
Age : 31
Posts : 2072
Join date : 2009-07-22
Character sheet
Name:
Age:
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Tue Aug 25, 2009 8:30 pm | |
| | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:17 am | |
| THE DEAD
Whispers are what you hear
Shreiking sounds and cry's of fear
The crashing sound behind the doors
The shadows com with no remorse
A bolt of lightning hits the ground
Those white hands,they must be bound
The dark will rule,it's getting late
They are not people,but are things of hate.
By:Rianne
Dose this even make sence??
Last edited by Rickey on Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:36 am; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:21 am | |
| DARK QUESTION'S
"What is wrong,am i lost? Can i not be found?
Am i week?Am I limp? Am i deep underground?
Is there noise?Is there sound?Is there anything at all?
What's that light?What's that voice?Is that shape about to fall?
There's no faith,There's no hope,There's no way out.
Am i scared?Yes of course,I am scared without a doubt."
By:Rianne
Last edited by Rickey on Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:36 am; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:28 am | |
| SIMBOLIZED
Wind carry's the one's who are marked
In fire There's betrayal
Through the water travels the chose one
Earth's life is Untamed
Hunted are our spirit's by love
This path is one we are tempted to take.
I used the elements and the name's of the hon books.
Last edited by Rickey on Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:35 am; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:31 am | |
| LIFE
My life has no breez
It is still and plain
My life has no light
It is dark and cold
My life has no smille's
It is always so sad
My life has no flow
It is silent and slow
All i ever am is hurt.
Last edited by Rickey on Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:04 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:33 am | |
| DARKNESS
Dangerouse night
Always screaming
Running away
Kalona's alive
Never to be safe
Ending of light
Sadness is all
Stay away | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:39 am | |
| - Veronica wrote:
- great :)
Thankes! | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:40 am | |
| - lexiibbymazing wrote:
- i love em :]
Thank you! | |
|
| | |
Veronica
Freaking out
Age : 30
Posts : 60
Location : United States
Join date : 2009-08-18
Character sheet
Name: veronica
Age: 15
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Wed Aug 26, 2009 6:10 pm | |
| they r all great. and your avatar is really cute. | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:02 pm | |
| Thank you very much,the picture is of my dog breezy | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Sat Oct 31, 2009 6:00 pm | |
| A broken heart a ruind world
The shadows to dark for the thing that's behind it
A snarl a shreik,as loud as they dare
They're gone,they left,there's no one here
Dark times are comming as fast as they please
There is no moon in this night
Just black stars
Scream if you wish,but they'll stil find you
Tonight is the night they come | |
|
| | |
Rickey
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 27
Posts : 79
Location : No where exiting
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: dark and haunting Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:33 pm | |
| this one isnt that dark but its 1 of my fave. hope u like it <3
he calls me his princess,calls her his queen
he holds m in his arms,but holds her tighter
he says he'll be there 4 4ever,tells her 4 eternity
he gives me all his love,but somehow gives her more
but i am my own and always will be.
This 1 is a bit more.....out there and dark
something darks behind that door
the shadows come with no remorse
the peircing screams that fill the night
youre death will come without a fight
my broken heart now torn in three
i must run must hide its haunting me
no escape no help im on my own
whispers come,in the wind theyre blown.
hope u liked themill write more later 8D | |
|
| | |
Zoey Redbird
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 7265
Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come
Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet
Name: Sarah Belle
Age: 18
Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem Wed Mar 03, 2010 1:49 am | |
| | |
|
| | |
Sponsored content
| | Subject: Re: presenting the:Can can't poem | |
| |
|
| | |
| | presenting the:Can can't poem | |
|
