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PostSubject: they are coming   they are coming EmptyTue Dec 15, 2009 8:09 pm

this is just the begining of the storie that I am writing

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Maggie woke up with a sudden fear that Annie her best friend for about two years now is gonna get hurt. Little did Maggie know she was never going to see Annie again. But at the time Magie thought nothing of it and went back to sleep. Even though it was 6:00 in the mornig. Maggie had been asleep for about 15 minutes when her cellphoe started to ring. the caller id said that it was Annie's cell. Maggie picked up the phoe and said hello. Maggie had a sudden feeling that something bad was going to happen. Maggie had a good reason to be scared because the person on the other line wasn't Anni at all. MAggie didn't recognize the voice but all i said was you are next. Those 3 words had maggie frozen in fear. Maggie wanted to run and hide in her mom's room, but she couldn't move. When maggie finally regained movement she was staring to think that is was all a dream, but somewhere in the back of her mind she knew that it was all real. Maggie also knew that Annie's family was eighter dead or injured. Maggie decided to say that they were dead just to mentally prepare herself. By this time Maggie knew two things, the first was to find whoever did this to Annie's family and the second was no one could know what she was doing. Maggie had a plan, and the first part of that plan was to go to school and act like nothing was wrong. The only challangeing thing about that is that maggie isn't a good liar and she has known most of her classmates since first grade. It was 7:30 and MAggie was dreading going to school, beacause that meant that she was going to have to ride the bus. That also meant that she was going to have to make up some story about how Annie's wole family had gone to colorado for their grandma's funeral and they won't be back fopr a week or two. That shoul dgive Maggie enough time to figure out who could have done this to Annie. her 2 year old brother Matt, her mom cindi, and her dad josh..Maggie knew that this was going to be hard but she knew that she had to do something.



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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptyTue Dec 15, 2009 8:39 pm

Maggie had just got on the bus when the questions had bombarded her. Questions like where was Annie why isn't she here. Just listening to it almost brought tears to my eyes, but I knew that if I was going to fool everyone I would not be able to cry. So in the calmest voice she could use MAggie simply said that Annie and her family are in Colorado at her aunts funeral. Maggie had to keep saying the same answer all the way to sherwin william Junior highschool. When the bus finally pulled into the parking lot Maggie was the first one off of the bus. Maggie rushed off to her homeroom class where she was going to have to answer the same questions as she had to on the bus. Maggie wished she could just go home it would give her time to think. Then as is the thought had been at the back of maggies mind the whole time MAgie thougth that if she could just make it through HOmeroom she could go down to the nurses office and pretend to be sick and then shje would be able to go home. It was 8:15 and magie was heading out to the parking lot where her mom was going to be picking her up from. Maggie jumped into the car and forgetting she was suposed to be sickasked very hapily whats up. Maggie's mom justsat there and when she finally did say something she asked if Maggie wanted to go to subway. Magie could tell that something was wrong. so after a few minutes of driving in silence Maggie finally asked what was the matter. At first Maggie's mom did't tell her, but after a little bit more silence she gave in. All she said was someone form the school called and said that no one at Anie's house were answereing their phones. They also said that you told everyone that Anine and her family were going to Colorado. Is that right. Warnig bells were going off in Maggie's head. Maggie must have had a horific look plastered on her face because her mom pulled the car over and wanted to know what was bothering her. Maggie decieded to say that she thought somthing was wrong wiht Annie. MAggies mom asked what could be wrong and not wanting to give anything away she told her mom that she was probually just being parinoid. Maggie couldn't stand it anymore. Lucky for her they were just pulling into their dirveway. maggie needed time to think and she couldn't do that wiht her mom there so after a little convinceing Maggie's mom decieded to go out with her friends that night. That is exactly what Maggie wanted. Maggie needed time to get over to Annie's house and investigate the house for clues on what had happened. Maggie waited 15 minutes before setting out on the mile treck to Annie's house. Maggie didn't know what she would find but she hoped the killers were still there so Maggie could teach them a lesson or two.


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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptyWed Dec 16, 2009 7:01 pm

here is more just like I promised.

ON the walk over to Annie's house she was deep in thought, she was thinking about what she would do if the killers were still there. Another thought went through her mind what if they were dead and the bodies were there. MAggie couldn''t stand that thought so she decided to go back to the thought of what was going to happen if the killers were still there. Maggie had an idea of who might have done this but she wasn't sure. Her idea was what if it had been her dad and his new gang. if she was right she knew that it was going to be even harder then she had originally planned it on being, because if hjer theory was correct then she knew what she didn't know whats he was up against. Her dad and sam the leader of the gang when they are together they always succed on what they are trying to do. Failier is not an option when they are together they are unstoppable. MAggie had just reached the driveway of Annie's house. She was thinking about going bac, but everytime she had that thought she thought about Annie's family. She had started up the dirveway and to her it felt like a 5 mile track had been streched out strait. It felt like it had been forever since she had been here last with Annie, and now it was just her walking into the familiar house. She knew this house just like she knew her own house. Maggie had just gotten up to the door and was reaching for the handle when she realized the handel had been broken off. So she pushed the door open and walked through the dark hallway until she reached the kitchen. Once shse was there she flipped on the light just to look for a flashlight. Once she had found the flashlight she turned it on and turned the kitchen light off. She walked through each room, she didn't know what she was looking for but she just kept thinking there was going to be a clue or something. She had searched everyroom except for annie's and when she got to Annie's room she found a bright pink post it note. THe note said once you find the treasure there will be a clue as to who I am and where I am. A treasure what could that possible be. Well if the note was in here lets start here first. What was a treasure to Annie? Hmmm. Lets look in her jewlery box she has this diamond neclace in the shape of a rose. Here is the necklace but there is no note. Let me look in her brother's room next. What was his treasure. The only thing that I know of is his teddy bear, he brings that everywhere. I think it would be in his crib. Let me go look. Well here is the bear but there is no note. I must not be looking at this too closely. What is the families treasure? O my god how could I have been so stupid. Why didn't I think of it before. The family picture, it is in the family room. Sure enough on the back of the picture there was another post it note, it said You aren't as dumb as I thought you were magpie. Magpie only two people call me that and those two people are my grandma who died two years ago and my dad. The note confirmed it, her dad had a part in this after all. Lets read the rest of the note day by day they will get hurt day by day they will get closer to death. You must hurry! If you find the evidence you will find the next clue. Evidence what evidence. what do I look like a bloody pirate.

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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptySun Dec 20, 2009 9:08 pm

here is more to my story as promised.

She knew that if her dad had a part in this she would have to be smart about this. So she sat down in the living room of Annie's house and thought. Evidence, hmm could it be like a document of birth or marrage? Let me go and look at the birth certificates of Annie's family. There is one for Annie, Matt, Annie's mom cindy, and Annie's dad Josh. So all of the birth certificates are here but there is no post it note. The next thing on the list was a marrage licence. That is kept in Annie's parents room. So here is the certificate but no post it note. Suddenly she looked at the time 8:30 her mom would be home soon. Maggie grabed the two post it notes she already had and ran out of the house. She ran most of the way to her house, she got there at 8:45 it had only taken her 15 minutes to get back to her house that should give her time to think. She was up in her room in her little thinking corner when she knew what the evidence was. How could she be so stupid, she should have known what the evidence was all along. She should have known that the evidence was the sentanceing papers for her dad's jail time. And she knew right where those were, they were in her basement on the shelves. So she half ran half fell down the basement stairs. when she got to the bottom she fliped onthe overhead light and went strait to the shelves. She must have been looking for those papers for sometime because when she got to the last shelf they weren't there. She had just turned around to leave when she saw the papers spread out on the floor. She quick picked up the sentanceing paper and turned it over, and there was a bright pink post it note on the back. the post it note read you are following the clues nicely magpie. I would have thought this would take you quite awhile to figure out. If you tell anyone what you found i will kill all of your friends, but you must hurry. the next clue is i used to take you there when you were little, you had your own little mail box. If you can find your mailbox again and you still have the key the next clue will be waiting in there for you.

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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptySat Dec 26, 2009 9:27 pm

here is more to the story


Let me think, the mailbox used to be at the boys and girls club. But i don't know that i still have the key that was years ago. She was starting to think of where the key was when she heard a car door slam. She knew that it was her mom and her friends. She raced up the stairs and ran half way to her room before she heard the door open. Maggie come and say hi, her mom called from the front door. She came walking down the stairs and said hi to everyone and casually walked outside. She must have been outside for awhile because all of a sudden she heard something behind her and it was her mom and her friends. They had come to scare her. She just about screamed but when she looked at her watch she realized it was 11:30 pm. She is glad she didn't scream because she would have woken up her annoying and craby neighbor. She watched as her mom waved goodbye to her friends adn went back into the house. She waited about ten minutes before going inside and going up to her room. She just wanted to be alone so she could think of if she still had that key. She must have fallen asleep because she when she woke up and looked at her clock it was 6:45 in the morning. She got her clothes and went to take a shower. When she was done she looked at the clock.7:15 she was running late. She ran down the stairs and poured a bowl of cereal. It took he five minutes to finish and she was waiting for her mom to come downstairs to give her a ride to school. When her mom finally came down she was still in her pajamas and she gave me the wtf look. She goes maggie it is Saturday.

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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptySun Dec 27, 2009 6:41 pm

here is a little bit didn't get as much done as i would have liked though

Are you kidding me? Is it really Saturday? I am really stupid. Well then i guess i am going to go back to bed. I climb back up the stairs and crawl into bed not even caring that I am in my clothes. She lays there unable to fall back asleep. So her mind starts thinking of where that key might be. She must have been laying there thinking for quite some time before her mom called her downstairs. What do you want mom, she asked as she walked down the stairs. I was wondering why you were looking so guilty last night. Is there something you wanted to tell me? What do you mean mom, i wasn't looking guilty? I dodn't even do anything. When you left i went up and did my homework and then watched some telivision. Ok honey i just wanted you to know that if you did something and feel guilty about it you can come to me. Okay mom whatever you say.


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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptyTue Dec 29, 2009 6:02 pm

here is the next part hope you like it.

Well I was feeling guilty about something but i wasn't gonna tell my mom about it. I know if i did i would be grounded for an eternity and Annie's family would never get justice, and i wanted justice for them. So instead I ask my mom if i can go to the mall. She says i will drive you there in half an hour. I am almost sixteen but i still don't have my license. I have my lerners permit but that just means i can only dirve with an adult and not after dark. I know what sense does that make. I get my license in five months, on the 15th. which is exactly two weeks before my birthday. I keep asking my mom for a car for my birthday but chances are I won't get one. We aren't poor but we aren't rich eighter. We have enough money with some left over but we aren't like some of those people in this town, who send their children to school with a new car every few months. Maggie I can drive you now. Ok coming. Finally I was at the mall and my mom would be picking me up in an hour. I finally have time to think of where that key is. So i get a cinnibon and a smoothie and i take a seat at the corner farthest away from people as possible. I was so in thought that i didn't hear anyone walk up, all of a sudden i hear someone say hi and then a chair sqeak as it is being pulled out. I come out of thought to see of all people joey. I have had a crush on Joey since i was thirteen. Hi i say. whats up he asks, why are you here all alone. So here is the scoop on joey he is the cutest guy ever(at least that is what i think). He has brown hair, he keeps his hair short but not a buzz cut. His smile can make any girl fall head over heals. He is also one of my best friends. The only down fall is is that he doesn't date. It is like people at my school aren't good enough. I decide i should probually answer his question. Ohh I was supposed to be here with my firend Annie but then she had to go to a funeral for her grandma in Colorado. But since my mom was already gonna drive us to the mall today I thought i would come anyways. So that means you aren't here with anyone, he asked? No why would I be. Are you here with anyone, you never come to the mall? No i am no here actually i was looking for you and your mom said that you were here. I tried calling your cell but no one answered. Yea I forgot i left it at home it was chargeing. Why would you be looking for me though. Weren't you hanging out with the guys today. Well i was but then i decided to tell them i couldn't make it. I wanted to hang out with you today if you are ok with that. Sure why wouldn't i be.(i am thinking omg he wants to hang out with me instead of the guys).

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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptyMon Jan 25, 2010 11:27 pm

here is the next part hope u like it!!!


" All i want to know is why would you want to hang out with me instead of the guys?" I asked him curiously.
"well you are like one of my best friends, and you know i like spending time with you. right?" he responded.
"Umm.. sure," i said not to sure of were this conversation was going.
" well this is really hard for me to say but.." he said after a minute of silence.
"what are you trying to say, you know you can tell me anything." I said to him.
"i was trying to say um. if you mabey wanted to go out with me sometime?" Joey asked me.
"you mean like on a date where i would be your girl friend?" i said kind of shocked.
"if you dont want to you don't."he started.
i stopped him before he could finish his sentance."no i would love to go out with you sometime. I am just curious why me you have never dated anyone at our school before?" i asked.
"well if I would have know you would have been so willing to go out with me i would have asked you years ago. But i thought you only liked me as a friend so i didnt want to ruin that relation ship." he said while he was blushing a little.
"wait years ago? what do you mean?" i asked now very confused.
"Yes years i have liked you ever since we were thirteen." he stated.
"Really i have liked you since then too. But why me why did you choose me. I am not popular like some of those other girls. and i am not pretty like some of those other girls. Why do you like me?" i asked.
"I like you because when we met when we were thirteen for real. i knew you were the one, it was like we were ment to be together. It is like i actually knew you i wouldn't be whole again if i wasn't with you. Does this sound crazy?" he asked all in one breath.
"no not crazy because that is exactly what i felt too. There is a word for that it is called soulmates. BUt i don't think they exist." i said to him not looking away from his eyes.
"soulmates. really do you think they exist? well why not I mean why would that be so crazy i mean we were raised to beleive that soulmates were just a fairy tale. BUt what if they are real? What if are parents just said those things not to let us down?" Joey said still blushing.
" I think that soulmates are real or why would we be sitting here saying all this stuff. I wonder what else is real that we dont know about?" i said playing it cool. But my stupid contsious was screaming at me to tell him the truth."umm Joey there is something i have to tell you."
"what is it maggie?" joey asked in his you can tell me anything voice.
"Well the truth is that Annie's family didnt go to colorado. the truth is I dont know where they are.All i know is that they have been kidnapped." I said hopeing he beleived me.
"How do you know this?" he asked.
"well see i got a call on my cell phone and it said it was from annie"s cell phone, but the person on the other line wasn't annie it was someone i haven't ever heard before. All the person said was you're next. So then that night i went over to annie's house while my mom was out with her friends, and the door handle was broken off so i walked in her house. I walked through every room looking for clues to who did this and when i got to Annie's room i found a bright pink post it note. The note said: once you find the treasure there will be a clue as to who I am and where I am. So i started thinking I started with Annie's treasure adn then I went to look for her little brothers treasue, but there was no post it note. Then I thought i was really stupid fro not thinking of this first I should have known what the treasure was. I should have know that the treasure would have been the family so i looked at the family portrait and there was a clue. That clue said:You aren't as dumb as I thought you were magpie. Day by day they will get hurt day by day they will get closer to death. You must hurry! If you find the evidence you will find the next clue. I got done telling this part before he interupted.
"wait they mentioned you with a nickname, Magpie I think it was.Do you know who did this?" he asked.
TIme to tell more of the truth."Actually Yes i think i do. The only two people that called me that were my dad and my grandma.But since my grandma has been dead fro two years then the only person left is my dad." i confessed.
"wait i don't understand why would your dad want to do that?" he asked obviously very confused.


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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptySat Feb 06, 2010 8:46 pm

here is the next part

"this is not the way i wanted to tell him." i thought to myself."the reason is that my dad abused me and my mom when i was younger, and Annie's parents testified against him. Me anad Annie werent friends back then but after that we started hanging out and a couple years after that we are like best friends. My dad served 5 years in prision, but now that he is out he wants revenge i guess." I tell him. I was looking at the ground while I was saying this. As i was saying all that stuff I was haveing flash backs. When i finally looked up I realized i had tears running down my face."god I cry alot." i told myself.
" But why does he want revenge on Annie's family?" he asked.
"I think he thinks that if Annie's parents hadn't testified then he wouldn't be in prision." i said hateing this topic." I had never told anyone this." I told myself.
"WAs there anymore clues?" he asked tryinig to change the subject.
"yes actually the latest one I found said you are following the clues nicely magpie. I would have thought this would take you quite awhile to figure out. If you tell anyone what you found i will kill all of your friends, but you must hurry. the next clue is i used to take you there when you were little, you had your own little mail box. If you can find your mailbox again and you still have the key the next clue will be waiting in there for you." I said while i handed him the post it note.
Joey asked, "what key and where did he take you when you were little?"
"He used to take me to the boys adn girls club. And there used to be these little mailboxes that each of us got, but you have to have a key to open them. And sadly I dont have that key anymore I dont know what happened to it." I said remembering the fun times i had there.
"Well when was the last time you remember haveing the key?" he asked trying to help.
" I think it was in kindergarten or first grade." I told him.
"What would you say if I told you I knew where the key was?"he said shyly.
"If you knew where the key was I would say I would love you forever if you actually had it." i said exstatically
"well then I guess you will be loveing me forever because I do have the key actually it is with me. NOw you have to promise me you wont laugh when I tell yuo why I have the key with me. Do you promise?" He asked
"I promise that I won't laugh. Now why do you have the key with you?" i asked curiously.
" Well you gave me the key when we were in first grade, and I kept it. then when we were thirteen and we met for real I found the key and started wearing it around my neck because I thought of it as a key to your heart." he said while he was blushing and pulling the key from around his neck.
"Really? Do you mind if I kissed you?" i asked him.
"umm let me think about that. JUst kidding. No I do not mind if you kiss me." he said.
I kissed him. and he kised me back.
"do you want me to drive you to the boys and girls club?" he asked once we were done kissing eachother.
"I would love it if you would drive me to the boys and girls club. We just have to be back here in an hour or so." I said looking into his gorgeous eyes.
"ok then lets go." he said looking at me too.
we got into his car and drove to the boys and girls club. When we got there we went strait to the back, that is were the mailboxes were. We find the one that I used when I was little. I put the key into the lock and turn the key. I open the door and just as he promised there is a pink post it note in there. I pick up the note and read it. The note says you didn't tell anyone, did you? If you did then I would have to kill them. Magpie you better hurry, they dont have much time left. In two days there will be another clue waiting for you in your room. UNtil then you better keep your little mouth shut. I read the note and reread it. I handed the note to Joey. HE read the note and once he was done he handed it back to me. It was then that I realized that I was crying. HE realized that I was crying and he pulled me into a hug.
" Are you ok?" he asked.
"I am fine, it is just that I was hopeing for a clue as to where he was. BUt the part that really scared me was the I will kill them if you tell anyone and the you must hurry they dont have much time left part." I told him.
"yea do you really think he will go through with it though? I dont really think he would want to hurt you would he?" he asked trying to confort me.
" Unfortunatly I do think he would go through with it." I said looking down at the ground. He was stuned speechless. I looked at my watch."Oh my god it is already 3:30 my mom will be coming soon." I said looking up from the ground.
"ok do you want to go back to the mall then?" he asked trying to help me.
" Yes that would be good." i told trying not to be mean but really I was bawling inside.
"Or do you want to call your mom and say that I would bring you home in a little bit?" he asked me.
"Umm I could call her I guess. Can I use your phone?" I asked appriciating the offer.
"sure" he said while handing me his phone.
I call my mom and "she said that it would be fine. She also said that I cant be out tooo late." I told him.
"ok. DO you want to get going then we could go and get something to eat or something.?" he said being polite.
"umm what do you want to do?" I asked him.
He said,"Lets go get something to eat. I am starving."
"OK where do you want to go?" I say while we are walking out to his car.
"lets go to culvers. I haven't been there in forever." he said.
"ok that sounds good to me." I was really thinking" He was just there with my mom and his family and me. But he must know that it is both of our favorite resturants." we drive to the resturant and when we park the car. Once we are seated and waiting for our food he scoots closer to me wich i dont mind because I have always loved his prescence. We were like three of four groups in the resturant, but we didnt mind.
"Hey can I have the key back?" he randomly asks.
"umm yea sure. BUt why would you want it?" I ask thinking that he still cant think that it is a key to my heart.
" I already told you that I thought of it as a key to your heart." He says.
"Really but after I just told you, why would you still think that?" I ask now really confused.
"I don't care I am still gonna think of it as a key to your heart it is much happier then thinking of it as a clue to help find some kidnappers or killers." He said very confident.
"yes I like that reason better." i said sweetly. I handed him back the key.
"yes, this is now the key to your heart." he said once he had put the key back around his neck.
" I love you and I am glad you now have a key to my heart." I said and then kissed him. He kissed me back.
" I love you too. Hmm let me think I need a nickname for you." he said teaseingly.
"hmm i have to think of a nickname for you too then." I said flashing him a smile he flashed me his miscivious smile back.
" I know what my nickname for you will be" he said
"what will your nickname be for me?" I asked
"You tell me first." He said teasing me.
"fine be that way. My nickname for you will be my soul. and dont laugh." I told him.
"that is perfect." he said" and my nickname for you is my heart."
"that is perfect because you are my soul and I guess I am your heart." i said and then I kissed him. he kissed me back. Once we were done kissing I looked up and I could see people looking at us."umm people are stareing." I told him
He looked up" i guess we should go then."
i looked at my clock"oh my god it is 7:00 I am late." we get into his car and he drives me home. ONce we reach my house he pulls into the drive way.
"do you mind if I come in for a minute?" he asked.
"No you can come in if you want." i said loving the fact that he wanted to come in with me.
"Mom I am home." I shout as we walk through the door. I close the door and then turn on the light. I can hear the t.v. on in my mom's room. So i walk down the hall with Joey following me all of the way. I open her door but no one is in there. It was getting really weird.
"where is she?" Joey asked
"i dont know. it is wierd though." I said back getting even more worried. I search every room in my house and we are upstairs when we hear the kitchen door open.
"maggie are you here?" my mom asks.
"yea" I said as me and joey walked down the stairs. I stopped dead in my tracks.
"what is it?" joey said coming up behind me.
"my dad."i said anger rising in my voice. "what are you doing her?" i said to him as I stepped closer." Do you think you can just walk back into my life? After everything that you have done adn keep doing? Yea right." I said I was now right in his face.
"Maggie Hannah Marshal what do you think you are doing?" My mother raged.
"maggie just calm down." Joey said as he put his arm around me and pulled me backwards.
"mom why is he here?" I said while pointing.
"I am so sorry there is just so much I hate him for right now. you understand right?" I wispered to Joey.
"yea I understand but still." he wispered back.
"I dont have to explain anything to you but you on the other hand have some explaining what was that?" She said.
"NO I don"t" I shouted before storming past my mom and my dad. I walked outside and ran down the block. Joey was right behind me. We were a couple blocks away and I just collapsed on the ground. i started bawling." I am so sorry." I kept repeating. He held me
"it is ok I compleatly understand you can let it out I will always will be here for you." He said with understanding in his voice.
I cried some more and once i was done crying I sat up and wrapped my arms around him."thank you" I said to him.
" I just cant beleive he would have enough nerve to go over there, and if it weren't your house and if your mom wasn't there and for the fact that he said he would kill annie and her family I would have killed him right there. He sickens me." He said clearly very upset.
I could feel that he had meant it too."thank you" I said again. I leaned against him." we better go back." i said dreading it.
"ok if you want to." He replied with a tone that told me that he really didnt want to go back.
We walked back. when we walked in I could tell my dad was still here. the I heard my dad say.
"do you think she told that boy anything?" my dad said
"I dont know he didnt look like he knew and I dont think she would tell him if it meant Annie and her family getting killed. that was very cleaver of you." This was my mom that said that.
tears were coming to my eyes. but I motioned for Joey to follow me up the staris and we went into my room. "Can I spend the night at your house?" I asked him. He was obviously still in shock over what he had just heard.
"yeah, I think my mom will understand." He said.
"thank you I just can't handle that. I mean my mom was in on it too." I told him then I started to pack my clothes. I grabbed two shirts and two pairs of pants. I ran to the bathroom and grabbed what I needed from there and went back into my room. "I think I have everything" I said.
"Ok do you want to get out of here then?" He asked.
"Yes and quick before they figure anything out." I replied as I grabbed my phone.
"lets go," he said as we walked down the stairs.
"Where are you going?" someone asked from behind us, but i was not in the mood for answering.
"Maggie Hannah Marshal you get back here right now." My mom said. But again I didn't feel like answering or obeying.
we got into his car and he started to back out of the driveway. once we were far enough away he pulled the car over to the side.
" are you ok? But I don't understand why your mom would do that?" he asked.
" i dont know but to think I almost told her and now Annie's family will die because of me I was being selfish and I wanted someone else to know so I told you. How will I ever because ever beable to speak to eighter of my parents again?" I said and then realized I was shakeing.
He realized I was shakeing then he said," Do you think that they know that you over heard them or that you told me?"
" yes, they will know that I had overheard them or I wouldn't have left with you. Also they will know I told you because they know that if I had overheard them then they would have know that you over heard them too and also they could probually tell from the way I acted earlier." I replied and I wasn't shakeing as badly.
We had reached his house and we got out. He took my hand as we were walking inside his house.
"Mom are you here?" He called as we walked into his house.
" Yes I am coming be right there." His mom called back.
"Ok we will wait."he replied.
His mom walked down the stairs.
"oh hey Maggie." Then out of nowhere she said,"What is wrong? What happened to you?"
"MOM." Joey said.
"What I know something is wrong. So what is it?" she asked.
"MOM" Joey said again."We just got here."
"OH and of course you can spend the night." she said to me.
"wait how did you know I was going to ask if i could spend the night?" I asked considering I had left my stuff in Joey's car.
"I just know things.. and considering that it is 8:30 at night I just assumed." she said back."Joey don't be rude go het here things." she said to him.
"yes mother." He replied as he was walking outside.
"I see he hasn't told you anything yet, has he now?" she said as soon as he was out of earshot.
"hasn't told me what?" I asked very confused which is alot these days.
"He hasn't told you anything about his family has he?" she said.
"What do you mean like a big family secret?" I asked not sure what she was trying to say.
"Mom what are you two talking about?" Joey said as he walked back in the door.
"We were just um." I started.
"We were just decideing where Maggie was going to sleep." she finished.
I thought that was very weird but I didn't say anything.
"Ok so what have you decided?" He asked his mom.
"I thought she could sleep down here on the couch." she said as if we really had planned something.
"no not on the couch that is right underneath the window. she will sleep upstairs."Joey proclaimed.
"Joey is there something you are not telling me?"His mother asked.
"oh like you don't already know." Joey said.
"Ok is there something that I dont know? your mom was asking if you told me about some family secret or something." I said really not sure if she was crazy or if I was going crazy.
"you did what mom?" He said in a defensive tone.
" will someone tell me what is going on I am so confused." I said feeling left out.
"Well my mom was about to tell you something that I think would make you not like me anymore and we had both agreed we would tell you later. But now I can see that one of us forgot about that little agreement." He said while glareing at his mom.
"Well I just figured you had told her considering now that you are a couple now." She said.
"How did you know that?" I asked her.
"Joey I think you should just tell her." She said.
"Tell me what?" I asked getting annoyed.
"Mom you couldn't have let me do this my way could you?" He asked her. the he turned to me and said," My mom can sense people's feelings and she can see the future."
"Can you do anything cool like that?" I asked him totally fascinated with what he was saying.


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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptyThu Feb 11, 2010 6:38 pm

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"Not exactly but I can do some cool things." He said.
"Well what can you do?" I asked him.
"This." He said but not with words but in my mind."Also I can link people's minds so they can communicate together." He aslo said in my mind.
"Really. Can you do anything else?"I asked him curiously.
"Well I can kinda heal people." He said.
"Oh my god that is so cool. Why didn't you tell me before?" I asked him.
"Well I always tought that you would think that I am a freak or something." He told me while looking at the ground.
"You a freak never. You just learned about my crazy messed up family if anything it is my famil that is wierd." I replied.
"Well you can always leave your family and never have to deal with it anymore but my powers are stuck with me." he told me and then he actually looked at me instead of the floor.
"So can I come back into the conversation yet?" HIs mother asked.
"should we let her?" Joey sent to me in my mind.
"Oh my god that kinda scared me, and I think she can come into the conversation now." I said.
"Sorry." He said in my mind again.
"No it was just unexpected, and I think it is cool." I exclaimed.
"Ok do you want me to like our minds so we don't have to talk out loud?" He asked in my mind again.
"Are there any risks?" I asked.
"Not that I know of." He replied out loud this time.
"ok. Should I be scared?" I asked.
"No." He said in my mind.
"Ok then that would be cool." I told him forgetting that his mom was even in the room.
"Hey are you guys gonna tell me whats going on and why Maggie is sleep over?" She asked breaking into our conversation.
"Ok now say something in your mind." He instructed.
"But I don't know how." I thought.
"Perfect you did it right." He thought back.
"Really?Cool." I thought back.
"Do you think we should tell my mom about everything she might be able to help?" He asked/ thought.
"I don't know. I don't know if we can trust her, I mean sh ei syour mom but I just don't know who to trust right now. What do you think?" I thought to him
"Ok we will wait for a day or two to tell her if that is what you want." He thought back.
"thanks and I love you." I thought to him. I realized his mom was waiting for an answer but didn't think much of it.
"Your so very welcome my heart." He thought useing the nickname he gave me.
"Umm. I think your mom is waiting for an explanation." I thought to him.
"Ok we better give her one then. What should we say?" He asked
" Mabey we could say that umm..." I thought to him.
"Mabey we could say that she wasn't in a good mood and she had been hanging with her friends and she was drinking and you didn't want to deal with that. Would that work?" He asked me.
"Sure we could try it. We better give her an answer she is getting impatient." I replied. When we both came out of our private conversations we realized we were sitting on the floor and we were hugging each other, his mother was just standing in the doorway looking very confused.
"What were you asking? Joey said out loud which was wierd considering that me and him just had a private conversation.
"I was wondering what was going on and why Maggie needs to sleep over." She said
"Well see my mom hasn't been in a good mood and then she went out with her friends and has been drinking and i just didn't want to deal with tht today." I said the lie as if it had been the truth. See the one thing about lieing is that at least part of it has to be the truth or you have to mean it.
"Oh ok is there anything else that you need to tell me?" She asked as if she suspected something.
"No that is it." I said.
"Ok well we should probually get your bed situated." Joey said to change the subject.
"thanks." I thought to him not sure if the mind link thingy was still working.
"No problem." He thought back.
So I guess the mind link thingy still works." Hey how long is this mind link thingy in tact for?" I asked
"Umm I don't really know I mean it depends on the person I guess." He thought back.
"Oh ok." I thought trying not to let my fear seep into my thoughts.
"So where is she gonna sleep? she asked.
"Umm Upstairs."Joey said.
"Joey there is only two bedrooms upstairs and she isn't sleeping in your room." She said and from the tone of her voice I realized she wasn't comfortable with the thought of me and Joey shareing a room.
"mom please she will sleep in my bed and I will sleep on the floor." He said.
"Joey you don't have to give up your bed for me I can sleep on the floor." I replied.
"Ok But I don't know." Joey's mom said.
"Mom please" He said to her. then to me he said," your right I don't have to I want to."
I was in shock of what I just heard. No one has ever been that nice to me. That is why I missed what his mom had said. I wouldn't have know anyone had said anything till I heard Joey's mental voice.
"Hey come on my mom agreed that you could stay in my room and you look lik eyou are about to collapse lets get you upstairs." He said.
I hadn't realized I was tired till I got upstairs. We walked into his room and I just collapsed on the bed. I had a good night sleep and in the back of my mind right before I drifted asleep I hear Joey say.
"Good night. I love you."
I was too tired to reply. I was dreaming about me and then it turned into a nightmare. I woke up with a jolt. It took me a minute to realize where I was. By then I realized I had woke Joey up."Sorry" I said.
"It is ok.Are you ok? That nightmare was wierd thought were you dreaming it?" He asked and by the look on his face he was confused.
"wait you were haveing the same nightmare as I was? Is that normal?" I asked.
"Umm I don't really think that was normal.Was your nightmare about the stuff that I have just learned and then Annie's family suffering?" He asked.
I was praying that it was n't the same but it was."Yes."I said.
"That was really weird it was as if I was there." He said.
"I know" I said then I realized I was trembling. He noticed it too and came to sit by me on the bed. He pulled me into a big hug.
"We can get through this." He wispered
That was all of the reasurance that I needed."Thanks. You know any time you don't want to deal with this then you can alway walk away and never look back." I wispered back in fear of his mom hearing us.
"You know that I can't just walk away and pretend that I don't know anything. Do you know why I can't do that?" He asked.
"Well I am pretty sure why but I am not positive. Will you tell me?" i asked well actually I thought it too him not wanting his mom to hear us.
"Really you can't think of why I just can't walk away?" He thought."But if I must tell yuo why I just can't up and walk away it is because of you. I wouldn't be able to live with myself if something happened to you because I descided to walk away and let yuo do this on your own."
"Really?" I thought back."is that really why?"
"Why isn' t that answer good enough for you?" He shot back.
"No that is not how I meant for that to sound. It is that I still can't beleive that you really care that much about me." I thougth back quickly.
"Why can't you beleive how much I love you?" He thought with what sounded like hurt.
"It is just that I have really had no one that really loved me except for my mom and that turned out bad." I thought back.
"I am so sorry I shoudn't get all mad like that it is just sometimes I forget that." He thought.
"i am sorry I don't want to make you mad." I thought"it is just this is all so new to me." He pulled me into a hug. I hugged him back." I love you" I said out loud and in my thought.
" I love you too." He said and then he kissed me. It was a sweet kiss and just the thing I needed.
"Thanks." I said after we were done kissing.
"For what?" He asked.
"For everything." I explained."And for loveing me when you just saw how messed up my life was."
"Whats not to love about you. And I know how bad your life is and that makes me love you even more." He exclaimed.
"Thank you." I said for about the millionth time that night or early morning. That was when the tears started comeing. I was appalled with myself I have not cried in ten years and now all of a sudden I start bawling my eyes out. I had not realized that Joey had heard that till I heard him say.
"Mabey since you have had all of that emotions bottled up for so long that they just can't take it anymore, or mabey you have finally found someone that knows you and that you feel safe with and that you love and they love you and you just can't control your emotions anymore. I think that is what ten years of bottleing up your emotions can do to you."He said.
That made me cry even harder. Joey just held me and every now and then would wisper.
"I love you or your are worth loveing, or it is ok you can cry and I will still love you."
That is what I really needed to hear right then. Once the water works had stopped I just clinged to him.
"hey it is almost morning. Do you want to go and watch the sun rise with me?" He asked.
"I would love to watch the sun rise with you." I exclaimed and the I stretched and got out of bed. Me and Joey had leet go of each other by now and we were holding hands.
We walked outside and sat on his back porch.
"isn't it beautiful." He said.
"Yes it is." I replied in total awe. I don't remember when the last sun rise i saw was. We sat there until the sky turned to its normal color. We walked hand in hand to the old tree swing that he had.
"Do you want to swing?" He asked.
"Sure." I replied. We swung on the tree swing, me smileing and looking over at him and him smileing in return. It was a picture perfect moment. then I fell to the ground and started laughing.
"Are you ok?" He asked.
I answered in between laughing," Yes I am." I was laying on the ground. He layed down next to me." That was kinda funny." I said.
"Ok I will admit it it was kinda funny." He replied. Then we were both laughing.
When we had both stopped laughing I sat up.The sun was high in the sky."I am hungry. What about you?" I asked.
"Starving. What do you want to eat?" He stated.
"I don't know. What do you want?" I asked
"Lets go back inside and make some omlets. Does that sound good?" He asked a he stood up.
I stood up too. " That sound fabulous." I exlclaimed. We walked into his house hand in hand. We had just walked into the kitchen when we found pancakes and omlets and orange juice already on the table.
"Mom" Was the only thing he said.
I knew what he meant. He had meant that his mom had made this for us."That was really nice of her." I commented.
"Yes it was. So what do you want?" He asked me.
"hmm it all looks so good. What are you going to have?" I said
" I think I am gonna have some pancakes first." He replied.
"That sounds good." I said as I grabbed some pancakes. We took a seat next to eachother. "Dear god thank you so much for Joey and help me deserve him." I prayed silently in my mind.
"You think you don't deserve me?" He asked.
"Actually I didn't think you could hear that." I said while i started blushing because I was embarrased that he had heard that.
"Well I did'nt know it would last this long. But that is weird because When I am in a mind link with someone then I can't read other people's minds. But when I was in a mind link with you then I was able to read my mom's mind. It is so wierd." He said.
"Wait so you mean this isn't like normal mind links you have been in?" I asked confused.
"no thye usually wear off in a couple of hours and if I do go to bed and the mind link is still intact I never have the same dreams as them. It is really wierd." He said.
I was getting scared but I knew that Joey was equally confused. So I didn't say anything.
We had finished eating breakfast and we were up in his room when my cell phone rang. The caller id said it was from my house. Uh Oh. I answeredit but put it on speaker. "Hello." I said.
"Maggie is that you?" The voice sounded like her mom's.
"Who else would it be?" She replied.
"Where are you? Are you alone? Are you with Joey?" She fired the questions at me.
"I am not alone. I am with JOey but I am not going to tell you where. You have to tell me some things first. Like for starters why was dad at your house?" I asked.
"I don't have to tell you anything and it is none of your buissines why your father was at our house." She fired back.
"Fine then it is none of your buissiness where I am or who I am with so if that is all you called for then good bye." I stated.
"Maggie Hannah Marshall You can not talk to me that way." she yelled.
"I just did." I said then hung up the phone.
"I hate her! I hate her!" I practically yelled.
"No you don't" Joey responded.
"Yes I do. I could hear my father in the backround. I can't beleive her. I can't beleive she would do that to me. I hate her." I replied. He grabbed me in a hug.
"It will get better." He reasured me.
" I don't see how considering everything." i replied. I was glad I had someone I could trust and that he loved me.


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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptySat Feb 13, 2010 6:40 pm

this part is really short but I wanted to post it.


"Once this who thing is over your life will get better." He said.
"Ok I guess I can wait and see." I said.
"We will get through this and save Annie adn her family." He said.
I pulled away quickly" Oh my god I totally forgot about them, it has been two days since we found the note. We have to get into my house some how get the note that is supopsed to be in my bedroom." I exclaimed.
"Hold on a minute. How are we supposed to get back into your bedroom and how do you know they are gonna keep putting out clues for you now that they know you told someone?" He asked still kinda shooken from me pulling away so quickly.
"I didn't even think of that. I am hopeing that he will still pu tthe clue there but now I dont know if he will." I said.
"Well even if he did how would you get back into your house without your parents noticeing?" He asked.
" I would climb through the window duh." I said while a grin flashed on my face.
"And how would you climb in through your window?" He asked.
"Don't you remember the tree fort that we built in my back yard?" I asked him.
"Yes how could I forget we spent a whole summer building that." He said grinning ear to ear.
I started to laugh.
"What is so funny?" He asked.
"Just your face. If you would have seen it you would have laughed too."
"Ok then.So when do you want to try to get back into your house?" He asked.
"I was thinking about 2:30 because my mom is usually out or sleeping." I replied.
"It is 2:00 right now so do you want to go over there in like fifteen minutes.
"Yea that would be ok I guess. You don't have to come with me I can do this on my own." I stated.
"Yea like I am going to let you go back into your house with your parents by yourself that would be compleately stupid of me." He replied.
"I can handle them."I retorted but I was really thinking that I am glad that I don't have to do it alone.
"Well that is too bad because I am comeing with you and that is final."His voice lat me know that he was serious.

It was 2:30 and we were just driveing down the street right behind mine just incase my parents came home or were home. We parked the car and got out.We walked through the neighbor's back yard and jumped the fence. The only thing standing in between me and my room was the tree house. We climbed up the ladder and crawled into the tree house. I leaned through the tree house window and opened my window that god that I left i unlocked. I climbed trough the tree house window and went through my bedroom window. Joey was right behind me.


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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptyMon Feb 15, 2010 1:41 pm

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Sure enough there was the note it was on my dresser. The note read I know you told that boy. That wasn't very smart of you magpie. Then the way you acted twards me the other day makes me want to hurt them. Oh an dby the way Annie was screaming for someone to come and save her last night when I broke her arm. You better hurry. I gasped as I finished reading the note. I dropped the note and stumbled backwards. I collapsed onto the floor.
"Maggie are you ok?"Joey asked frantically.
"Truthfully no." I said still in shock of what I just read. I drifted into darkness. As I fell into the darknes I heard Joey say.
"Maggie Maggie come back to me."
When I awoke I was at Joey's house and in his bed. I sat up with a jolt then I grabbed my head. I was in so much pain that I collapsed back onto the bed."Joey." My voice cracked.
"Maggie you are awake.How are you feeling?" he asked while sitting up.
"Wait how did we get back here? I have a killer headache but besides that I think I am fine."It was a total lie but I didn't care.
"I drove you back you passed out on your floor and I carried you back to my car and then I drove you to my house." He stated.
"Thank you so much I never want to go back to that house ever again. I hate him and if it were up to me I would go and kill him right now. But I need to find Annie and her family.
"I know." He said."At least we know that Annie and her family are close."
"Yes I just wish he would have given me a clue to where they are."I said suddenly very depressed.
"Well he actually did without meaning too." He said.
"What do you mean?" I asked very shocked. I sat up. I saw the black dots again but I ignored them.
"I mean he gave us a clue without meaning too. Did you even notice that something had been writen on the top of the note?" He asked with a smile comeing over his face.
"no what did it say?" I asked.
"It didnt say anything it was a phone number." He replied.
"how is a phone number gonna help us?" I asked I couldn't even think right now.
"We could look up what the phone number was too." He said very sure of his plan.
I didn't see how that was going to help but I couldn't argue right now my head hurt too much.So i just agreed with him.
"oh my godsh I had been so caught up with the stuff we were talking about I didn't realize you were in that much pain. "I will be right back with some asprin or something."
"Really I am fine." I said even though I knew I wasn't.
"No you are not." He stated. then he got up and left the room.
When he came back he had asprin and a glass of water. I took the medicine without complaining. Then I asked, "How did you know I was in pain? I didn't say anything about it."
"I could just sense it. It is like I said before this isn't a normal mind link." He answered my question the best that he could.
"Yea that part still confuses me." I stated.
"Yea it confuses me too." he replied.
"I don't know what to do anymore." I said not sure where that thought came from.
"What do you mean." He asked curiously adn worried at the same time.
"It means I don't know what to do with my life anymore." I stated."hey what time is it?" I asked.
"nobody ever knows what they are gonna do with their life. and it is 1:30 in the morning." He stated.
I looked over at his clock just to be sure. It was 1:30 in the morning but it wasn't tuesday it was friday."I have been passed out for four days?" I asked.
"Yea you would stir every now and then but besides that you were asleep."He said.
"What did you do while I was passed out?" I asked again.
"Sat here and then when I needed to sleep I would sleep on the floor just in case you woke up."He said not looking away from my face like if he did I would disapear.
"Wow he must really love me" I thought to myself.
"More then you could ever know."He said in my mind.
"That was a personal thought."I sent through my mind.
"I wasn't looking through your mind you were thinking really loudly. He sent back.
"Ok I geuss I do think really loudly sorry."I sent to him.
"No problem. I don't mind looking out for you especially when you were unconsious. but I did have really weird dreams when I was sleeping. Were your dreams wierd?" He asked out loud.
"no I didn't dream I was haveing flash backs from my life." I said."What were your dreams of?" I asked.
"Actually they were of you. Were you haveing flash backs of when you were little?" He asked.
"Yea. But why did you see what I was seeing?"I asked.
"Actually I think it was because I was so concentrated on you." He replied.
"Wait what happened while I was unconsious?" I asked. I had caught a part of his thought of what had happened.
"What do you mean?" He asked.
"I caught a part of your thought and it told me that something bad had happened while I was unconsious." I replied.
"ohh you saw that part? I was trying to not let you know it was just too weird." HE replied.
"Just tell me or I will think the worst." I pleaded.
"Ok but it isn't really that bad just wierd. Ok so I couldn't go through the window to get out of your house so I went out the back door. That is right when your dad and mom showed up. They started to chase after me but I was faster. They chased me through the back yard and over the fence but once I was in my car I lost them. That was when your cell phone rang, I answered it and it was your father. He told us to watch out or our pretty little world was going to come crashing down. But the wierd thing was that there was some other guy with them I had never seen him before but he had this savage grin on his face." He said not looking at me at all.
It was probually good that he wasn't looking at me because I had started crying and the look on my face was horrid. I was trying to convince myself that this wasn't real. I don't think I would be able to live if what he was telling me was real. Not sam anyone but him.
"Maggie what's wrong?" He asked.
"No No this can't be real." I stated I started rocking myself.
"Maggie." He said then he put his arms around me."It will be ok we will save them.
"Don't you get it? It is almost impossible to save them now." I screamed.
"What do you mean? What's going on?" He asked genuinely concerned.
"It's Sam that guy you saw with my parents." I stated
"Yea so what." He replied.
"SO what? So what? That is the guy that has been in jail more times then anyone can remember. And When him and my dad are working together they are unstoppable. Don't you see we can't win. Not when they are working together. DO you know why my dad was in jail the last time?"I asked still rocking back and forth.
"Yea because he was abuseing you and your mom." He said as if that wasn't enough.
"Exactly what I thought. You don't know the whole story." I said.
"Then tell me why." He said trying to get me to stop rocking.
I slapped him and then screamed."Sam and my dad not only abused me adn my mom but killed my little sister. She was only two. Sam didn't get charged with anything because there was no proof of him being involved."
He recoiled from the slap." Maggie you didn't have a little sister." He said with a look of I was crazy.


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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptyMon Feb 15, 2010 8:14 pm

"Yes I did she would be seven. They killed her two day before her third birthday. They beat her infront of me. I loved her she was the only good thing in my life. They made my mom choose who she wanted. They knew I would rather die then watch my little sister get beaten to death. Her name was Rachel. They made me watch I was only ten. Rachel's scream still haunts me till this day. After they had killed her they started to beat me. Where do you think my mom was during this. She left the god damn room. She couldn't even bother to try to save us. They beat me till I was almost dead and left me there in the basement with rachel. I thought I was going to die. Every night I would pray that they had killed me instead of her. On the fifth night of being down there all alone they came and brought me upstairs and fed me and gave me water and new clothes. I didn't understand why they had done that to me. My dad had apoligized and was hugging me and kissing me and saying that he would never do that again. But every month for half a year they would do that to me. My dad was on trial at this point but he was still alowed to see me for a week and a half every month. SO don't you dare say I never had a little sister. Don't you ever say you know what I am going through, because you don't." I screamed this at him and then ran. I ran till I could run anymore. When I had stopped running I was at this playground."Now I know what day it is. It is the 23rd of may." I thought to myself. Outloud I said,"Happy eighth birthday rachel." I broke down and cried.
I heard someone comeing up behind me. Joey go away I don't want to see you right now.
"Maggie are you ok?" she asked. It was Joey's mom.
"No and I don't want to talk about it." I said.
"Maggie Joey is really worried about you. Will you just please come back to our house.
"NO I don't want to see him." I stated. The tears had stopped but I still didn't want to look at her.
"Maggie just please it isn't good for you to be out here by yourself. I can feel your upset and greiveing." She said.
"I can take care of myself." I spat at her.
"Just please Maggie we are both worried about you. Joey didn't know he didn't mean to upset you. He told me everything. I am so sorrry." She said then she sat down next to me.
"Tell him I am fine I just need to be alone." I retorted.
"Maggie do you know what time it is?" She asked.
"No and I don't care." I spat back at her.
"Maggie it is ten o'clock at night. Just please come back with me." She coaxed.
"Ok but I am not going to talk about what happened." I said.
"You don't have to just let Joey apoligize. He feels awful about it." She replied as we stood up and walked to her car.
"Fine." I said as I climbed into her car.
We drove to Joey's house. I climbed out of the car and Joey came out of the house it was obvious that he had been crying. He wrapped me into a big hug. "Joey don't cry it isn't worth it.
"Maggie I am so sorry I didn't know." He started.
"Exactly you didn't know and this is what happened. Don't you see it would be better if you just walked away."
He recoiled as if I had slapped him."Maggie I didn't know and I shouldn't have said that stuff I didn't mean to upset you. I am so sorry. I am not going to walk away from you I can't don't you see this is exactly what they wanted. Don't you see?" he said.
"I know it is just that I forgot what day it was I was so envolved in the here and now that I forgot the most important day of the year." I said.
"What day is it?" He asked.
I started to cry"Rachel's eighth birthday." I said inbetween tears.
"I am so sorry." He said he begain crying again.
I could feel that he was genuinly sorry and he was feeling the same things I was. " Joey the world can't deal with both of us crying at the same time, or atleast yuor mom can't." I wispered.
"I know I know but I can't help it. I just can't beleive that I got you so upset and especially after you just were unconsious and it is your sister's birthday. I didn't know." He replied.
"I know I don't want you to be upsett about this it isn't your fault." I said.
"I am so sorry." He said again.
"Joey just please don't be sorry we have more important things then this. Like finding out what the phone number is too." I said.
"Ok." He replied.
We walked into his house. HIs mom was just standing in the kitchen doorway. She had been watching everything.
"Is everything ok?" She asked.
"It is ok for the moment." I replied. I was leaning against Joey. We walked upstairs to his room. He turned on his computer. HIs computer took forever to turn on and load the internet. Once his internet loaded I google searched the phone number. It said it belonged to 10636 wentworth avenue. It said that Joshua and Brenda blackbird. The last name sounds familiar to me but I don't know where I have heard it before." I said.
"Yes it sounds familiar to me too." he replied.
" I know I have heard it befofre but for the life of me I can't remember where I have heard it before.
"What are you guys up too?" Joey's mom asked.
I jumped three hundred feet in the air." You scared the liveing crap out of me."


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PostSubject: Re: they are coming   they are coming EmptyMon Feb 22, 2010 10:11 pm

here is the next part.

"I am sorry I was just comeing up to ask i fyou guys wanted to go out to dinner?" She asked.
"Sure mom thanks." Joey replied. He flashed a smile at me.
I returned the smile."Yea thanks Mrs.Olson." I said.
"Oh you can call me Sarah." She replied.
"Ok well thanks." I said. She left the room. I started to laugh.
"What is so funny?" He asked.
"Just the fact that your mom scared me. I am pretty sure that I was as white as a ghost." I replied while laughing.
"Yea actually you were." He said. He started to laugh.
"Are you guys comeing?" His mom called up the stairs.
"Yes." Joey called back. "Come on my lady." He said to me.
I blushed bright red."Ok thank you my prince." I replied.
"So now we are royalty." He stated and we both burst into laughter.
"What is so funny?" His mom asked.
"Nothing." We both answered at the same time.
"Really nothings funny? Then why were you laughing?" She asked.
"Really mom it was nothing that you would find funny." He replied.
"Ok then. Should we go?" She asked.
I looked at Joey"sure." silently to Joey I added"Come on my prince."
He replied" Ok my princess."
This erupted with some more laughter and wierd looks from his mother.
We got into his mom's car. His mom in the drivers seat and me and him sitting in the way back. I was faceing him and he was faceing me. The car finally stopped, we were infront of toco bell. We walk in the front door. I look around and I freeze.
"What is it?" He asked.
"My... my parents." I stuttered. He looked in the direction that I was looking in.
"Lets just ignore them." He suggested."Lets not let them ruin dinner."
"Ok" it was easier to agree with him then think of other choices.
"What do you guys want?" His mom asked.
"I'll have a crunchwrap supreme."He said.
"I'l have that too." I chimed in.
HIs mom ordered while me and Joey went and found the seats. We sat in the back corner. We were waiting for his mom when we heard her yell.
"Hey Joey Maggie come up here. Lets sit here. You will never guess who I ran into." She yelled.
We both looked at eachother. We knew who it was. But we didn't have any other solution or reason why we couldn't go up and sit by them so we walked up there hand in hand. We took a seat across from my parents. Joey's mom was sitting next to my mom. We ate our food in silence while my parents talked to Joey's mom. It was sickening I barely ate any of my food. I looked at Joey he barely touched his food eighter."should we ask if we can leave?" I sent silently to him.
"I don;t know ho would we get home?" He replied.
"Who said we had to go home." I sent back.
"Good point." He replied a grin flashed across his face.
"Ok I will ask if we can leave then" replied silently. Out loud I said,"I am full I think I am gonna head out."
"Me too." Joey said.
"You guys barely touched your food."His mom said.
"I am just not hungry." I replied.
"Ok but you don't have a car." My mom said.
"Would you guys mind giveing me a ride home so I could let Joey take my car." HIs mom asked.
"No that would be fine." My mom replied.
My dad just flashed a savage grin at me and Joey. I returned the grin. We took his mom's car and when we stood up to leave I flipped my parents off because Joey's mom had taken our booth. My mom's look on her face was priceless. We got in his mom's car and I let out a sigh of releif.
"So where do you want to go?" He asked me.
"umm.. Lets go to the elementary school and play at the playground." I stated. I know this sounded childish but this was where I had first met Joey.


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