princess bai
Going about a regular day
 Posts : 6
Location : Texas :)
Join date : 2010-01-04
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 | | Subject: Bailee's Poetry Tue Jan 05, 2010 12:09 am | |
| For years I've wondered for years I've tired. To find a place that I can go and hide. They don't understand wouldn't if they could. I need something else something new and good. Tonight is the night to let my heart wonder. Stuck in one place I couldn't handle any longer. Take my hand and try to see. This is a new life just for you and me. No more questioning and no more pity. This is a world just for us only you and me. This was an original piece by Bailee.  | |
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Keela♪
Discovering you have an affinity for Air
Posts : 288
Location : Floating in the Planes of the Otherworld
Join date : 2009-08-17
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Name: Bellone Rose Swanger
Age: 15...human years.
Affinities : Air, Fire, Owls, Words
| | Subject: Re: Bailee's Poetry Tue Jan 05, 2010 12:39 am | |
| I really like it.
The end is sweet in its own way. If I may ask, what inspired you to write this?
I know you don't always need an inspiration to write something, sometimes it just comes.
But, either way...Great job. Let me know when you write more. | |
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