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| | Subject: poetry that I like/ write Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:02 pm | |
| This is all just poetry that I like or write. Here is one I like...
People die...
Beauty fades...
Love changes....
And you will always be alone.
~Raksha's Mother.
Night world. Book 3: Witchlight.
People die... So love them every day.
Beauty fades... so look before it's gone.
Love changes... but not the love you give.
And if you love, you'll never be alone.
~Galen. First house of shape shifters.
Night world Book 3: Witchlight.
Last edited by Marked_by_Nyx on Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:19 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Book 3 not book 2) | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:08 pm | |
| Here area a few I wrote...
If the wind called... would you listen?
If the snow cried... would you comfort it?
If the ocean's friend died.... would you be there for her?
If the time came for you to follow them.... Would you?
On the judgement day,
People die....
The world will scream in terror
Beauty fades...
And the darkness will come
Love changes...
And it will end in blood and agony
And you will always be alone from then on. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:15 pm | |
| that is good sarah i like the ones that you wrote. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:18 pm | |
| I didn't really expect for people to read them. I just wrote them because it was something to do. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:19 pm | |
| well they are still good. Hey this is random but do you know when strange fate comes out? Sorry the post just made me remember | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:20 pm | |
| which one? And I think some time in March. I'll PM you more details. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:21 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:18 am | |
| Who am I?
Am I the white dove sitting outside your window or am I the soft snow that falls every winter?
What am I?
Am I the angel that looks over you or am I the demon waiting for your soul?
Where am I?
Am I in the warmth of a desert or the cold of the Artic?
Why do I ask these questions?
Is it because I want to know the truth or because I just want to tell the world what I can do.
Think about it. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:21 am | |
| Here is an on the spot hiku:
Snow falls above my head.
Angels sing beautiful songs above me.
I am not wrong tonight. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:31 am | |
| MOst of my stuff is going to be on the spot and will have a lot of editing as I reread them all.
Miracles. The word that has no meaning.
They do not exist. They do not thrive or feel.
They are not real or have hearts.
Miracles is not a word. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Mar 19, 2010 4:53 pm | |
| Here is a saying that I guess is like poetry. I saw it in the movie The Bounty Hunter
"Life is about making mistakes"
"And death is about wishing you had made more"
~Milo and Nicole in The Bounty Hunter | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Wed Mar 24, 2010 4:39 pm | |
| Ok so my sister submitted a poem that she wrote to some people who were making a book about poetry and guess what? She won! When she gets her book I am going to put down the poem. But for now here is a quote by her about poetry....
"Poetry is about going into your heart...
Then ripping out the words that come to mind."
~Alexandra (For safety I am not going to put down our last name) Talking t my grandma about poetry. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Wed Mar 24, 2010 4:49 pm | |
| that is good tell her i like it | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Wed Mar 24, 2010 4:54 pm | |
| i'm her sis now and she got it wrong poetry is about going into to your heart... and ripping out your soul in word form.
Sorry Alex! | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Wed Mar 24, 2010 4:58 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Sat Apr 03, 2010 4:37 am | |
| Tose arwe really great.That does sorta discribe my perspetcive on poetry. I think that it is your soul written in a twisted word manner. It is the description of your feelings and emotions. We usually write down the easy stuff, Fear, htred, or what people call dark. Light, good, and what people call justice is the hrdest thing to rite about. Because it is only human nature that we look at the negitives. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Sat Apr 03, 2010 1:14 pm | |
| Thanks. We are doing poetry unit in English now so I am going to use a few of these as well as writing more down. I'll give you as much as I can. then tell you the grade I got. (If it is good) | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Sat Apr 03, 2010 1:23 pm | |
| Lucky we are skipping peotry. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Sat Apr 03, 2010 1:31 pm | |
| I'm sorry. Well, we have to "Evaluate" poetry. As in we read one then say what it means! What the f*ck?! you don't say what it means! You FEEL it! | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Sat Apr 03, 2010 1:33 pm | |
| Yeah, you never know what the writer is thinking. Teachers should know that. But then again a lot og them are burn outs. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Sat Apr 03, 2010 1:37 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Sat Apr 03, 2010 3:20 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Sat Apr 03, 2010 3:23 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Sat Apr 03, 2010 5:22 pm | |
| We got to skip that and I just wish they would let us write our own poetry instead of evaluateing it. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Sat Apr 03, 2010 5:23 pm | |
| Same here. That is why I hate school English. | |
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