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Marked_by_Nyx
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Apr 09, 2010 8:42 pm | |
| I'm going to try it. - Spoiler:
this is a test
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xxforeverxx
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:06 pm | |
| yes just but the spoiler in the purple box | |
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Marked_by_Nyx
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:27 pm | |
| yup. It worked! Just click on the word spoiler. - Spoiler:
I stand there my hands held up surrendering. "I don't want any trouble," I say. But it was too late. BANG BANG BANG! I put my hand to my chest and gasp with pain. I should have seen this coming. The man shot me. I fell to the ground. My chest was wet now. "You get no forgiveness," I say as I close my eyes and die.
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FlamingStar1323
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:43 pm | |
| You are so good I wish I could write like you. If you feel like going of topic search: Like to talk then talk! | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:44 pm | |
| What is it? ANd I'm not that good. | |
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FlamingStar1323
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:52 pm | |
| Yes you are. And what is what my blog? If that's what it is then search: Love to talk then talk!
Then go to the one that has the exact name. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:54 pm | |
| Where? And trust me. I'm not. | |
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FlamingStar1323
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:17 am | |
| I don't know..sorry. You'll have to search it. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:18 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:01 pm | |
| Even when life is tough keep going.
Even when life is wrong you are free.
Even when life is right you are too.
Even when life is easy you know somethin' up.
And when life is is good you are happy.
Lame but ehh. I hadn't typed in a while | |
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graciella
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:03 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:05 pm | |
| *shrugs* I needed to write one. And please. I prefer honesty over anything. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:09 pm | |
| I am titling this one. For once!
Betrayal
"Why?" I asked him.
His hurt the most.
He was who I trust.
Who I loved.
And yet why?
Why him?
Greed?
Fear?
Hatred?
Did he hate me when I loved him?
Why?
Why did his betrayal hurt the most when my friends did it too?
"Because..." he answered. "I loved you. Now I love her." | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:23 pm | |
| aww that one is good but sad. if it's true I know how you feel. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:31 pm | |
| It was kind-of based on a story I read actually. Most of these are actually. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:41 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Apr 23, 2010 4:34 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:03 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:10 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:20 pm | |
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FlamingStar1323
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Wed Apr 28, 2010 7:19 pm | |
| your really good you should write some more and get them published in a poetry book. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Apr 29, 2010 5:06 pm | |
| LOL
My mom says that too. Only with actual stories. But I can't. Life's too hetic for me to do stuff like that now. Maybe some day in the future. Just not today. | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:27 pm | |
| "This is not a playground," My other scolds me.
"This is not a playbround," My brother yells.
"This is not a playground," My sister belows.
"But then where are we?"
"Our Home." My mother tells me.
"A library." My brother says.
"The store." My sister said.
"I see a playground," I say.
Ok I cannot take full credit for this poem. I am at the library and I saw a mother telling her son that it wasn't this wasn't a playground. THANKS LADY! | |
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| | Subject: Re: poetry that I like/ write Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:28 pm | |
| Ok I know it's been a while since I posted so here is yet another poem written by me for a poetic think that should be starting any minute now.
I know not who I am but what I am no. I see not what I am but who I have become. I have become what I have loathed since the beginning. When did this happen? Why did the happen? How did this happen? | |
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