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Guest Guest
| Subject: Death & Darkness Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:27 pm | |
| Screaming outside I can hear it Wish I could do something But I'm stuck Everyone sleeps Everyone but me No one can hear No one but me The scream dies And I know someone has died outside
I know it isn't that good but i'm what you can call a beginner at poems;D |
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Zoey Redbird Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 7265 Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet Name: Sarah Belle Age: 18 Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Thu Mar 11, 2010 11:06 pm | |
| no it was great!! youre doing a great job for being a beginner if u need any help or advice pm me i was a beginner too but i got the hang of it | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Fri Mar 12, 2010 11:27 am | |
| Here's another one ENJOY:
I scream and scream But no one seems to hear My dreams feels so real, I can feel his hands against my throat I can feel my lungs going out of air, And just then i realize, That it is all real |
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Nightchild Mod
Age : 27 Posts : 16373 Location : Sweetie, I don't think so Join date : 2010-01-18
Character sheet Name: Destiny Jez Fall Age: 13 Affinities : Can't miss what I aim at, Spirit and Earth..
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:01 pm | |
| Good job Felii | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:10 pm | |
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Zoey Redbird Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 7265 Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet Name: Sarah Belle Age: 18 Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:24 pm | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: My poems without genre Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:31 pm | |
| Hi here's another topic for my poems but as you see it has no genre.
My dreams come true My friends are happy My life feels good And i'm writing poems
It seems kinda crappy i know;D |
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Nightchild Mod
Age : 27 Posts : 16373 Location : Sweetie, I don't think so Join date : 2010-01-18
Character sheet Name: Destiny Jez Fall Age: 13 Affinities : Can't miss what I aim at, Spirit and Earth..
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:34 pm | |
| it sounds like a happy life | |
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Zoey Redbird Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 7265 Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet Name: Sarah Belle Age: 18 Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:37 pm | |
| *laughs* it good! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:53 am | |
| Another poem
Life goes on Whatever you do You get hurt You get healed You get love You get sorrow Whatever you get Life goes on |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet Name: Age: Affinities :
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Sat Mar 13, 2010 3:40 pm | |
| Please only make one thread for all of your poems. (: | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:08 pm | |
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FlamingStar1323 Finally mastering Spirit
Age : 27 Posts : 1327 Join date : 2010-03-18
Character sheet Name: Amber Whittle Age: 16 Affinities : Spirit of all living things and nature.
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Sat Apr 03, 2010 4:51 am | |
| that is super good. You might want to read my signature. You arn't a beginer. you have a talent. Paint your painting with your colors, your own unique style, you hand made paints, your soft feeling hand, and your wise knowing mind. Always write what your heart tells you to write. Don't force it. I hope your painting turns out good for such a good artist as your self. Always be true to your self. No one can tell you what can't come out of your soul. And may your pen make a long smooth journey. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Fri Sep 03, 2010 1:36 pm | |
| - FlamingStar1323 wrote:
- that is super good. You might want to read my signature. You arn't a beginer. you have a talent. Paint your painting with your colors, your own unique style, you hand made paints, your soft feeling hand, and your wise knowing mind. Always write what your heart tells you to write. Don't force it. I hope your painting turns out good for such a good artist as your self. Always be true to your self. No one can tell you what can't come out of your soul. And may your pen make a long smooth journey.
Thank you |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Fri Sep 03, 2010 1:40 pm | |
| Every choice is a step in your life Some are jumps from high cliffs While others are small steps on a plain road There's a reason for everything And life is a mystery You'll never know what will happen tomorrow So take care of today!
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:16 pm | |
| I'm starting to write more and more poems Life is a mystery A mystery without clues you can look into a person's eyes and see her soul But you can never really understand it But what would life be without a mystery? What would life be if everyone knew about tomorrow? Would we make mistakes? Would we learn? Because it is through mistakes we learn Would we cry and feel sad again? Or laugh and be happy? Or would we feel anger? How would we be without feelings? Without sorrow? We would be shells Shells without feelings Shells made of flesh and blood That would look like us But the feelings would be blown away Because what is a human without feelings? What is a world without happiness or sadness or even hate or anger? That's not a world That's a hell |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: World Trade Center Poem Mon Sep 13, 2010 3:00 pm | |
| Four planes took the lives of many Four planes crushed a lot of hearts But in the same time they made a lot of heroes And many came closer to what they feel in their hearts |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: World Trade Center Poem Mon Sep 13, 2010 3:00 pm | |
| Everyone was shocked by the cruelness By the hate that made them do it How could anyone crush so many dreams that big? So many lives, both new and old? How could someone want to cause such a tragedy? So many families felt and still feels sorrow So many families were split into pieces |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Tue Oct 05, 2010 12:43 pm | |
| Just a few similies: Dewdrops on flowers glimmed as diamonds in sunshine. The traffic was as slow as a snail with a lot of time. The rose petals are as delicate as antique china. kinda lame i know |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My poems without genre Fri Oct 22, 2010 7:57 pm | |
| Here's one i wrote for english class:
Taking a step Outside the store Hearing a scream, Full of pain and fear Trying not to panic But my heart beats so fast, My walking turns to running And I hurry, before Someone might die But the further I get I see nothing but blood I see nothing, And no one is screaming no more My throat feels dry And hurts like hell, My face is wet And smells like blood, A thought hits me ''Maybe it was me, Maybe it was I , Who screamed and no one else'' As the thought hits It is too late I'm already falling, Dying, to the ground |
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