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ChrissieXP Being Chosen by Nyx
Age : 28 Posts : 33 Location : Sweden Join date : 2011-02-10
| Subject: My poems about a little bit of everything Thu Feb 10, 2011 11:57 am | |
| Hi I used to have a topic when I was Everlife but I'm Chrissie now, so here comes a poem:
In the winter When everything is dark and cold Her presence Spreads love and warmth She comes with light Above her head Just like a halo She is godsent
BTW it's about Lucia, I wrote it for an assembly at school. | |
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gamer Trying to stop war
Age : 30 Posts : 31096 Location : somewhere Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet Name: Mike Age: 16 Affinities : Air and Earth
| Subject: Re: My poems about a little bit of everything Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:00 pm | |
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ChrissieXP Being Chosen by Nyx
Age : 28 Posts : 33 Location : Sweden Join date : 2011-02-10
| Subject: Re: My poems about a little bit of everything Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:03 pm | |
| Thanks so very much, sometimes I succeed in writing | |
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gamer Trying to stop war
Age : 30 Posts : 31096 Location : somewhere Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet Name: Mike Age: 16 Affinities : Air and Earth
| Subject: Re: My poems about a little bit of everything Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:11 pm | |
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ChrissieXP Being Chosen by Nyx
Age : 28 Posts : 33 Location : Sweden Join date : 2011-02-10
| Subject: Re: My poems about a little bit of everything Fri Feb 11, 2011 3:13 am | |
| Taking a step Outside the store Hearing a scream, Full of pain and fear Trying not to panic But my heart beats so fast, My walking turns to running And I hurry, before Someone might die But the further I get I see nothing but blood I see nothing, And no one is screaming no more My throat feels dry And hurts like hell, My face is wet And smells like blood, A thought hits me ''Maybe it was me, Maybe it was I , Who screamed and no one else'' As the thought hits It is too late I'm already falling, Dying, to the ground | |
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ChrissieXP Being Chosen by Nyx
Age : 28 Posts : 33 Location : Sweden Join date : 2011-02-10
| Subject: Re: My poems about a little bit of everything Fri Feb 11, 2011 3:17 am | |
| I scream and scream But no one seems to hear My dreams feels so real I can feel his hands against my throat I can feel my lungs go out of air And just then I realize...That it is all real | |
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ChrissieXP Being Chosen by Nyx
Age : 28 Posts : 33 Location : Sweden Join date : 2011-02-10
| Subject: Re: My poems about a little bit of everything Fri Feb 11, 2011 3:18 am | |
| Life is a mystery A mystery without clues You can look into a person's eyes and see her soul But you can never really understand it What would life be without a mystery? What would life be if everyone knew about tomorrow? Would we make mistakes? Would we learn? Would we cry and feel sad again? Or laugh and be happy? Or would we feel anger? How would we be without feelings? Without sorrow?
We would be shells Shells without feelings Shells made of flesh and blood That would look like us but not act like us Since the feelings would be blown away
What is a human without feelings? What is a world without happiness or sadness or even hate or anger?
That is not a world That's a hell | |
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ChrissieXP Being Chosen by Nyx
Age : 28 Posts : 33 Location : Sweden Join date : 2011-02-10
| Subject: Re: My poems about a little bit of everything Fri Feb 11, 2011 3:18 am | |
| Four planes took the lives of many Four planes crushed a lot of hearts But in the same time they made a lot of heroes And many came closer to what they feel in their hearts | |
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ChrissieXP Being Chosen by Nyx
Age : 28 Posts : 33 Location : Sweden Join date : 2011-02-10
| Subject: Re: My poems about a little bit of everything Fri Feb 11, 2011 3:19 am | |
| Everyone was shocked by the cruelty By the hate that made them do it How could anyone crush that many dreams that big? So many lives, both young and old? How could someone want to cause such a tragedy? So many families felt and still feels sorrow So many families were split into pieces | |
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gamer Trying to stop war
Age : 30 Posts : 31096 Location : somewhere Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet Name: Mike Age: 16 Affinities : Air and Earth
| Subject: Re: My poems about a little bit of everything Fri Feb 11, 2011 8:12 am | |
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ChrissieXP Being Chosen by Nyx
Age : 28 Posts : 33 Location : Sweden Join date : 2011-02-10
| Subject: Re: My poems about a little bit of everything Sun Feb 13, 2011 2:55 pm | |
| Just another poem that I wrote for my Lucia assemble: In the moonlight The snow is whiter than light Like walking on crystals See the angels in white They follow one With a halo above They bring light and joy, into your soul Hope you liked it | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: My poems about a little bit of everything Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:54 am | |
| neat. swift. thought-provoking.
It's concentrated with images, pictures, scenes, just liek a tale, a story, a novel, in moving pictures -- a movie.
Just that it's worded into concise lines.
I hope what I've said is enough, because that's all that I'm left with after reading your write. you robbed me off all my flowery language and vocabulary.
beautiful! | |
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