My Life

I love to write poems here is one:

Night's War

Not a sign of life
The silence like a slicing knife
The moon is shining up above
The air is full of broken love

Darkness has over come
What was once the sun
The sun comes back every day
But darkness wins any way

Clouds move across the sky
Look normal to a mortal's eye
The sun is coming, the stars come out
To see what this war's about

-Alexis Turner (I liked to be called Amber!)

(do you like it? post please.)

(Come on!!!!!!!!! You can critisize too!)

it was great!! i loved it keep it up

It is totally lovely! pleace pm me when you write anotherone

Write more Star. Please. With a :Cherry. on top?

Hunt

Darkness in the light
Fire burning bright
Shadows dancing on the walls
A wolf to me calls

The silver moon
I whisper to
The tunes of thy sweet melodies

The stars are gazing
The gleaming eyes of the beasts
Living in the skies
Starring down upon us

Then comes the silence
Loud and clear
The silence of the creeping spear
The whistling we can't detect
until t'was upon us

The Silence

The silence
I cannot bear
Sourounds us through the air

It awaits
Till your alone
It strikes and chills you to your bone

It never sleeps
It never leaves
It is like a thin breeze

It can be broken
But only one
Can break the spell
It's laid upon

The one is you
You are the one
To break the spell
It is upon

Now it awaits to be broken
Trough the silence
I cannot bear
Break throught the silence
Like a knife through the air

theyr both great i loved them ur doing a great job

(Thanx here's another)
Death causes broken hearts

When life comes to an end
Life is short
But so is death

Wich path was your heart quick to take
Death, enough to make any heart break

Enough to make the sun not shine
The birds not sing
Enough to blaken a dimond ring

Death a part of my life
A part that hates me
A part that makes me suffer

The part you caused
The part you gave
Torn from my soul
Was hate

I cannot hate
I cannot love
You are the reason
There will be blood

greater than the rest!! lol

thanx I don't remember when I wrote the first 4 stanzas and 2 scentences or whatever but I found it and finished it at my cousins b-day party today.

I love them all. specially the last one

thnx you guys are awsome!

That was amazing I loved all of them

thank you!

You welcome it was really good

thanx all of you i'll write another soon but i hav to go to bed. night.

Fire's Shadow
The flame is bright
It gives off light
Until it goes away

It gives into the darkness and losses its heat
Till the next time that we meet

It dosen't sleep
Nor eat
Nor find its way

It just loses its light
Like the sun at night
Or how day runs into the waters
Life goes as fast as fire
It leads you straight to death
The flames bright and taughnting
It is the final test

The fire waits
Its shadow within
Determined to win the battle

The battle is over
The darkness is out
Dead on the ground
Sinking deeper and deeper

Till it reaches its destination
It burns in the fire it once tried to be
The THing that was greater than he

The only thing that can destroy he
The thing, the tourcher lasts eternity

omg i love them ur so much beter then me!!! gah sooo good!

thnx!! but i dont know were they come from i just push in words that ryhme i just made those on the spot

thats what i do lol

What is life
Dare I ask
To put it to the test

It haughnts me still
That question
The one that will take my last breath
Away from me

Yet I still won't know the answer
Not even on thy death bed
What is life
Will always be my eternal question

And I stare into the stars
But no answer comes to me

Actually I read the first two and LOVE THEM! I love these. You're very good.

(thanks so much!)