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+12Skyeee<3 [; Socko ShelbyLeeLoveForever Mari-chan ~Maroon 5~ Hex Drippy Sak-Chan Zoey Redbird }Lyra{ Queen of Darkness Keela♪ Moonerz. 16 posters |
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| What Does Ya Thiiiiiiink? ;D | | Amazing-Sauce<33. | | 57% | [ 4 ] | | I Guess They're Good. :] | | 14% | [ 1 ] | | They're /Okay/. /: | | 14% | [ 1 ] | | Nothing Special. >.> | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | Horrible. D< | | 14% | [ 1 ] |
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Socko
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
  
Age : 33
Posts : 86
Location : Michigan
Join date : 2010-08-19
| | Subject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness Thu Nov 04, 2010 12:36 am | |
| The lyrics to the song are cute. | |
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Moonerz.
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 26
Posts : 10485
Location : Everywhere.
Join date : 2010-03-14
Character sheet
Name: Marissa Winters (Mar)
Age: 18
Affinities : Witchcraft and Shadow Casting
| | Subject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness Sun Jul 03, 2011 4:09 am | |
| Socko. D: You totally killed my hardcoreness with this.. this..
CUTE! That you talk about D: | |
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Moonerz.
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 10485
Location : Everywhere.
Join date : 2010-03-14
Character sheet
Name: Marissa Winters (Mar)
Age: 18
Affinities : Witchcraft and Shadow Casting
| | Subject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness Wed Jul 06, 2011 6:57 am | |
| Traitors and Liars and Bastards, OH MY!
I wouldn't be the first to tell you,
That you are just a jerk.
You like to pretend that the world is yours,
That your stalkers are always alurk.
But all day you're on the phone,
With your new gf, right?
So I doubt your other would have too much time,
To have to make your night.
So if you're going to lie so badly,
Please give me a warning first.
Because I have better things to do,
Than waste my time on dirt.
There was never a time I actually liked you,
Only when my best friend did.
I could never fall for a douche like you,
Cuz you're the one to rid.
You're like mice in the gutters,
Cancer in hearts,
Vegas with no lights,
Or being stuck in the eye with darts.
Actually, Honey, I take that back,
All of it in fact.
Because I'd have all those things done to me,
If it meant people like you were lacked. | |
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*~Dreamer~*
Combining your affinities to save the day
 
Age : 29
Posts : 2240
Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness.
Join date : 2009-07-14
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Age:
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:25 am | |
| I like the rawness of the last poem. Raw write, raw emotions. just raw.
I can feel the anger radiating off the write.
Not very strong diction, but very strong emotions. emotive piece of write.
Sweet~
One suggestion:
'gf' -- 'girlfriend' (gf is understood, but it's not an officially accepted dictionary word) | |
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Moonerz.
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 10485
Location : Everywhere.
Join date : 2010-03-14
Character sheet
Name: Marissa Winters (Mar)
Age: 18
Affinities : Witchcraft and Shadow Casting
| | Subject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:22 am | |
| Raw like meat? ;D
Loads of it. /:
Mhm, thanks(:
Oh, I know. It's kind of an insite, though. It's written in a way that he'd understand. Thanks for your input, though(: | |
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*~Dreamer~*
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 29
Posts : 2240
Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness.
Join date : 2009-07-14
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Name:
Age:
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| | Subject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness Fri Jul 08, 2011 9:27 am | |
| ahh i see.
anyways, i would greatly appreciate if you could return reviews by swinging by my thread to leave a couple of reviews some times.
thank you in advance! | |
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Drippy
Your friends forgive you
Age : 31
Posts : 4460
Location : Across the Universe
Join date : 2009-11-23
Character sheet
Name: Emilina Blake
Age: 17
Affinities : Earth,Water, ShaddowCasting
| | Subject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness Fri Jul 15, 2011 10:05 pm | |
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Moonerz.
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 10485
Location : Everywhere.
Join date : 2010-03-14
Character sheet
Name: Marissa Winters (Mar)
Age: 18
Affinities : Witchcraft and Shadow Casting
| | Subject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness Mon Jul 18, 2011 11:32 pm | |
| I MEAN!
Check your profile on the Imagination forum. | |
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Socko
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 33
Posts : 86
Location : Michigan
Join date : 2010-08-19
| | Subject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness Sun Jul 31, 2011 12:36 pm | |
| - Moonerz. wrote:
- Traitors and Liars and Bastards, OH MY!
So if you're going to lie so badly,
Please give me a warning first.
Because I have better things to do,
Than waste my time on dirt.
My favorite Stanza. I like this. It shows, as it was so wonderfully pointed out, raw emotion. | |
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Moonerz.
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 10485
Location : Everywhere.
Join date : 2010-03-14
Character sheet
Name: Marissa Winters (Mar)
Age: 18
Affinities : Witchcraft and Shadow Casting
| | Subject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:33 am | |
| Hahaha, Socko... Oh, how I've missed you(:
Thank you, dearie~ | |
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chey2012
Going to the House of Night
Age : 31
Posts : 108
Location : Maryland
Join date : 2012-12-04
| | Subject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness Mon Dec 10, 2012 1:47 pm | |
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