| Looking Back on Life | |
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| Subject: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 6:57 pm | |
| Hmm...I'm not exactly sure how I should introduce this, or how to explain it, but I'll try. Have you ever written a stroy and one of your characters died? Or read a book an wonder about a dead character? Here you can take a look at them in the afterlife, reflecting upon their lives.
My Character: Jaiden Paulina Phillips Age of Death: 18 Descritpion: stands about 5'5" shoulder length brown hair, her eyes are pink. She is dressed in a pair of dark blue jeans and a yellow sweater. She died from a gunshot, leaving behind her two best friends and killing her brother in the proccess. Upon waking up in the afterlife, she finds herself feeling lost and remorseful.
*Characters needed: 3 or 4, thoughb many more are more than welcome to join
~Jaiden wakes up~ "Where am I?" ~looks around. She seems to be in a meadow of sorts. She takes a few steps forward and finds a gaping hole in the ground. Inside, is the image of a small town. She recognizes it as the town she died in. The town she met Ven and Virmoli in before she died. She sits down and pulls her knees up to her chest.~ "I'm dead..."
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~EmoKassidy~ Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 10590 Location : Haveing Tea With The Mad Hatter and Cheshire Cat Join date : 2009-12-16
Character sheet Name: Karin Maaka Age: 17 Affinities : Spirit and i can see ghosts
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 7:13 pm | |
| I'll join should i put a picture? My Character: Kain Haiden Age of Death: 19 Descritpion: He died from a car crash well he got hit by a bus leaveing his family and friends behind.
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| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 7:19 pm | |
| up to you, oh, and if you have a comment, put it in () that way itdoesnt distract from the story, if you dont mind |
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| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 7:39 pm | |
| ~Jaiden turns and sees someone appear seamingly out of nowhere.~ "Who are you?" |
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~EmoKassidy~ Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 10590 Location : Haveing Tea With The Mad Hatter and Cheshire Cat Join date : 2009-12-16
Character sheet Name: Karin Maaka Age: 17 Affinities : Spirit and i can see ghosts
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 7:49 pm | |
| "hmm Where am i Who are you?" i asked looking around | |
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| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 7:58 pm | |
| (Oh yeah, this is supposed to be in first person...im dumb) "My name is Jaiden," I reply. "Er...I'm guessing we're dead..." |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 7:59 pm | |
| (is it ok if we use characters from a manga series?) |
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~EmoKassidy~ Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 10590 Location : Haveing Tea With The Mad Hatter and Cheshire Cat Join date : 2009-12-16
Character sheet Name: Karin Maaka Age: 17 Affinities : Spirit and i can see ghosts
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:00 pm | |
| ((LOL))
"I'm Kain and WERE DEAD!?" i said "Sh*t i guess i ran to late" i said | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:01 pm | |
| (whoever you want as long as they are dead XD) |
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| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:03 pm | |
| "Yeah...we're dead...I was shot after I murdered my brother..." I look away, feeling the pain well up inside me. "What happened to you?" |
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| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:05 pm | |
| name: Ren age of death: early 20's (i dont remember how old he is but just that hes in his early 20s) description: he's japanese. black spiky hair. he plays the bass. was in the band Trapnest. he was in a car crash.
i woke up on the flat of my back. i could hear two others talking. i sat up a little. "where am i?" i asked in japanese. |
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~EmoKassidy~ Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 10590 Location : Haveing Tea With The Mad Hatter and Cheshire Cat Join date : 2009-12-16
Character sheet Name: Karin Maaka Age: 17 Affinities : Spirit and i can see ghosts
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:06 pm | |
| "i was trying to run across the street before the bus and i ran and i guess i got hit" i said blinking | |
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| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:07 pm | |
| "Oh...I'm sorry..." I suddenly turn around at the sound of someone speaking behind me. "Excuse me?" I ask newcomer. He was speaking in a langauge I didn't understand. |
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~EmoKassidy~ Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 10590 Location : Haveing Tea With The Mad Hatter and Cheshire Cat Join date : 2009-12-16
Character sheet Name: Karin Maaka Age: 17 Affinities : Spirit and i can see ghosts
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:10 pm | |
| "hmm Hes speaking japanese i know it he said where am i" i said "hello" i said in japanese | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:13 pm | |
| "Japanese?" I sigh. "Languages were never my thing...ask him what his name is...and how he died." |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:13 pm | |
| ( I hope it isn't too late for me to join.)
My Character: Avril Scarborough Age of Death: 16 Description: Avril had an allergic reaction to a drug called redcreep, a beauty potion, or so we thought. Someone had given her too much of the drug and so she was poisoned. No one knew the story behind her death, but Avril herself knew.
I found myself lying there, cold and still. I got up and saw others here in this odd place and I walked towards them curiosity shown within my eyes. |
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~EmoKassidy~ Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 10590 Location : Haveing Tea With The Mad Hatter and Cheshire Cat Join date : 2009-12-16
Character sheet Name: Karin Maaka Age: 17 Affinities : Spirit and i can see ghosts
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:14 pm | |
| "Hello Whats your Name i'm Kain How did you die?" i asked | |
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| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:16 pm | |
| "What do you mean die? i was driving my car in a snow storm....." then i stopped talking. i sighed. "My name is Ren" |
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~EmoKassidy~ Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 10590 Location : Haveing Tea With The Mad Hatter and Cheshire Cat Join date : 2009-12-16
Character sheet Name: Karin Maaka Age: 17 Affinities : Spirit and i can see ghosts
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:20 pm | |
| "We are all dead and nice to meet you Ren" i said in japanese "his name is Ren and he was driveing in a snow storm" i said | |
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Zoey Redbird Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 7265 Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet Name: Sarah Belle Age: 18 Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:23 pm | |
| ((is it too late to join?? And do the characters have to be guys?)) | |
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| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:24 pm | |
| I interuppted asking, "What? We're all dead?!" |
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~EmoKassidy~ Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 10590 Location : Haveing Tea With The Mad Hatter and Cheshire Cat Join date : 2009-12-16
Character sheet Name: Karin Maaka Age: 17 Affinities : Spirit and i can see ghosts
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:25 pm | |
| ((i don't know about the join but no it can be a girl))
i looked at the new girl "Yeah all dead" i said | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:26 pm | |
| (no its not too late to join, and no they can be anybody (jaiden is a girl lol) )
"Yes, dead," I repeated, relaxing in the presence of more people. "So Ren...it's nice to meet you." I look up at the newest person to join our group. "And you are?" |
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| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:27 pm | |
| "My poor Nana......she's going to be either pisst or sad that im dead.....i can speak english....." i said to the guy. |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Looking Back on Life Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:29 pm | |
| "that's a relief.I doubt Kain wants to be our tranlator," I said with a grin. "Nana huh? I left behind my two best friends..." |
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