In The Dark - a poem by me

Okay, well first of all, here's an intro to the poem. It was for a class assignment for Creative Writing class. My teacher ripped out a page from an old book she owned, which I dunno the name of. We had to take a black Sharpie-Permanent-Marker and scratch out/blur out words, leaving things that meant something to us and whatnot, then, without rearranging it, just blurring words, you have a poem. Well, here's mine.

In the Dark - me

Here, take my hand,
We’ll keep each other from getting scared.

Scared of life,
The dark, hazy world,
A cave, a tunnel.
The dark.

This spot
Is where we are now—
In the earth.
Blind,
Perhaps…

And the lights came on and revealed—
Everyone
Frozen in place.
Frozen.
Hand in hand.



well yeah, there it goes. it was kind of interesting >_>

Well, here's a little intro thingy to the poem thing. In my Creative Writing class our teacher person told us to go on Wikipedia and pull out little words or phrases to make a poem. We couldn't change the words, just take em in or out. So yeah, my topic was Ghosts.

Ghosts

Wikipedia.com/ghosts

A ghost has been defined
As the disembodied
Spirit.
Soul.
Phantom.
Ghost.
Demon.
The transcendent,
Supernatural
Demons or deities.
Revenants--
Vengeful spirits of the dead,
Starving, envious of the living.
Sacrifice

It is believed
That the essence of a being,
The soul,
Continues to exist.
Spirits who have not passed over
Are trapped
In these places,
Where their memories
and energy are strong.


Well that's it, and i just thought it was okay. not super great, not awesome, not bad, just okay. so yeah.

its good i liked it!!

I think your poem is really good.I love to read and write poems myself.I think your poem could be found in some of the books I like to read.