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Do you like my poems/songs? | Yes | | 90% | [ 9 ] | No | | 0% | [ 0 ] | Maybe | | 10% | [ 1 ] |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:49 pm | |
| I haven't created a name for this song yet but these are the words
Air you are soft and cold Fire you will burn are soul Water you calm and bring us chear Earth you bring us everything dear Spirit you are sweat and playful All of you join on this blessed chear Sing together oh great elements Play with me and please bring us peace Now I ask last of all defeat the darkness that haunts us all.
Last edited by Crystal Rose on Mon Sep 20, 2010 9:11 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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Mari-chan Trying to stop war
Age : 29 Posts : 8899 Location : Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥ Join date : 2009-07-12
Character sheet Name: Breeann Age: 17 Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Thu Jul 23, 2009 11:04 pm | |
| ^ thats really good! it really represents the elements well! keep it up! ~Mari-Chan <3 | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:53 pm | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Sun Jul 26, 2009 12:10 pm | |
| Come to me Air so sweet and free Come to me Fire that brings the heat Come to me Water so clear and blue Come to me Earth both old and new Come to me Spirit so brave and strong Come to me Elements sing my song Destroy the Darkness that lyes in are hearts Let light shine so bright on this glorious kind of night Now roam free all of you now that this song is finaly through
Please tell me what you think of this songs words | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Sat Aug 08, 2009 10:49 am | |
| it has a deep meaning and i love them they could actually be some really good metal songs love u forever |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon Aug 24, 2009 9:01 pm | |
| HATE YOU NOW AND FOREVER
You said you would always be mine Now you say that I am not right You killed my heat and now it is dark I will never be the same never in the night At night I will wish for you to be near Now I woundered why I loved you and held you dear I never want you near me again or to see you in my head but I still love you for heavens know why just stay away and keep clear | |
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Veronica Freaking out
Age : 30 Posts : 60 Location : United States Join date : 2009-08-18
Character sheet Name: veronica Age: 15 Affinities :
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue Aug 25, 2009 5:21 pm | |
| there all really good. cant wait to see more. | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon Sep 21, 2009 8:50 am | |
| Come back to me
you took off without a word you broke away with my soul now my love has died and my passion has died to I found you but you do not return why will you not return please return my love and soul I need you to live on so return to me my heart and soul return and let me live again | |
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lexiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Seeing the 'ghosts' of dead students
Age : 31 Posts : 2072 Join date : 2009-07-22
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| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon Sep 21, 2009 5:28 pm | |
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Mari-chan Trying to stop war
Age : 29 Posts : 8899 Location : Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥ Join date : 2009-07-12
Character sheet Name: Breeann Age: 17 Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Thu Sep 24, 2009 11:08 pm | |
| these are all so ardently written...bravo!! ~Mari-chan <3 | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Sun Sep 27, 2009 9:08 pm | |
| Love
My heart came back because of you My heart is strong now for you to I love you now that I know your near Be my love and please stay near Love me for me and not my light Be my hun for now on you are my light | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:29 am | |
| Hurt
You hurt me now You hurt me then Now you say lets be friends You brake my heart You tell me lies Now again you say goodbye I missed you then I miss you now But now I may take a bow For I promise Now that I see You are dead to me I see you day in and day out But now I say I hate you now You hurt me then You hurt me now So I at last take my final bow | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue Jan 26, 2010 4:23 pm | |
| ChildHood
I sit and watch the sun go by never saying hello I sit and watch the moon rise as my heart beats so slow I sit and wounder why I live when I wish to die Then I see the moon appear and think of a song I think I see what life is about only to see I am wrong But I then wake up in the night to a childhood song Staring out my window seeing my friends face I let the tears fall knowing you'll never come back and sing our childhood song I know you are my childhood friend but no matter what I see You are and always be only a precious memory
))Please tell me what you think(( | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Wed Apr 21, 2010 2:13 pm | |
| The Death of my Life
My Life is gone My Life is bare My Life is full of dispear
I see my life no longer here I see my life no longer there I see my life as nothing more then a dark piece of dispear
My life is now over My life now is dead My life is now cut in two But now my life is gone for good | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon May 10, 2010 12:35 pm | |
| I see you
I see you when I close my eyes I see you when I sleep When I think about one thing it goes straight to you I see what you mean to me You see you are who I want I want to see you I want to hold you You are the one I love I hope you see me I hope you hold me dear I will remember you I will see you till the day I die
))please tell me what you guys think(( | |
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raven night Going about a regular day
Age : 30 Posts : 5 Location : kentucky Join date : 2010-03-30
Character sheet Name: raven Age: 16 Affinities : earth
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon May 10, 2010 12:42 pm | |
| - Crystal Rose wrote:
- I haven't created a name for this song yet but these are the words
Air you are soft and cold Fire you will burn are soul Water you calm and bring us chear Earth you bring us everything dear Spirit you are sweat and playful All of you join on this blessed chear Sing together oh great elements Play with me and please bring us peace Now I ask last of all defeat the darkness that haunts us all. that was beautiful | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon May 10, 2010 12:44 pm | |
| thanks Raven | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue May 11, 2010 1:42 pm | |
| can i use some of these in songs for my band there really good lyrics and i just did a practice run on the while reading them and the sound sick with me sreaming/growling the lyrics |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue May 11, 2010 1:47 pm | |
| sure but you have to give me some credit when you become famous | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Thu May 13, 2010 12:23 am | |
| Miss YouYou stole my heart You stole my mind Forever shale you be mine I'll miss you now I'll miss you again You'll soon be gone and dead I hear you now I hear you then All you want is to be friends You kiss me You hold me You've taken my soul Now you must leave for good You say you love me You say you don't care Now I am alone once again I'll miss you now I'll miss you then Now we leave as only friends ))Tell me what you think (( | |
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Mari-chan Trying to stop war
Age : 29 Posts : 8899 Location : Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥ Join date : 2009-07-12
Character sheet Name: Breeann Age: 17 Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Thu May 13, 2010 12:48 am | |
| Ahhh, that was beautiful.....! I can relate to it I have no luck with guys....heehee!! | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Thu May 13, 2010 12:56 am | |
| thanks Mari-chan means alot | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Thu May 20, 2010 5:05 pm | |
| Perfect Harmony
I will survive for you I will survive for me But the only thing I need Is perfect harmony You see me by day You see me by night But now I wish that I was dead Now I wish that I were gone You destroy my life You destroy your own I will not sit and watch you I will not hear your plea For now I stand for perfect harmony Perfection is a myth I know But for now all I see Is that you stand there Waiting for me to be Once again in perfect harmony I walk away to only see The tears of yesterday waiting for me Walk with me now For now I see the truth behind perfect harmony For my harmony has been here all along For you are my perfect harmony I stay still as I die Waiting to see your face While I hear the cords While I hear you plea While I hear you say welcome to perfect harmony | |
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Aiyana Seeing the Tracker
Age : 43 Posts : 14 Location : Germany Join date : 2010-05-17
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| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Thu May 20, 2010 5:45 pm | |
| Oh thats awesome, Crystal Rose! The part I do like most is the end: Waiting to see your face While I hear the cords While I hear you plea While I hear you say welcome to perfect harmony Thats both sad and awesome.. just because I think that we all want to experience this "perfect harmony"! | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Thu May 20, 2010 5:52 pm | |
| yay another good poem must write it in my poem book later | |
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