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| Do you like my poems/songs? | | Yes | | 90% | [ 9 ] | | No | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | Maybe | | 10% | [ 1 ] |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:15 am | |
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Crystal Rose
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 32
Posts : 18160
Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved
Join date : 2009-07-19
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Name: Star Light
Age: 18
Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon May 02, 2011 1:25 pm | |
| I sit and wonder what I love
Then you appear and make a smile appear
I sit and wait to see your face
And wonder if what happened before will happen again
You promise me it won't but I don't know
I look at you and say I love you
My heart has beat for you since the beginning no matter how much you hurt me
You say you love me and I believe you
You say I am the one you want now I just sit and wait for you to hold me
Say you will come
Say you will marry me
Say we will have a family together and I will be yours for all eternity | |
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Zoey Redbird
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 7265
Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come
Join date : 2009-08-01
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Name: Sarah Belle
Age: 18
Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon May 02, 2011 1:30 pm | |
| awww it makes me want to cry sis, i like it  | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon May 02, 2011 1:47 pm | |
| thats a really really good poem | |
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Crystal Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 18160
Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved
Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Star Light
Age: 18
Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon May 02, 2011 1:52 pm | |
| Thanks both of you  | |
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Zoey Redbird
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 7265
Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come
Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet
Name: Sarah Belle
Age: 18
Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue May 03, 2011 12:36 pm | |
| why are you blushing pam??? pm me please?? | |
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Crystal Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 18160
Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved
Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Star Light
Age: 18
Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue May 03, 2011 1:04 pm | |
| I just am bashful about that poem | |
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Shattered Within
Discovering you have an affinity for Water
 
Age : 31
Posts : 675
Location : on the ground in peices
Join date : 2010-09-21
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Name: Slyn Tresu Hiasti
Age: 19
Affinities : Death and life
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue May 03, 2011 1:40 pm | |
| nice poem pam i like it and the time will come just you wait | |
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Crystal Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 18160
Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved
Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Star Light
Age: 18
Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue May 03, 2011 1:54 pm | |
| I know Jonathan I wrote it because of you | |
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Shattered Within
Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 31
Posts : 675
Location : on the ground in peices
Join date : 2010-09-21
Character sheet
Name: Slyn Tresu Hiasti
Age: 19
Affinities : Death and life
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue May 03, 2011 3:53 pm | |
| ya i can tell it actually screams it every line | |
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Crystal Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 18160
Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved
Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Star Light
Age: 18
Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue May 03, 2011 3:59 pm | |
| Yeah I know | |
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Zoey Redbird
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 7265
Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come
Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet
Name: Sarah Belle
Age: 18
Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Fri May 06, 2011 1:30 pm | |
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Crystal Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 18160
Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved
Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Star Light
Age: 18
Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:11 pm | |
| Defying Gravity
I fly out my window
I fly away from my troubles
I fly away to be with you
I continue to fly until I am tired
I fly all the time never to touch the ground
I fly just to defy gravity | |
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*~Dreamer~*
Combining your affinities to save the day
 
Age : 29
Posts : 2240
Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness.
Join date : 2009-07-14
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| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:34 am | |
| I think I've read a write on this site earlier, with the same writing technique. too many repetitions. sometimes it isn't all that good, it can actually defeat the purpose of nailing a thought into the reader because we tend to switch off when we come across to many repetition. But like the fast pace feel of this poem, upbeat, rapid, active. It brings across the message clearly, with ample articulation and layered with love. <3 Thank you for sharing  | |
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Crystal Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 18160
Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved
Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Star Light
Age: 18
Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:27 am | |
| Thanks for the opinion it is much appreciated | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
Character sheet
Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Fri Jul 29, 2011 11:26 am | |
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Crystal Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 18160
Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved
Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Star Light
Age: 18
Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Fri Jul 29, 2011 12:21 pm | |
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