Blind senses. (Really bad)

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:53 pm

really good Smile

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:55 pm

I dont think so

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:59 pm

well i do

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sun Jan 16, 2011 5:01 pm

Thanks

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sun Jan 16, 2011 5:22 pm

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sun Jan 16, 2011 5:25 pm

(lol)

Chapter 5
(Faith)

I tightened my grip on his waist. "Scared?" He asked turning a corner. "A little." I said loudly threw the helmet. He laughed. "Dont worry kiddo, I got ya." He said stopping at a red light. "Okay." I said to him. He patted my hands around his waist. "All most there." He took off again but this time doing a wheely. I screamed. "You jerk." i said hitting him when we landed. He laughed. "Sorry just had to." I sighed. "Well just warn me next time." I said. "Ill try." He said pulling up to this mansion. "Oh my god." I said looking at it. "Welcome to my grandpas house." he said getting off. "But last time I saw him." I said. "That was his summer home much smaller." He said helping me off. "Thanks." I smiled. I pulled off the helmet and he laughed. "I have helmet hair dont I?" i asked trying to make it straight. "Here." He poored some water from a water bottle on his hands and smoothed my hair. "Thanks." I smiled. "Come on." He took my hand, we walked up to the front door. A man answered. "Hello master Drake." He said letting us in. "Whos the clerch?" I wispered to Drake when we walked in. "Thats Hiff. Butler." He wispered back. I nodded. "You seriously got this kinda life?" I asked. "No I could if I wanted but I like the life I had. I really do." He smiled. I smiled. "Drake my boy." His grandfather walked in. "Grandpa." He smiled and hugged eachother. "Hello Faith." He smiled and hugged me. I hugged him back. "Hi sir." He looked at me. "Please call me Kindler." He smiled. "Okay Kindler." I said. He smiled. "So I hear we have a young prophet in out mists." He said shaking my hand. "Yea." i said. "Are the rest of the councilmen here?" Drake asked. "There is just two left that need to get here. Come have some food. Ill make Luigi whip up some food." He said walking down the hallway. "Your grandfather is in a very good mood." i smiled. "Yes he is there hasnt been a prophtess in over 20 years. Plus hes happy to see me smile." He had a grin on his face. I smiled. He kissed my cheek. "Well im happy your happy." I said. We walked down the hallway and into a kitchen. "Just tell Luigi what you would like and hell whip it up. I have to make sure all the council men are here. I will call you when its time." He smiled and left. "Well Luigi can I have a belgin waffle with some icecream?" Drake asked sitting at the table. "Of corse sir, and what would the lady like?" He asked. "Um can I have some french toast?" I asked sitting next to Drake. "Of corse." He went off cooking. "Wow, Im kinda jealous." I said. He chuckled. "Why?" He asked. "Um lets see, butler, chef, awesome grandpa. I could go on." I said taking his hand. He intertwinded our fingers. "Well I bet Mitcheal is pretty jealous of me right now." He smiled. I blushed. "What do you have against him?" I asked. He just looked at me. "What did he do?" i asked. He sighed. "Hes a vampyre and shapeshifters and vampyres arent such great friends. We get territorial." He said looking at the table. "Oh." I said. "SO your territorail over me." I laughed. He blushed. "Here ya go." Luigi put down the plates. "Thanks." We said at the same time. I smiled. "Your welcome enjoy." He smiled and walked away. I took a bite of french toast. "Mhmh this is good." i siad. taking another bite. "Watch it you dont want to tell Luke that Luigis cookings better." Drake laughed eating his belgum waffle. "Can I try some?" I asked. "Go ahead." I tried it. "Thats good." I said smiling. "Can I try some of yours?" He asked. "Yea of corse." I smiled and moved my plate so he can get some. He took a bite. "Pretty good." He said. I laughed. "You got some sugar right here." I said wiping it away with my thumb. "There." I laughed. "Oh thanks." he smiled. "So how many council men are there?" i asked. "Um I think fifteen." He said drinking a glass of milk. "Wow and they are all vampyres, werewolves, shapeshifters and witches?" I asked. "Well yes and no. There are humans on the council but not many." He said thinking. "Oh is that the reason your allowed to tell one family?" I asked. "Yes that is the reason. You tell them and they either join the council or just stay nuetral." he said yawning. "How much sleep did you get?" I asked. He shrugged. "I dont know I was awake most of the night." He yawned again. "Well you need a nap." I said poking his shoulder. "No, the meeting should be starting soon." he siad putting our empty plates in the sink. Just then Kindler came in. "Well the two council member wont be here for at least three hours so you have the time to hang out." he said smiling. "Well then Drake you can take a nap." i smiled. "Thank you for telling us Grandpa." Drake said. "Of corse. I will see you in a while." He siad before leaving agian. "See now you can take a nap." I laughed. "What about you, what are you going to do?" He asked. I pulled out my books. "Read." I said smiling. "Okay brainy." He ruffled my hair. "Drake." I whined trying to fix it. He laughed. "Come on you." He took my hand. I smiled. "Where to now?" I asked. "Im taking a nap remember." he laughed leading me up the stairs. I laughed. "Oh yea." i smiled. He laughed. We stopped at the fist door. "Heres my room." He said. "Hmm I always wondered what your room would be like." I laughed. "You thougt about my room." He raised an eyebrow. "Yes to see what kinda of creatures you made with dirty clothes sweat and year old food." I laughed. "Oh." He laughed. "Youll be suprised." He said walking in. I followed. "Wow." I said, he had bookshelfs and a tv -which didnt suprise me- a lot of cultural crap. "Told ya." He smiled. I blinked. "yea you did." I laughed. He sat on his bed. "Why do you act so stupid when you have all this?" i asked. He sighed. "Cause girls dont like nerds." he shrugged. I smiled. "I do." He grinned. "Well there a couch so you can relax while I sleep." He yawned. I went over and kissed the top of his head. "Night." I sat on the couch and pulled out a book. I opened it and started reading. After a while I looked up to see Drake passed out on the bed. I couldnt help but smile. He looked so cute. He muttered something and rolled over. I supressed a giggle. I looked threw the books on his bookshelf. Shakespear, Aristotle. Man Im seriously jealous now. I sat back on the couch and started reading one of the books Aristotle wrote. I yawned and closed my eyes. I drifted off to sleep.

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sun Jan 16, 2011 6:06 pm

keep it up Razz

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sun Jan 16, 2011 6:09 pm

lol I need to write more before I post

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:14 pm

okay

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:48 pm

thats good write more soon, if you can!!!

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:35 pm

Chapter 6
(Drake)

I woke up about two hours later. I strecthed and looked around. Faith was asleep on the couch. I smiled. I got up and covered her with a blanket. I took the book. Aristotle. I laughed quietly and put it back on the shelf. I sat on my bed and looked threw the book that I had under my pillow. It was quotes that were in many love plays by Shakespear. I flipped threw the book agian and put it on the desk. I stretched and looked around. I smiled when I saw Faith yawn and sit up. "Mouring you." I laughed. "Yea yea." She said streching. I went and sat next to her. "How did you sleep?" I asked taking her hand. She smiled. "Good, suprisingly." I laughed. "Thats good." I kissed her cheek. She blushed. I chuckled. We sat there in silence for a while. There was a knock at the door. "Come in." I said sitting up straight. Hiff came in. "The council is ready." He said looking at us. "Thank you Hiff, we will be right there." I sadi smiling. "As you wish sir." He bowed and left. I stood up. I grabbed my jacket. "Ready?" I asked looking at her. She shifted in her seat. "Dont be nervous, they arent that scary." I smiled. She looked at me. "Im not nervous about that." She sighed. "Then what are you nervous about?" I asked sitting next to her. "I'm nervous about what happens after the meeting. Your grandpa said there hasnt been a prophet in twenty years. If there is a war coming, and I see stuff about it. What do I do?" She put her head in her hands. "Faith, as of now i'm your protecter. I am going to make sure no harm comes to you. Not now, nor in the future." I said holding her face in my hands. "Im going to make sure no one i dont trust of like comes close to you." I said searching her eyes. She wasnt scared she was worried. "What about Luke?" She asked holding my hands. "I will have one of my closest allies protect him." I said. She sighed and hugged me. "Thank you Drake." She wispered. I hugged her back.
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We walked threw the corridors. I wrapped my arm around her waist. I watched her fiddle with her thumbs. I smiled. "You are so figity." I said. She looked up at me and smile. "Sorry just a little anxious." I laughed. "Its fine I would be the same way." She blushed slightly. "I adore your blush." I said. She smiled and looked back at the winding corridor. We reached the douple doors. "We have to wait until we are annonced." I said looking at the doors. "Okay. Wait they dont know my last name." She said looking at me. "You'll probably be pronounced as 'The young prophetess.' So dont worry." I smiled. "Oh I like the sound of that. What will they annonce you as?" She asked. I smiled. "I will be annonced as. 'The young Langard, future council leader.' Yup thats me." I laughed. She smiled. "So your going to be the new council leader. What about your dad?" She asked. I sighed. "He died in war." I said looking away. "Im so sorry, I didnt know." She hugged me. I hugged her back. "Thats why I live with my grandpa, but dont be sorry. I couldnt keep saying he was away on buisness trips." I said laying my head ontop of hers. "I kinda told you a lie about my parents." She said looking at me. "Its okay." I said moving the hair out of her face. "They didnt die in a car accident. They were taking a hiking trip. They do that every year but I was sick and Luke said he would stay and take care of me. That night I had a dream of something attacking them. I thought it was just a dream." She trail off wiping away tears. I looked at her. "How old were you?" I asked. She sighed and continued. "I was just nine so Luke was ten. I woke up screaming and he came running in. The next day gramma got a call saying they were attacked by a rapid bear. They found my dads body but not my moms." She started crying. "Fiath Im so sorry." I hugged her rubbing her back. She stopped crying but hugged me back. "Its still scares me to talk about it." She wispered. "I understand. That would scare anyone." I said. "That why Luke never talks about our parents." She said. I looked at her. "Im am so sorry." I said wiping away the tears that remained. "Its okay." She said sighing. "Now annoncing the young prophetess and the head councilmens grandson." We smiled and laughed quietly. The doors opened and we waked threw hand in hand. "Welcome." We heard. Grandpa said smiling. "Hello Kindler." Faith said. I bowed slightly. "Hello councilmen." I said. I tightened my grip on Faiths hand when I saw Mitcheal. I glared at him. "Whats wrong?" Faith wispered, then looked. "Oh." She wispered. "Dont worry I will protect you." I wispered. He looked at Faith. His eyes were hungry. "Oh so you met my nephew." One of the councilmen said. He was a vampyre and extreamly handsome. I knew the stories about this family. They werent good people."Hello Fiath, Drake. I didnt expect to see you here." He smiled. "Hi Mitcheal." Faith said just to be polite. He smiled. "Well onto buisness now." I was relieved when my grandfather spoke. "Yes lets." Mitcheals uncle siad. "So young Drake befriended a prophetess." A witch laughed. The rest of the council chuckled. "I think its more then just befriended." I said holding Faiths hand. I saw her blush. "Well young prophetess, when did you suspect you were a prophetess?" One of the human council men asked. "Well my brother suspected it and told Drake. I just thought they were bad dreams. When I was little I would have night terrors but then they started coming true and it scared me." She said her head held high. They started murmering. "Dont worry. Ill protect you." I wispered. "Well, this is very intresting." A werewolf councilman said. "How sir?" She asked. "Well you are the first prophetess that we seen in twenty years. Well the first one alive." He pointed out. "Harold you do not say that she is just a girl." My grandfather snapped. Four others agreed with him. "Well sorry I tought we should atleast inform her." He said standing up. "May I have a look at you?" He asked her. I tightened my grip on her hand. "Yes." She nodded. He smiled and walked down. He came over and got a good look at her. "Well she is rather beautiful for a prophetess. I can tell you are one from the wisdom in your eyes." He patted her shoulder. "I will do my best to make sure your safe." he smiled. I sighed. "And you young Drake." He turned to me. "I have heard about that attack. Did you find out who it was?" He asked. I wanted to say Mitcheal, because it really was him. But, his family is to feared by others to believe it. "No sir, I didnt get a chance to identify him." I said. "Oh well, I will assign one of my gaurds to her house." He said. "Welcome to the council young one." He smiled at Faith and sat back down. I relaxed a little. "I will assign a witch to stay with the family." Dawn a young women said standing up. She was young to be on the council but she was very wise. "Thank you." Faith said. "Well if we are done here. My nephew and I have a family affair to attend to." The vampyre said standing up. "Travel safly Ritly." My grandfather said. "And you to." he said walking away. "See ya Faith." Mitcheal said smiling he followed his uncle. I growled quietly. "Well I need to speak with Dawn, Faith and Drake. I end this meeting." Kindler siad standing up. They nodded and moved aside. "Good luck young prophetess." Many councilmen said. "Thank you." Faith replied. We waited until it was just Dawn, Faith my grandpa and I. "So I will assign my top witch to stay with you." Dawn said smiling at Faith. "Thanks." Faith smiled. "And Ill have Harolds gaurd stay in the woods. We dont want to cause suspicions." My grandfather said. "Thank you all for this." Faith said. "Of corse child, I couldnt deal with a heartbroken shapedshifting teenager." My grandfather laughed. "Well thank you grandpa." I smiling. "Can I talk to you in private?" I asked him. "of corse. Dawn will need to talk to Faith anyways." He siad. I kissed Faith before walking over to where my grandpa was. "What is it?" He asked. I shuffled my feet. "I know who attacked Faith." I said quietly. He looked at me. "Who was it?" He asked his voice angery. I sighed. "Mitcheal Wects." I said looking at him

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:34 am

thats good post more as soon as possible.

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:09 pm

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Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:19 pm

yea really goood Razz

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Mon Jan 17, 2011 5:29 pm

Chapter 7
(Faith)

Dawn smiled at me. "So young one. Ill will be sending over Arialy." She said. "Okay. Can I tell you something?" I asked. She nodded. "Of corse." She said. I sighed. "The last glimpse of the future I saw. You were killed by a werewolf." I said looking at her. She gasped. "Child, are you sure?" She asked. "Yes, it was big and black and it had blue eyes." I shivered remembering it. She sighed but was still shocked. "Thank gosh I thought it was someone else." She siad. I looked at her. "You dating a werewolf. And you are in love with him." I said. She nodded. "Yes his name is Alec. He isnt the wolf you descriped. So thank you child." She hugged me. I hugged her back. Drake cleared his throat. We looked at him. "Did I miss something?" He asked smiling. "Your young prophetess just probably saved my life." Dawn said smiling. He smiled. "You did." He asked me. "Well I think so." i said shrugging. He smiled and hugged me. "Well I think thats amazing." He kissed me. I kissed him back. "I think that you two should wait until we are gone before you two kiss." Dawn said smiling. I blushed. "Sorry Dawn." Drake said. "Of corse. Lets go Kindler." She said holding out her arm. He looped it with his. "Be safe young ones." He looked at Drake. "Thank you again Kindler." I said. "Of corse Faith, I expect to see you at the summer house." He smiled walking away. Drake laughed. "He likes you." He siad. "I know." I smiled. "I had two other girlfriends. He didnt like them though, all they did was talk about shopping and shoes." He siad. I frowned. "Were they prettier then me?" I asked. He looked shocked. "No one is more goergous then you." He siad kissing me. I kissed him back. He pulled away. "Faith, I think Im in love." He said searching my eyes. I looked at him. "With me?" I asked. He raised his eyesbrows. "With Luigi, of corse I think Im in love with you." He kissed me agian. I pulled back. "I think I love you too." I smiled. He grinned. "Good." He said. "What time is it?" I asked. He checked his phone. "About 9:30." He said putting it away. "At night?" I asked. He nodded. "Luke texted that he got my message and he will be here at 10." He said looking around. "Oh well I kinda wanna change. I didnt realize how muddy my clothes were." I said looking at me. "Then lets go." He smiled and took my hand. I smiled and leaned my head on his shoulder as we walked. "Do you want to take a shower?" He asked. I shook my head. "I dont want to impose." I said. He laughed. "Girl you are in the family now. You have the right to shower here." I smiled. "Are you sure?" I asked. He nodded. "Absolutly sure." He smiled. "Okay." i said. We walked back to his room. "Okay towels are here." He put a couple on the counter. "Shampoo and conditioner are there, soap is there and heres how you work the shower." He showed me. "Okay got it. Thanks." I smiled "Okay call if you need anything." He kissed the top of my head and walked out closing the door after him. I sighed and turned on the shower. I waited until it was hot enough and got in. I washed my hair. I rinsed it and finished taking a shower. I turned the water off and wrapped a towel around me. I got dressed and walked out brushing my hair. "Thanks for letting me use your shower." I said. "Hay baby girl." I saw Luke. "Luke." I smiled and ran to hug him. He hugged me back. "So did you behave yourself?" he asked. I laughed. "Of corse." I smiled. "She even handled the news about the shapeshifters and the council better then you." Drake smiled. Luke laughed. "Im not suprised. I havent heard a rude remark from either of you. What happened?" He asked looking at us. "Well." I smiled. Drake took my hand. "Ah, I see. I knew it." he smiled. "What?" We both said. "Faith, I can tell when my little sister like my best friend. And Drake you always go super heart struck when you see Faith." he laughed. We both looked at him complety shocked. "And you didnt tell me?" I said. He sighed. "Little sister, why do I need to tell you that I know you like him I know you would be mad." He ruffled my hair. "Why does everyone do that?" I said trying to fix it. "Sorry habbit." Drake said doing it agian. "Drake." I whined hitting him I ran the brush threw it agian. "Well Luke we have a werewolf going to be watching from the woods so the attack wont happen again. And they are sending a witch to stay with you two. Plus me." He said. "Okay, but I dont like witches." Luke said. "Luke there not like wanna be *itches. They are magical people. They're pretty cool. Dawn is sending Arialy." I siad. "Oh man, Arialy hot." Drake said smiling. I frowned. "Drake." I said. He looked at me. "Sorry babe." I walked into the bathroom. "Whatever." I said grabbing the clothes on the floor. "Are you mad at me?" Drake asked looking at me. "You will never know." I smiled and put them in my pack. "Oh Faith come on. You know I hate it when you do that." He pleaded. I laughed. "I know." I slipped my shoes on. "Okay, well lets head back. I bet they are waiting for us." Luke said. "Okay. Im riding with Luke. I dont want helmet hair." I laughed. "Okay see ya there babe." He kissed me before climbing onto his bike. "Okay." I smiled and climbed in. "You seem happy for someone that was just attacked." Luke said pulling out of the long driveway. "Well love does that to ya." I smiled. "Ah, so you love him." He siad. We told eachother everything. "Yea I think I do." I smiled. "Well just be respocible thats all I'll say." He said waving one of his hands at me. I laughed. "Okay bro." I put sunglasses on and turned up the music. I made and air gituar. He laughed. I sang along to the song. We pulled into our driveway. "Dont turn off the song till its over." I told him getting out. I hoped on the top of the car and danced. Luke got out and took pictures with his phone. I laughed. Drake stood next to Luke and laughed. "Woowhoo!" I yelled. I slipped back and fell. "Fiath." Drake and Luke yelled. I didnt hit the pavement. I was in someones arms. "Are you okay young prophet?" The voice said. I took my sunglasses off and looked. "Yea." i siad stunned by how hot this guy was.

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:37 pm

thats really good keep it up!!!

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:42 pm

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Tue Jan 18, 2011 12:11 pm

Chapter 8
(Drake)

I sighed when I saw her not dead on the ground. But I stiffened when I saw a guy holding her. "You should be more careful." He said to her. "Um, okay." She nodded. "Faith are you okay?" Luke said walking over. "Yea." She said. "Thanks for catching her." I said taking her in my arms. "Yes sir. Harold sent me. I wanted to make sure I met you all before I went to my post." He bowed slightly. "Well hi I'm Luke Faiths older brother." He said shaking his hand. "Im Drake. Faiths boyfriend." I said looking at him. "Im Faith." She said from my arms. "I can see that." He laughed. "Well if you need anything just ask." Faith said. I held her closer. "Thank you. I shall be off." He jumped and transformed and ran into the forest. "Wow." Faith said watching him go. "You okay?" I asked her. She nodded. "Yea. Wearing these at 10:15 at night probably wasnt the smartest thing to do." She said putting them back on. "Okay you two lets go." Luke said heading twords the door. I carried her inside. "Did you fix my door Luke?" She asked. Noticing it wasnt in the hallway anymore. "Yea I did." He siad searching the fridge for food. "Thanks." She siad. I sighed and set her back down. Luke grabbed a bag of chips. "Night." He said walking down the hall. "Night." Faith said. She walked into the kitchen. I layed down on the couch looking up at the celing. She walked back out. "Whats with you?" She asked looking at me drinking water. "Nothing." I lied. She frowned. She set down her cup and sat on me. "What is it?" She asked. I wrapped my arms around her waist and sat up. "You think the werewolfs hotter them me dont you." I said. She laughed. "Drake your so hot they have to make a new name just to keep up." She smiled. "Okay I admit the werewolf is kinda cute, but hes no panther." She smiled. I grinned and kissed her. She kissed me back. I held her close. "I was getting jealous." I wispered. She looked up at him. "Why?" I sighed. "Cause you were being really sweet to him and you were kinda star struck." I said looking at the ground. "Yea I was being nice because hes kinda caught me and I think we should be nice to the person watching over us when we sleep." She siad. "Yea but its like you were a girl looking at her favorite superstar." I sighed. "Yea well sorry about that. No offense but all of you guys that are like witches, vampyres, shapeshifters and werewolves are kinda hot." She sighed. I looked at her. "Well Harold is right, you are very beautiful for a prophetess." I smiled. She blushed. "And you are the hottest person in the world." She smiled. "Oh really?" I asked. She smiled. "Yes really." I laughed and moved the hair out of her face. "Good." She smiled and took my hand. "Tomarrows school." She wispered. "Yea I know, good thing we go to the same school." I smiled. "Good thing we didnt have any homework." She smiled. "yea, I dont do it anyways." I shrugged. "Well you will start now." She said. "Fine I will at least pass my classes." he smiled. "Good, I wonder whats everyone going to think about the new couple?" She asked. "Well I know a lot of girls will be devastiated Im off the market." I laughed. She looked at me. "I can make thoughs girls happy anytime I want." She said. "Oh really? Then bring it babe." I smiled. She frowned. "Fine then we are done." She looked away. "Wait what?" I asked shocked. "Im breaking up with you." She got up and went to her room. I sat there for a secoung. "Faith wait." I ran after her. I walked into her room. "I think Im going to ask out Mitcheal." She smiled looking at me. I walked over. "No ya dont." I pulled her close and kissed her. She kissed me back. I pulled away. "You are such a meanie." I smiled. She laughed. "Yea I am." She kissed me. I smiled. She pulled away and smiled. Her eyes went distant and her legs gave out. I caught her. "Faith." I said shaking her. She just staired into nothing. "Come on Faith talk to me." I said searching her eyes. She coughed. "I saw them." She said blinking. "Who did you see?" I asked. "Mitcheal, and his family. They were killing humans. Drinking from them." She shivered. "What?" I looked shocked. "They were killing humans by drinking them dry. Mitcheal looked evil. Like a monster." She shook her head. I hugged her. "Its okay." I said. She shook her head. "Hes the think that attacked me isnt he." She barley wispered it. I nodded. "Yes." She stayed quiet. "I didnt tell anyone at the council because his family is powerful. And evil. They would've denied it and threaten to kill me." I said looking away. She was still quiet. "Im so sorry I could've been to late to save you." I wispered. "DRAKE." She said angerily. "You need to stop saying sorry. Its not like you were expecting him to jumped threw my window and try to change me. STOP BLAMING YOURSELF." She said standing up to look at me. "But I almost wasnt there in time." I said looking at her. She punched my in the shoulder. "Just stop it. Im fine see look at me." She said wiggling her fingers and toes. "I got ten fingers, ten toes, a head eyes ears a nose a mouth. I got a heartbeat and a pulse. IM FINE." She said angry. I looked at her. She was a strong, wise, stoburn prophetess. "I know you are." I said. I heard a knock on the front door. "Coming." Faith said running to get it. "Faith you shouldnt answer the door." i said following her. "Yea because evil little girlscout girls are going to kill me." She sighed. "Fine." I said looking away. She answered the door. "Im Arialy." Said the girl walking in.

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Tue Jan 18, 2011 10:35 pm

keep it up!!!

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Tue Jan 18, 2011 10:37 pm

lol Its not that good

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Tue Jan 18, 2011 10:43 pm

Chapter 9
(Luke)

I walked out of the hallway. "Whos is it?" I asked yawning. My eyes windened when I saw the girl. She was beautiful. She had pale blonde hair and soft see green eyes. "Hi." I said blinking. She smiled and walked in. "Hi. Im Arialy." Faith smiled. "Hi I'm Faith." They shook hands. "Hi Arialy." Drake said wrapping his arms around Fiath. "How am I not suprised you are in love with the prophet." She laughed. It was a musical laugh. "I'm Luke." I said holding out my hand to shake hers. She smiled. "Hi Luke." She shook it. I smiled. "Well um we dont have a guest bedroom. I hope the couch is okay." I said rubbing the back of my neck. "She can stay with me. We do have that bed frame in the garage and the matress in the hallway. We have it there just in case someone sleeps over and someone already has dips on the couch." Faith said laughing. "I think that sounds great thank you prophetess." Arialy bowed. "Okay new rule. Im only annonced at the council meating as the young prophetess. Anywhere else Im just Faith." She said making a superman pose. "Oh really your superman now?" I asked looking at her. "Oh you know it bro." She smiled. I laughed. I picked her up and put her over my shoulder. "Then superman is going for a swim." I laughed running out the door. "NO, I hate swimming Luke." SHe siad laughing trying to get out of my grip. "Ill help." Drake said following us. Arialy was walking behind smiling. "Thanks babe." Faith smiled trying to reach him. He grabbed her hands and I grabbed her ankles. "I was talking to Luke hun." He siad smiling. She started to swing her twords the pool. "No." SHes said laughing. "If this ruins my hair I will get both of you." SHe threatened. "Oh we know." I said laughing. "One...Two....Three." And we threw her in. She screamed and hit the water. We fell down laughing. "That was funny." Arialy said laughing. "Oh I'm having a vision." Faith said getting out. "What?" We asked looking at her. "WEll its about two guys getting beat up by a prophet." Faith said running after us. We ran away laughing. "Im going to get you two." She said running after us. We ran into the forest climbing a tree. We didnt see her but heard the door close. "Crap no." We got down and ran to the house. THe front and back door was locked. We looked into the window to see Faith and Arialy dancing to music laughing. The saw us and waved. "Let us in." I yelled trying to opened the window. Arialy walked over. "Sorry we cant hear you. Plus everything is locked." She smiled." I staired. "Come on please." I pleaded knocking on the window. Arialy blew me a kiss and went back to dancing with Faith. "Babe let me in." Drake said knocking on the other window. "Whats the magic word?" She asked him. "Please." He said. She laughed. "Not even close. Sleep well." SHe closed the blinds and turned off the music. "You can sleep in Lukes room." I heard Faith say to Arialy. "Faith." I yelled. I heard them laugh. "You just had to throw her in the pool." Drake said laughing. "You didnt have to help me." i said sitting on the steps. He sat next to me. "You guys have a basement right?" He asked. "yea. Why?" I asked. "Because I can get in. Follow me." He got up and walked over to the small window that led into the basement. "I can fit threw that." He said opening the window. "How?" I asked looking at the size of the window. "You'll see." He changed into a panther and he climbed threw. "Go to the front door." He said from inside. I closed the window and headed the front door. When I got there Drake was already there in the door way. "Told ya." He laughed. I sighed. "Yea yea." I said walking inside. "She took your room man." Drake said closing the door. "Who?" I asked. "Arialy." He laughed. "Great." I said sitting on the couch. "Yea. Well night man." He said walking down the hallway. "Dont do anything stupid." I said after him. "Will do." He said before disapearing into Faiths room. I layed down on the couch and closed me eyes.

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Wed Jan 19, 2011 10:21 pm

thats really good!! um you might want to do a spelling check cause theres a few mistakes.

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Wed Jan 19, 2011 10:24 pm

yea I know. Thats the one thing Im bad at is spelling

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Thu Jan 20, 2011 12:47 am

its okay i'm bad too!! keep it up tho.

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Thu Jan 20, 2011 9:37 am

its getting better lol Razz

and its still awesome