Blind senses. (Really bad)

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Thu Jan 20, 2011 8:33 pm

lol okay

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Fri Jan 21, 2011 7:12 pm

Capter 10
(Faith)

I woke up to Drake next to me. I checked my alarm. He turned off my clock. I sighed and got up. "Stupid Drake, Im going to be late now." I said looking for clothes to wear. "Sorry love." He said rubbing his eyes. "Its okay. I need to take a shower." I said walking to the bathroom. "Okay. Ill be back to drive you to school." He siad heading out the door. "Okay." I said taking a shower. When i was done I staightened my hair. I walked out and went to Lukes room. I knocked on the door. "Yes." I heard Arialy. "Um bathrooms free if you need it." I said. She opened the door. "I already took one. I been awake for a while. Thank you though." She smiled. "Okay. Well I need help waking Luke up. Hes a heavy sleeper. Want to help?" I asked. "Sure." She smiled. "Lets go." We walked to the couch. He was sleeping his head under a pillow snoring. "Hmmm." I said poking him. "How about we sit on him." She said. "Okay." I sat on his legs and she sat on his stomach. "One, two three!" We started bouncing. "Stop, Im sleeping." Luke said peeking from the pillow. We laughed. "No you need to get ready for school." I said smiling. "Um cant I skip today?" He asked. "No you cant." I said taking his pillow. "Come on please im exhausted." He pleaded. "Then drink some coffee." Arialy said smiling. "Okay." He said imeadiatly. I laughed. "Come on Romeo. Bathrooms free." I said standing up. "Okay. Okay im up." He stood up and went into his room to find clothes. "Ill be back." I ran outside and saw the werewolf sitting on the steps. "Theres a mattress in the hallway if you need to sleep." i said sitting next to him. "Im good thank you though. I am going to school with you three." He said putting the small knife back in the holder in his boot. "You are Dawns boyfriend arent you." I smiled. "Yes I am. How did you know?" He asked smiling. "I guess its a prophet thing. Oh yea just call me Faith." I patted his shoulder. He chuckled. "Well Faith, you are very wise." He said. "Why thank you. There coffee inside and food. Eat up." I said standing back up. "Okay. Thank you for your hospitality." He said standing up. "No problamo." I laughed and walked back in. Luke was walking out of the bathroom brushing his teeth. Arialy was trying to figure out our evil coffee maker. "Here." I laughed. I walked over and hit it in the right spot. It started working. "Our coffee maker from hell." I laughed. "Thanks." She laughed drinking her coffee. "No problem." I grabbed a cup of milk and drank it. "Ready?" Luke asked walking out ready. "Yea, but Drakes taking me." I said putting my shoes on. "Ill go with you Luke." Arialy said. "Same here. Oh Im Alec by the way." The werewolf said. "Hi Daniel." I laughed. "Okay lets go." Luke said opening the door. "Why thank you." Arialy smiled walking out. I looked at him and made a kissy face. "Shut it." Luke said pushing me out the door. Daniel followed. "Have fun you three." I said when they drove off. I sat on the steps for a couple minutes then Drake came. "Took ya long enough." I laughed. He got off. "Sorry, I kinda fell back asleep." He came over. "Whats that." I pointed to the jacket on his motercycle. "I thought you would like it. My favorite jacket." he grabbed it. I smiled. "I do like it." i put my other jacket back inside and put his on. "How do I look?" I asked. "Perfect." he smiled. That made me blush. "Okay lets go. I dont want to be late." I smiled. "Okay." He put the helmet on me. "I really do hate this thing." I said tapping the helmet. "Sorry but I cant let you fall and crack your head open." he laughed. "Fine lets go." He climbed on and I got on after him. He pulled out and we drove to school. He got off and helped me down. I took my helmet off. "How bad is it?" I asked. He ran his fingers threw it. "There." I smiled. "Thanks." He took my hand and we startd walking. I smiled and intertwinded our fingers. He smiled. I saw girls stair and wispering something. I saw guys look and some smiled. "I dont like them looking at you like that." Drake wispered. I chuckled. "Dont worry. They have nothing on you." I said. He grinned and kissed the top of my head. I smiled. "I dont see Mitcheal." I wispered. "Yea I bet hes still with his family. Are you still worried about that vision?" He asked wispering. I nodded. "yea, I never actually had a vision when I was awake. WHat if I have one in school?" I asked. Then Arialy walked up. "Thats why I am here." She smiled. I smiled. "Thank you." She gave a thumbs up. "I gotta go to class. See you later babe." Drake kissed me. I kissed him back. "Okay. Learn." I said. He smiled and walked away. "You got it bad girl." She said looking at me. I smiled. "Lets go." She looped her arm threw mine and we were off to class. "So what do you have fisrt?" Arialy asked me. "Um Science." I said. She nodded. "okay." We walked into class. "I sit in the back." I said walking over to my usual table. I sat down. She sat next to me. "So, this is what your class looks like." She said scanning the other students. Some staired some wispered. "Yo come over here and sit with me. Not the freak." Some guy said. I sighed and shook my head. "Shut it Jared." I flipped him off. He stood up. "Dont man, shes Drakes girl you know he'll get ticked if you mess with her." One of his friends said. I smiled. "Anyway I wouldnt sit anywhere by you. Ugly hick." She smiled. He looked at her and sat back down. "Thanks Arialy." I said. She laughed. "Dont worry about it Faith, I got your back." I smiled. "Thanks." Just then the teacher walked in. "Okay class lets get started." he went to the chalk bored. I opened my notebook and started doodling. "You tell Drake to do well in school when you dont even pay attention?" She asked me quietly. I laughed quietly. "Yea I already know this crap. I used to do Lukes homework with him." I said shrugging

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Fri Jan 21, 2011 8:26 pm

good keep it up girl!!!

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:49 pm

Chapter 11
(Drake)

I sat in class bored. I doodled on my paper. The bell rang and I got up. Schools over thank god was over. I walked down the hallways. "OH my god is she okay?" i heard someone yell. I ran down the hall. I saw Luke and The werewolf. They joined my and we reached where the crowd was. "Just give her some space." I heard Arialy say. "Let me threw." I said pushing my way threw. I saw Faith on the ground. I ran over to her. "Faith, babe talk to me." I said sitting her up. She coughed and gasped for air. "Faith." Luke said runing over. I watched her. "Babe you okay?" I asked. She looked at me. Then her eyes drifted over to Kyle. "You, your going to kill him." She said to him. Kyle eyes widened. "Whats going on here?" The princepal said walking over. "Faith fainted." Alec said. I picked her up. "I got this." The princepal looked at me. He haited me. "Come on guys." Luke said making a path so we could go. I followed them and didnt look back. Faith was shivering in my arms. "Its okay." I said holding her close. She nodded and tried to steady her breathing. We reached Lukes car. "Im so sorry I thought I would have enough time to get her to a class room." Arialy said. "No its okay." Luke said. Alec sighed. "I didnt know thats how a prophet sees there visions." I sat Faith down on the hood of Lukes car. "How are you feeling?" I asked. She sighed. "Better." I sat next to her. "What did you see?" Arialy said. "I dont think thats a good idea." Luke said. "Dont worry Luke. I can do this." Faith siad SHe closed her eyes. "I was there, Kyle was about to shoot someone. I tried to calm him down, I almost did but the guy shot my and Kyle." My eyes widened in shock. i wrapped my arms around her. Everyone was silent. "What do we do?" She asked me. "We can warn Kyle." I said. "And what do you think he would reach. Oh Faith saw how you died. Just dont go running off at night and point a gun at some guy." Arialy said. "Arialy thats enough." Alec said. "What do you think he would believe us anyway." Arialy said. "You arent helping." Luke siad. "No shes right." Faith siad. I looked at her. "Why?" i asked. "He wouldnt believe us. But, maybe. I need to go talk to him by myself." She said standing up. "Faith, I dont think you should." i said looking at her. "Guys, I've known Kyle since we were kids. Im his friend, he will believe me." She said. I looked at her. "Are you sure?" I asked. "Yes." She said. I sighed. "Okay, but keep your phone on." I said kissing the top of her head. "Okay." She nodded and walked off.

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I looked around for Kyle. I found him walking home. "Kyle." I said running up to him. "Hi, are you okay?" He asked looking at me. "yea Im okay, just havent been sleeping thats all." I shrugged. "Good cause I'd feel bad if you got yourself killed." He laughed. "I actually have to tell you something." I said looking away. "What is it?" He asked. "I know your really mad at some guy, but you cant go and shoot him. He'll end up killing you." i said looking at him. "How. How do you know?" He asked shocked. I shook my head. "Theres been some stuff going this past month. But please as your freind I beg you listen to me." I said looking at him. He nodded. "I believe you." I smiled. "Thank you. You have no clue how much this scared me." I sighed. He patted my shoulder. "Dont worry, I wont go kill him." He smiled. "Okay." I sighed again. "So, hows the life of dating the most wanted guy in school?" He asked as we walked down the street. I laughed. "Really nice." I said thinking. "Yea, now I dont have to worry about beating up all those jerks. Like the ones this morning." He said doing a handstand. I laughed. I pushed his legs and he landed on the grass. "Watch it Fay Fay." He said pointing at me. "I tought I told you not to call me that anymore Kie Kie." those were our childhood nicknames. "Oh you know Im still the mighty Kie Kie, master of handstands." he said a superman pose. I laughed. "Sure you are. And Im Fay Fay ninja." I did a ninja pose. We fell down laughing. "What do you think if things were diffrent and I didnt move away for those three years?" He asked looking at the clouds. I looked with him. "I dont know, we still be the same hanging out a lot. I would've gone threw all that messed up stuff alone." I wispered. He looked at me. "Im so sorry I left, I wish I didnt. Once I heard about what happened I was pleading with my parents to let me go and see you. And then when I got the call from Luke that you were in the hospital." He stopped shaking his head. I sighed. "Kyle, you couldnt have stopped it. I did it when Luke was at work and I was home sick." I shook my head. He looked at me. "I thought I lost you." he said. I looked at him. He was looking at me with sad eyes. "You know it will take more then slits on my wrist to kill me." I smiled. He smiled. "Thats true." He gave me a nugie. "Why does everyone do that." I whined trying to fix my hair. He laughed. "Sorry Fay Fay." I looked at him. "Oh really, is Kie Kie really sorry?" I asked, he laughed. I laughed and started tickling him. "Stop." he said laughing. "Sorry Faith isnt here at the moment, please leave a message after the beep." I said smiling. I stopped and he waited. "BEEP!" I said. "Hi Fiath its Kyle. Call me back." He leaned in and kissed me. I froze. "Kyle." I said looking at him. He just pulled me to him and kissed me. "Kyle please." I said quietly. "Fiath, I always loved you. Ever since the day that I met you." He said kissing me again. "Kyle, I. I love Drake." i wispered. He looked at me. "But you can love me too." He said. I looked into his eyes. There was something wrong, something really wrong. "Kyle your under a spell, you need to snap out of it." I said. He blinked. "Get your hands off her!" I heard Drake yell. "Drake wait." I said as he picked Kyle up. "What, you atually like him?" Drake yelled. "No hes under a spell. Look you can see it in his eyes." I said standing up. He looked. "Your right, I'm I'm sorry." He put Kyle back down. I looked at Kyle. "Kie Kie wake up." I said shaking him. He blinked and coughed. "Faith?" He asked confused. "Yea Kyle, how are you feeling?" I asked. He looked like he was going to get sick. "We better get him to Arialy." Drake said. We helped him up. "Whats going on?" He asked. "You were a victim of a witch." Drake said. I thought back. I didnt pick up on the energy change when we were looking at the clouds. "Were going to take you to a friend." I said. He just nodded. "It'll faster if I carry him." Drake said. "Okay." I said, Drake picked him up. "Lets go." We started running. We got to Arialy and the rest of them. They were still at the car. "What happened?" Luke asked looking at Kyle. "A spell has been put on him." I said looking at Arialy she was already digging threw her purse. "Put him in the back seat." She said looking at us. Drake put him in the back. I was on the other side making sure he didnt hit anything. "Im going to need everyone to step back. Besides Faith." She said putting her hair in a ponytail. They all went over a ways. "What happened to him?" I asked. "Hes been hexed." She said pulling things out of her bag. "Hexed, does that means hes going to die?" I asked. She shook her head. "No, not if I can save him." She started working on him. He groaned in pain. "Kyle I'm right here, just stay with me." I said looking at him. She started saying something. I watched quietly. "This is going to hurt Kyle." She warned him. I stayed silent. SHe placed her hand on his heart. I looked up. It was nightfall and and there were no teachers or anyone around. She started saying something and he started yelling. "Kyle." I said wanting to rip her hand away. "Dont Faith I'm saving him." She said before countining her chant. He yelled and was sweating. She finally stopped and moved her hand away. He was laying there in pain. "I took the hex off. It was really powerful and it took a lot of energy from him. Hes going to need rest. Where does he live?" SHe asked looking at him. "He lives with his aunt. But he cant go home like this." I shook my head. "Then he will stay with us." She said looking at the guys. She motioned them to come here. "Is he going to be okay?" Luke asked. "Yes hes just weak and he needs to be watched over night. So Faith is going to make an excuse so that we can watch over him." She said. "Okay." They all said. I sighed and got out. Drake came over and hugged me. "You okay love?" He asked. I nodded. "I never thought I would see anything like that." But somehow I knew this was just the beginning of it.

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Wed Jan 26, 2011 8:56 am

really aweosme

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Wed Jan 26, 2011 2:07 pm

thanks

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Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Fri Jan 28, 2011 2:05 pm

sorry guys im not allowed on my comp. and i have the story on there

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Fri Jan 28, 2011 3:52 pm

aww that sucks

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Fri Jan 28, 2011 5:24 pm

Yea sorry

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Fri Apr 08, 2011 1:12 pm

(okay.. im going to try to continue without the ones I wrote on my comp at home. Wish me luck)

Chapter 12
(Drake)

When we got back to the house Faith was asleep. SO i carried her to her room and put her in her bed. THen I headed back to see Kyle on the couch Daniel putting a wash cloth on his forehead. "Ill be outside on patrol." he said.

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sat Apr 09, 2011 4:24 pm

Chapter 12
(Drake)

Faith fell asleep on the way back. Her arms tight around my waist. "I'll carry him in." Alec said picking Kyle up and brining him inside. Luke and Arialy stood next to each other against the car. I turned off my bike and pulled Faiths arms away. I held her with one arm and took the helmet off with the other. "I think I should just let her sleep." I said to them. They nodded. "Night guys." I said. They nodded. I carried Faith inside. Alec was applyign a cold compress on Kyles head. I looked at Kyle. I put Faith on her bed and covered her with the blanket. "Sleep well love." I kissed her forehead and sat on the ground in the corner of her room. I looked around in the dark. I could see everything clearly. I wasnt in my panther form but my eyes were cat like. I heard Arialy and Luke wispering in the hallway. "What are we going to do?" Luke asked. "I dont know but he was pin pointed. I bet whoever did this made Faith see a fixed vision. To get her away so they could get to her." I could the worry in her voice. "Well we cant let her out of our sights then." Luke said. "They know that now so there going to be more and more pushing for her to crack and run." I listend and looked where Faith slept. She was already threw enough today. "Yea, I feel horrible. I dont even know how to confort my own sister." Luke sighed. "Dont be you will just be there for her." I heard them kiss. I made a face. God now I wish I was asleep I sighed and closed my eyes. I drifted off to sleep. I dreamt of war, and fighting. "You should've joined us Drake. Things would've turned out better. For you and everyone else." A voice said. "No, what your doing is wrong." I yelled. "Thats to bad, I will have to Faith that you were doing evil magic and you were trying to destroy the order of things. It so sad." The voice said. I couldnt move. "Dont touch her." I said. "Good bye Drak." I felt pain go threw me. I looked down and saw a sword sticking our from my stomach. I gasped and pushed the sword out. I fell to the ground. "Drake!" I heard. I saw Faith running over. I couldnt keep my eyes open any longer. I sat up gasping for air. I looked at my stomach. There was blood on my hands. "Drake!" Faith said running over. "What?" i asked hoarsly. "You bleeding." She put her hand on the side of my face. Blood dripped from her finger tips. "Dont move." She said. She got up and grabbed one of her shirts. "Are you okay?" She asked placing it on the wound on the side of my head. I winced. "I saw something like a glimpse. In the future. But it was my own death." I said looking at the wall. She froze. "Are you okay?" She asked looking over me. I sighed. "Yes, Im fine. What about you?" I askes she looked exhausted. "Yea Im good." She said. I sighed and got up. I looked in the mirror. There was a cut running down the side of my face. "I didnt think you wanted it bandage so I just cleaned it and stopped the bleeding." She said. I smiled. "Yea the warriors do need there battle scars." I laughed. "Drake this is serious, you scared me." She said looking sad. I hugged her. "Im sorry, I just thought of making a joke." I said. "I know its just that I wasnt ready for it and it scared me." She siad. I held her close. "Hurry up in there. I gotta go." I heard Luke say from outside, he banged on the door. I chuckled. "Coming. les go." I took her hand and we opened the door. "What were you doing in there?" He asked us, then he saw my cut. "Man what happened?" He aksed. "We dont know." I sighed. "Well let me in." He ran by and closed the door. I chuckled. "How about some breakefest?" I asked as we walked down the hallway. "Sounds great." I heard kyle mumble from the couch. I saw Faith look. She walked over. "How are you doing Kyle?" She asked him. "I feel like a pinata after a nine years old birthday pary. But they used slegde hammars instead of sticks." He said rubbing his temples. She smiled. "Come on." She said sitting him up. "What happened. Your brother threw one heck of a party again?" He asked looking around. She looked at me. "Do you remember yesterday at all?" She asked. He nodded. "I remember you telling me not to kill him, and I agreed then I blacked out?" He asked the last part. She sighed. "Kinda, Kyle you were hexed." She said. He looked at her "Hahah very funny Faith no really what happened." He asked me this time. "Shes right man, you were seriosly in danger, if Arialy didnt save you. Man you would've died." I said. He looked around like something everyone was crazy. "Please believe me Kyle." She said. He looked at her. "Okay, I believe you." He nodded. "Thank you, I swear. I didnt think that would happen." She said. I went to the kitchen. "Ill make omlets." I siad getting out eggs. "Do you need any help?" Faith asked walking into the kitchen. "Um could you get the pan out?" I asked cracking the eggs. "Of corse." She reached to the cabinet and grapping one. "Okay grab what you want in the omlet." I said adding some milk. "Okay." I heard her open the fridge and grabb some stuff. "Okay," I put the egg on the frying pan. "Okay. I'll take the fillings." I said holding my hand out. SHe handed me the cutting board. On it was cheese some pepperoni and peppers. "Thank you Drake." She said. "Of corse." I put it on and folded it so it became and omlet. "Go sit down." I said putting it on the plate. "Okay." She went to sit at the table. I grabbed a fork and put it infront of her. I sat next to her. "There you go." I smiled. She took a bite. "This is awesome." She said taking another. "Is his cooking better?" Luke asked walking in. She looked at her food. "I love your waffles." She smiled. "Well atleast you still like my cooking." Luke laughed. She chuckled. She ate more. "Here you can have the rest." He gave me the other half. "thanks." I siad taking a bite. We sat there in silence. Faith checked on Kyle he was sleeping again. She looked threw a magazine. I looked out the window it was raining. I sighed. "Well I guess we arent going to school." Arialy said walking into the kitchen. "Yea, I think its better." Faith said. "Well then I guess I'm going back to bed then." She said walking back to Lukes room.

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sat Apr 09, 2011 4:51 pm

it is really good, i was just going to scan through it but i really liked it Smile

it is really really really really good

(now, would I have written really that much if i didn't like it?????)

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:03 pm

lol Thanks. Im about to put the last chapters up. Then maybe start on the secound one.....

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:03 pm

Chapter 13
(Faith)

I layed on the floor in my room. I told Drake that he needed to rest and that he would sleep in my room. I looked at the ceiling. I was trying to make sense of what happened to him. I looked at my hands they had weird marks on them. A blue swirl fromed in the middle of my palm and extended to the tips of my fingers. I traced it with my other hand. I sighed and got up. I quietly left the room and walked down the hall. i looked at the mattress that was on the other end. Alec was asleep. I sighed and went to the living room. Kyle was spread out snoring. I smiled and pulled the blanket back over him. I went over to the window and looked outside. It was raining, it was a quiet day. School would've been over in about an hour so I guess we slept most of the day away. Which I am perfectly fine with. I dont really want to deal with all those eyes and wispers in school. I sighed and sat on the window sill. I watched the rain. I closed my eyes. I held my hand where my heart is. I thought of Drake and wanted to see what he saw. I gasped and heard the voice. I couldnt figure out whos it was. I looked threw Drakes point of view. I saw it all death, anger, war. I wanted it to all stop. I pulled my hand away and fell to the floor. I layed there dazed. "Faith." I heard. I had my eyes still closed. "Are you okay?" The voice asked again. "God Kyle shush I'm fine." I said opening my eyes. "Can I have a asprin?" I asked. "Okay." He got up and went to the kitchen, I sat up and looked at my hand. "When did you get a tatto?" He asked walking back. "I didnt. It happened because, I think because im a prophetess." I said taking the asprin. He nodded and sat next to me. "So I was hexed I guess that means Im pretty darn awesome." I laughed. "Sure you are Kyle." I said. He smiled. "Of corse I am." He said prodly. I smiled. "Im happed your okay." I said. "Me too, I have no idea how it happened. All I remember is walking out of the school after the crowd left and then nothing." He said. I sighed. "If I only knew that was a fake vision I could've sensed the other one and saved you." I said shaking my head. "Faith stop it, you couldnt of helped it." He said. I sighed. "I know, its just everyone is getting hurt. All because of me." I said tears falling. He pulled me into a hug. "Faith, no matter what your family and friends are here. Wether you like it or not." He said. I hugged him back. "Even if they know its to dangerous for them, especially if they are just a human." I said. He chuckled. "Defiantly them." I smiled. "You are one of my best friends." I said. "I hope so, we know eachother since we were five." He siad. "Yes and we know all of our emabarrising moments." I laughed. "Oh yes especialy when it comes to rainy days." He laughed. "Oh gosh I remember that." I said shaking my head. He laughed. "I hope you do, you almost was sucked into the ground." He said. I sighed and we pulled away. "I dont think hes just a regular human." Alec said walking into the living room. "Really?" I asked. He nodded. "Then what am I?" Kyle said. Alec grabbed a cup of coffe and sat on the chair facing us. "I believe that you are an old soul." He said. "An old soul?" We asked confused. "Yes, its mean you have been reigncarnated. I believe this because the look in your eyes. they look wise, understanding." He said. "Well I guess Im in the cool group now." He siad. I elbowed him. "Yea the death follows you everywhere group." I said. He chuckled. "That might explain why im so good in history." He said. Alec nodded. "Well thats cool." Kyle commented. "Whats going on?" Luke said when him and Arialy walked into the living room from the hallway. "Im an old soul." Kyle said proudly. "Wheres Drake?" Arialy asked looking around. "Hes sleeping, he still doesnt feel good." I said standing up. "Im actaully going to check on him." I said. I walked to my room. I opened the door and saw a figure standing over him. "Drake." I said. the creature looked at me and growled. "NO." I said. I stood in a fighting stance. I wished for a sword. I knew how to fence. My hand glowed. "HOly sh*t." I siad looking.

Subject: Re: Blind senses. (Really bad) Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:11 pm

Chapter 14
(Drake)

I layed ther dazed. I watched helplessly. Faith stood there in unafraid. "Run Faith." I said hoarsly. "You should listen to him. You stand no chanse against me. Stupid Prophetess." The figured growled. "No, I'm not leaving him." She said moving closer. "You want a fight then lets go." The creature smiled. "Dont Faith." I said trying to get up. "Dont I got this." She said twirling the sword. The figured laughed. It moved a hand and the door closed and locked. "Its more fun to kill in the dark." He said. I couldnt see. I couldnt move, I couldnt do anything but watch. "Oh you know it." Faith said, I couldnt see her. She moved the hair from my eyes. "Dont worry, I will protect you." She wispered in my ear. I grabbed her hand. "Please becareful." I wispered back. I saw her smile. Then she disapeared back into the darkness. I heard the sound of metal hitting metal. Then I smelt blood. "Faith." I yelled. I heard people at the door. "Its locked." I said they started ramming into the door. But it wouldnt budge. I heard coughing and then something hit the floor. "Faith." I said again. Then the lights were on. There she stood covered in blood. But not hers. the creature. It was Mitcheal. He layed dead on the floor. She sighed and closed her eyes. The sword she had disapeared. The door opened and everone ran in. They looked at Mitcheal. Some gasped some shook there heads. "He became a creature of the night. Living on death of others." I said slowly getting up. Kyle and Luke helped me up. "Faith are you okay?" Araily and Luke said walking over to her. She still had her eyes closed, she started to sway. "Crap." Luke jumped over and caught her as she fell. I limped over to them. "She killed him, on her own. I think we need to all go to my grandfathers." I said pulling out my phone. I called him and told him everything. "I will drive your bike." Alec said. "Okay, Faith and Drake will sit next to eachother. Kyle is coming too." Alec said. "Hes an old soul." Arialy siad. "Okay just grab your stuff and come on." I said limping to Lukes car. I climbed in and sat there. I put my head in my hands and let the tears fall. I did nothing, she could've died. "Drake its going to be okay." Kyle said looking at me. I looked at him. "I did nothing though." I said. "Have you looked at yourself. You look horrible, you are so hurt and you still dont let yourself heal." Faith said getting in. I pulled her to me and held her close. "Dont ever do that again." I said. She hugged me. "Drake I'm covered in blood." She said. "I dont give a dam* you scared the hell out of me." I said holding her. She smiled and kissed my forehead. I smiled and kissed her. "Um we are still here." Luke said from the front seat. I flipped him off still kissing her. He laughed. "Okay you two break it up." Arialy said. She smiled. "Okay." Faith said sadly. We all laughed and headed to my grandfathers. Faith and I sat holding eachother. Kyle looked out the window, and Arialy and Luke were holding hands and wispering. "How did you make that sword appear?" I wispered to her. "I dont know." SHe wispered. "I just really wanted a sword and to protect you." She said. She pulled her hand out of the sleeve she pulled over it. There was a blue swirl. "Oh my god." I said quietly. "Yea I know." She wispered. "No its just only extreamly powerful prophets get there marks." I said amazed. I traced the mark and looked at it closely. "Really?" She said suprised. I nodded. "Yes, when did this appear?" I asked. "I think right when you fell asleep, my hand hurt and i looked and it was there." She said. I smiled. "And what did you do the first time?" I asked. "I wanted to see what you saw this morning." SHe said. I froze. "Are you okay?" I asked looking at her. "yes Im fine. I was just suprised." She said. I sighed and held her closer. "Just please becarefull." I said. "Of corse. Careful is my middle name." She smiled. "Oh really I always thought it was May?" I asked grinning. "Oh that just my fake middle name." She laughed. "What so funny?" Kyle asked. "Oh we are just making fun of her name." I said smiling. "Oh you know her nickname used to be Fay Fay." He said. "Oh really?" I asked her smiling. "Kyle." She whined. "I hated that nickname growing up." She said. I smiled. "Well I like it." I said. She smiled. "Well that makes three of us." Luke said. We all started laughing again. I smiled and rested my head on hers. She leaned her head on my shoulder. I breathed in her scent. I couldnt help but still feal uneaysy. When we got to the mansion Luke, Arialy Kyle and I went to find my grandpa and Faith and Alec went to find Dawn. We all quiet as we walked quickly.

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Alec and I were walking down a hallway when we heard coughing and saw a councilman laying on the ground. "Theadore!" I said remembering his name. He was one of the human councle members. We ran over. "Careful Faith, it could be a trap." Alec said. I ignored him and knelt down next to the wounded man. "Prophetess your okay." The councilmam said. I nodded, I put on a smile. "Of corse im okay. What has happened to you?" I asked. Theadore coughed. He looked at me. His eyes determined. "I was heading on my way to speek with Kindel. When I was attacked." He said. I looked at Alec. His face was gaurded. "Who attacked you?" I asked. Theadore closed his eyes. "I dont know, but it was both magick and a warrior." He said. I gasped. Who could do such a thing? Theadore motioned me to come closer. "You cant trust him." He said. I looked shocked. "Who? Who cant I trust?" I wispered. He looked at Alec quickly then back at me. "The wolf, dont trust him. You cant trust them." He wispered. He closed his eyes and coughed up blood. I felt him grow cold. "What did he say" Alec asked. I looked at him. "Nothing." I said. And at that moment he knew. He knew that I was going to avange Theadore.

(END OF BOOK ONE)
(Comin soon Book Two)

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Chapter 1

(Drake)

We stood there in silence. The whole Council and Warriors were around watching as my granpa walked over to the coffin. His face was grave and full of sadness. "Theadore Wilts was a good man. He was one of my closest friends. He was giuded to the otherworld by our prophetess so I know he is happy." He said. I looked down at Faith. SHe was holding Theadores medal. She was looking at the coffin tears streamed down her face. "Its okay." I wispered. "I know." Her vioce was monotone. There was no emotions. i sighed. I put my hand on her shoulder. The funeral ended and people left slowly and quietly. I sighed. I saw Terrance standing there looking at the coffin. Terrance was Theadores adopted son. He was a Werewolf. "No one acts like this when there father dies. No one just stands there emotionless." Alec said looking at him. Faith spun around. "How would you be if you lost your parents?!" She yelled. Alec glared at her. There was huge tension. "Im just saying everyone knows about how Terrance cant control himself when he angry and he a werewolf. Theadore did say he was attacked by a werewolf." Alec said. "You dont think I dont know that!? I was there!" Faith yelled. Luke stepped in. "Okay, lets all just take a breather." He said. Faith just walked away. I follwed taking her hand. We ended up by Terrance. "Terrance, Im sorry fo-." She was cut off with his glare. "I dont need your pity. So just go." He snapped. I walked closer to him. "Hey, shes just trying to help." I said threw clenched teeth. He just laughed. "Help? What she do to help when my father was dying there and she was just standing there?" He asked. I was going to take a swing when Faith walked over to Terrance. "Your right. Im sorry, I was just trying to figure out what happen to him instead of helping him." SHe siad. I squeezed her hand. "Yea what ever." Terrance walked away. I sighed. "He doesnt mean it. Hes just upset." I said hoping it will make her feel better. "Can we go back to the mansion now?" She asked. I nodded. "Yea. Come on guy!" I called as we walked to the car. Luke and Arialy got into the black limosine first then Kyle. Fourth Dawn and fifth Alec. "Go ahead love." I said. She didnt move. "I wanna be on the end, if its okay." She said. I nodded and got in followed by Faith.
Faith, Dawn and Arialy were asleep when we got back. I carried Faith to our room then went to find my grandpa. I found him in the study. "Hey." I said quietly. He looked at me. "Hello." He said. I went over and sat in the oher chair. "How are you doing?" I asked. Kindel sighed. "I've been better. The council been discussing who will be the next to join us. For the human spot on the council. We planned to pick Luke." He siad. I smiled. "That will be good. Get peoples minds on the ceromony then Theadore." I said. We talked for a while longer. After about a hour and a half I went to bed. Something was going on. I wish I knew...