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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
![Combining your affinities to save the day Combining your affinities to save the day](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img231/6389/moonphases14.png)
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![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations - Page 2 Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations Wed Jun 29, 2011 11:19 am | |
| Sweet song ![Very Happy](https://2img.net/i/fa/i/smiles/icon_biggrin.png) I can translate the chinese for you ![Very Happy](https://2img.net/i/fa/i/smiles/icon_biggrin.png) it's my mother tongue. | |
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Erinacchi Finally mastering Fire
![Finally mastering Fire Finally mastering Fire](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img197/8847/moonphases11.png)
![Erinacchi](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/3858-13.jpg)
![Dog Dog](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_dog_1.gif) Age : 30 Posts : 624 Location : A sunny field with Fíli Join date : 2011-05-04
Character sheet Name: Erina Age: 20 Affinities : Air, water, writing
![Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations - Page 2 Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations Wed Jun 29, 2011 4:24 pm | |
| Oh, thanks! If you'd be so kind. Here are the lyrics. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
![Combining your affinities to save the day Combining your affinities to save the day](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img231/6389/moonphases14.png)
![*~Dreamer~*](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/64-61.jpg)
![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations - Page 2 Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations Thu Jun 30, 2011 6:08 am | |
| If rain ceased to exist, we wouldn't have a reason to love. Hardwork is our purpose/ motive/ drive (it can be interpreted either way. i think they all fit), let future be our precious assets. (there are many ways to interpret this line)
If land ceased to exist, it wouldn't be our beloved Earth (动人美丽 means very beautiful, exalting, but it seems a little awkward to use in this context.) Let us all sing merrily, the song of my love. | |
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Erinacchi Finally mastering Fire
![Finally mastering Fire Finally mastering Fire](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img197/8847/moonphases11.png)
![Erinacchi](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/3858-13.jpg)
![Dog Dog](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_dog_1.gif) Age : 30 Posts : 624 Location : A sunny field with Fíli Join date : 2011-05-04
Character sheet Name: Erina Age: 20 Affinities : Air, water, writing
![Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations - Page 2 Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations Fri Jul 01, 2011 9:35 am | |
| Thank you so much! I really appreciate it^^
Okey, here's a new original poem of mine.
In the gentle summer breeze It's night There are no clouds in the sky I think of you My heart feel so strange It hurts Never felt like this before I love you
I look at the sea from the rocks I see your face My heart skips a beat when I feel them Your hands on my shoulders Then on my waist It feels so good when you Touch me | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
![Combining your affinities to save the day Combining your affinities to save the day](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img231/6389/moonphases14.png)
![*~Dreamer~*](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/64-61.jpg)
![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations - Page 2 Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:20 am | |
| I love this poem. very unique ![Very Happy](https://2img.net/i/fa/i/smiles/icon_biggrin.png) I liked how there are SO many ways to read them Alternate lines can make up a poem, every odd line can make one, so does the even, although the even is a little less coherent. Two suggestions though, maybe you could shift 'when you' from the second last line to the last line, with 'touch me', so that it will read like this 'it feels so good/ when you touch me'. and for this two lines, ' I feel them'/ your hands on my shoulders, maybe change 'them' to 'that', and then ýour hands on my shoulders' to 'your hands are on my shoulders' so that it can beautify the odd-line poems. Extract odd lines: In the gentle summer breeze there are no clouds in the sky my heart feels so strange (should be a 'feels' and not 'feel'. tense) never felt like this before I look at the see from the rocks my heart skips a beat when your hands are on my shoulders (revised line) It feels so good (revised line) Awesome much? I love this poem. LIKE! | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
![Combining your affinities to save the day Combining your affinities to save the day](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img231/6389/moonphases14.png)
![*~Dreamer~*](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/64-61.jpg)
![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations - Page 2 Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:22 am | |
| the first stanza, the even lines make a beautiful quote: 'It's night, I think of you. It hurts, I love you.' sweet! | |
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Erinacchi Finally mastering Fire
![Finally mastering Fire Finally mastering Fire](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img197/8847/moonphases11.png)
![Erinacchi](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/3858-13.jpg)
![Dog Dog](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_dog_1.gif) Age : 30 Posts : 624 Location : A sunny field with Fíli Join date : 2011-05-04
Character sheet Name: Erina Age: 20 Affinities : Air, water, writing
![Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations - Page 2 Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations Fri Aug 05, 2011 2:20 pm | |
| Thank you so much, Ger^^ Remember my song translation of "Tomo"? Well, here goes my cover of the song: Click me! | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
![Combining your affinities to save the day Combining your affinities to save the day](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img231/6389/moonphases14.png)
![*~Dreamer~*](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/64-61.jpg)
![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations - Page 2 Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations Mon Aug 08, 2011 9:30 am | |
| Sounds nice (: For me, I wish i can dance the way my idols can. they can sing and dance synchronized. ownt. i aspire to be able to do that. but first, i must cross the stage of singing and playing an instrument tgt >< | |
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Erinacchi Finally mastering Fire
![Finally mastering Fire Finally mastering Fire](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img197/8847/moonphases11.png)
![Erinacchi](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/3858-13.jpg)
![Dog Dog](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_dog_1.gif) Age : 30 Posts : 624 Location : A sunny field with Fíli Join date : 2011-05-04
Character sheet Name: Erina Age: 20 Affinities : Air, water, writing
![Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations - Page 2 Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations Mon Sep 05, 2011 4:44 am | |
| Sorry for a long break. Going on with another song translation, this time of Berryz Koubou's Aa, Yo ga Akeru. Hope you like it. Aa, the Dawn is BreakingA courageous girl’s love song A love song I sing on a moonlit night These innocent tears, may it reach them May it reach him, reach him I won’t show my tears I won’t make you worry My love Grows stronger each day My love will float Down to you one day Let me give one sigh Aa, I think dawn is breaking A precious, precious love song The first ever love song I sing This distant promise, may it reach it May it reach him, reach him If you look into my heart You won’t see anything but you I hope A goddess will smile at me If this love grows Will it hurt you? Another tear has poured down my cheek Aa, I think dawn is breaking If this love grows Will it hurt you? My love will float Down to you one day Let me give one sigh Aa, I think dawn is breaking | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
![Combining your affinities to save the day Combining your affinities to save the day](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img231/6389/moonphases14.png)
![*~Dreamer~*](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/64-61.jpg)
![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Sweet~ but i anticipate your writes (: those which are uniquely yours ![Very Happy](https://2img.net/i/fa/i/smiles/icon_biggrin.png) | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
![Combining your affinities to save the day Combining your affinities to save the day](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img231/6389/moonphases14.png)
![*~Dreamer~*](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/64-61.jpg)
![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
![Combining your affinities to save the day Combining your affinities to save the day](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img231/6389/moonphases14.png)
![*~Dreamer~*](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/64-61.jpg)
![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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![Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations - Page 2 Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:54 pm | |
| Hey, do join my poetry contest! I hope you can ![Very Happy](https://2img.net/i/fa/i/smiles/icon_biggrin.png) | |
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Erinacchi Finally mastering Fire
![Finally mastering Fire Finally mastering Fire](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img197/8847/moonphases11.png)
![Erinacchi](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/3858-13.jpg)
![Dog Dog](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_dog_1.gif) Age : 30 Posts : 624 Location : A sunny field with Fíli Join date : 2011-05-04
Character sheet Name: Erina Age: 20 Affinities : Air, water, writing
![Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations - Page 2 Empty](https://2img.net/i/empty.gif) | Subject: Re: Erinacchi's poems/songs/song translations Mon Jan 09, 2012 5:40 am | |
| Will do if I come up with something that doesn't sound idiotic. Lately my poetry has just sucked~ | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
![Combining your affinities to save the day Combining your affinities to save the day](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img231/6389/moonphases14.png)
![*~Dreamer~*](https://2img.net/u/2713/12/89/50/avatars/64-61.jpg)
![Pig Pig](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_pig_1.gif) Age : 29 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Okay. ![Very Happy](https://2img.net/i/fa/i/smiles/icon_biggrin.png) | |
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chey2012 Going to the House of Night
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![Rooster Rooster](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_chinese_cock_1.gif) Age : 31 Posts : 108 Location : Maryland Join date : 2012-12-04
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