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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
 Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
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| | Subject: Comments - Jump... Wed May 19, 2010 2:59 pm | |
| The story Jump... can be found HereGood start but it looks like later never came. Will you be continuing the story? | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
 
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
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Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Sun May 23, 2010 8:59 pm | |
| - earth-spirit wrote:
- Good start but it looks like later never came. Will you be continuing the story?
Yeah, sorry everyone, I lost my Flash Drive that had the story on it, and I still haven't found it. I'll continue the story, but it probably won't be as good as the original. If I find my Flash Drive, I'll edit it. | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 1:15 pm | |
| Waiting, impatiently. LOL | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
Character sheet
Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 2:10 pm | |
| - earth-spirit wrote:
- Waiting, impatiently. LOL
Lol, well, at least your waiting.... I'll add some more right now. | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 2:52 pm | |
| Yeah, I knew if I pushed just a little I would get some results. | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
Character sheet
Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 3:02 pm | |
| - earth-spirit wrote:
- Yeah, I knew if I pushed just a little I would get some results.
Lol, your just lucky. I added a paragraph somewhere in the middle, and two at the end, I'm about to add a couple more here soon... | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 3:27 pm | |
| Awesome. I just reread it and I like what you have so far. Can't wait to find out what is making the noice. I love the suspense. | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
Character sheet
Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 4:16 pm | |
| - earth-spirit wrote:
- Awesome. I just reread it and I like what you have so far. Can't wait to find out what is making the noice. I love the suspense.
 Thanks. Your about to find out.... | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 4:33 pm | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
Character sheet
Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 4:43 pm | |
| Okay. It's there, I added a little more. I might add more later, but my Internet is being evil. I'll try though. | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 5:21 pm | |
| Holy cow, it's a dead guy. Is he changing into something, did she kill him. Oh wow, need more | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
Character sheet
Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 5:43 pm | |
| - earth-spirit wrote:
- Holy cow, it's a dead guy. Is he changing into something, did she kill him. Oh wow, need more
Lol. Nope! Kay, I'll post a few more paragraphs. | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
Character sheet
Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 5:45 pm | |
| Impatiently waiting. Sigh | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
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Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 6:06 pm | |
| - earth-spirit wrote:
- Impatiently waiting. Sigh
Three more paragraphs added! You'll have to wait till later for more, I have to go, I'll be back on in a couple of hours. | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
Character sheet
Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Mon May 24, 2010 8:15 pm | |
| Oh, oh, oh does she talk to ghosts? | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
Character sheet
Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Tue May 25, 2010 5:14 pm | |
| Eh, your getting close | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Jump... Tue May 25, 2010 6:28 pm | |
| Cool, will you be posting more soon? | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
Character sheet
Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Comments - Jump... Tue May 25, 2010 6:28 pm | |
| Yep! Here in a little bit | |
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