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| Is it good or do I stop writing it?? | | Yes keep going | | 100% | [ 1 ] | | It's okay but I have a few suggestions(pm if so me) | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | Umm...it's not good | | 0% | [ 0 ] |
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~TayTay~
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 31
Posts : 6470
Location : Somewhere out in this big old world;)
Join date : 2010-12-28
Character sheet
Name: Dallas
Age: 15
Affinities : Spirit,music(singing),darkness,sounds.
| | Subject: A Hathworn Private School novel:Secrets can kill Thu Jan 06, 2011 10:53 am | |
| Carson-Main Lily-Sister
Jayden-Best Friend
Emma-Other friend/Lily's best friend
Owen-main
Caleb-Best friend
Mason-freind
Cory-Brother
Carson
The music blasted threw the speakers as I walked threw the door,my blue sun dress went mid thigh,and strapless.My brown curly hair flirted with my shoulders,I had only put on lipgloss to give my lips abit of shine.Call me crazy,I smiled when I saw my baby sister and her best friend Emma whispering about girls outfits.
I'm not one to talk about that stuff but I joined them in the corner anyways,"hey girls,"I smiled.
Emma's jaw dropped,as Lily sqealed,"omg you look so beautiful!!"
I rolled my eyes at them,"Imma go get a drink of punch or something,"I weaved threw the crowd when I heard Carly crying,Megan and Belle her followers were holding her.
I was strucked by courosity I walked over,"what happened?"I wasn't a big fan of Carly and her followers but I Hated to see my enmey break down like this.
"That stupid b**** slept with Max!"Carly sobbed.
I rasied a eye brow,"oh I see."I backed away and sighed.
Wow someone just got them a one way ticket to Carly's personal hell.I grabbed a soda and opened it when two arms came around me,I leand into the muscalar chest and smiled,"do you always go up to random girls and hug them?"
He laughed and turned me,I smiled up at him handsome face,those deep icy ocean blue eyes looked down at me with amusment,and his shaggy black hair got in his eyes kinda.
"Owen..Owen,"I took a sip of my soda.
"Yes beautiful Carson may I help you?"he grinned as he swayed us,"so did you hear Max got dumped."
"Oh yeah big time,and did you hear I paid Gigi to do it,"I smirked over the rim of the can.
"That's my best friend,"Owen chuckled,letting me go.I wanted to frown but kept my smile in place. | |
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~TayTay~
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 6470
Location : Somewhere out in this big old world;)
Join date : 2010-12-28
Character sheet
Name: Dallas
Age: 15
Affinities : Spirit,music(singing),darkness,sounds.
| | Subject: Re: A Hathworn Private School novel:Secrets can kill Fri Jan 07, 2011 3:15 pm | |
| Really there was no use in trying to pretened that I was happy he let me go,Owen could read anyone's emotions,and body lauguge and from that frown I knew,he knew something was wrong.
"Cars something wrong?"he asked,leaning in close.I was bout to reply when someone let out a blodd curling scream.
That was my cue,I ran ahead and pushed people outta my way.There in the room,laying on the bed was a dead Gigi Hurner.My face got ale as I saw so much blood.
Owen pulled me to his chest as a teachers came,and made everyone leave the dorm.Outside I yanked myself free and puked.
"Who could have done that?"Lily asked as they stood behind me. | |
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milly
Walking back to my dorm
Age : 32
Posts : 3792
Location : On top of the world
Join date : 2010-10-21
Character sheet
Name: Milly
Age: depends on the year
Affinities : None that she was aware of.
| | Subject: Re: A Hathworn Private School novel:Secrets can kill Sat Jan 08, 2011 8:22 pm | |
| cool story  | |
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~TayTay~
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 6470
Location : Somewhere out in this big old world;)
Join date : 2010-12-28
Character sheet
Name: Dallas
Age: 15
Affinities : Spirit,music(singing),darkness,sounds.
| | Subject: Re: A Hathworn Private School novel:Secrets can kill Sat Jan 08, 2011 8:25 pm | |
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~TayTay~
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 6470
Location : Somewhere out in this big old world;)
Join date : 2010-12-28
Character sheet
Name: Dallas
Age: 15
Affinities : Spirit,music(singing),darkness,sounds.
| | Subject: Re: A Hathworn Private School novel:Secrets can kill Sun Jan 09, 2011 6:45 pm | |
| I pulled my hair off to the side and shook my head,as I puked more.
Dead bodies was not a private school girl's favurite veiw,I sighed and then turned after I was done.
"Whoever did that is sick!"I said as I hugged Lily and Emma,they were crying. | |
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milly
Walking back to my dorm
Age : 32
Posts : 3792
Location : On top of the world
Join date : 2010-10-21
Character sheet
Name: Milly
Age: depends on the year
Affinities : None that she was aware of.
| | Subject: Re: A Hathworn Private School novel:Secrets can kill Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:52 pm | |
| welcome!  | |
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ZOEY AND STARK FOREVER
Discovering you have an affinity for Water
 
Age : 26
Posts : 680
Location : And why do you need to know??? Stalker much!!!
Join date : 2010-11-03
Character sheet
Name: Alexandera( alex for shortz(or ally)
Age: 16
Affinities : vision, can see the dead, & can tell if someone is lieing
| | Subject: Re: A Hathworn Private School novel:Secrets can kill Sun Jan 16, 2011 2:45 am | |
| This is really good keep writing plz!! | |
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~TayTay~
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 6470
Location : Somewhere out in this big old world;)
Join date : 2010-12-28
Character sheet
Name: Dallas
Age: 15
Affinities : Spirit,music(singing),darkness,sounds.
| | Subject: Re: A Hathworn Private School novel:Secrets can kill Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:30 am | |
| Owen looked at me,and then away.I looked down at the two and gave their shoulders a sqeeze.
"I think it was Carly,"I said as I walked over to Owen,who wrapped a supportive arm around me.
"I don't think so why would she.."he looked at me. | |
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milly
Walking back to my dorm
Age : 32
Posts : 3792
Location : On top of the world
Join date : 2010-10-21
Character sheet
Name: Milly
Age: depends on the year
Affinities : None that she was aware of.
| | Subject: Re: A Hathworn Private School novel:Secrets can kill Sun Jan 16, 2011 7:55 pm | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: A Hathworn Private School novel:Secrets can kill Wed Feb 02, 2011 3:06 pm | |
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milly
Walking back to my dorm
Age : 32
Posts : 3792
Location : On top of the world
Join date : 2010-10-21
Character sheet
Name: Milly
Age: depends on the year
Affinities : None that she was aware of.
| | Subject: Re: A Hathworn Private School novel:Secrets can kill Wed Feb 16, 2011 1:14 pm | |
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