The Wolf's Story (Twilight, After Breaking Dawn)

Haha, cool. They way I've been writing it reminds me of soap operas my mom sometimes watches were it goes from one climax to the next.

I read it, it was super duper awsome! I like your discription on how voices got added into Seth's head, I can't remember exactly how you worded it.

Yah...My mum watches alot of soaps over here too..there just seems to be one thing after the other lol

Thank you...I always imagine it like the other thoughts were swimming around in your head as long as yours..Sort of like everyone's thoughts all being crammed in there at once

I know, Jill has cancer and Bobby says he loves June when he really loves Summer. I can't follow...

You're welcome. Yeah, I think my head would explode.

Yup...and then they throw in some really old character everyone thought died for a surprise reunion with long lost family but then he turns out evil and wants to take over xP

I definately couldn't cope with werewolfism lol

Haha, yeah.

Or voices in my headanism.

That actually happened in one of the soaps here lol

Either...I couldn't cope with it all XP

((Cool. And neither could I.))

Q.P.O.V.

It was so annoying to have to wait for Claire to get off the bus. I sat on her driveway listening to the traffic to see if I could hear her bus. Her mom had offered for me to come in many times but I didn’t want to.

Finally the bus pulled up. The doors open and Claire got off. Or should I say tripped off, I ran over and caught her just in time helping her get on her feet.

“Thanks,” she said as the buss pulled away.

“Anytime,” I said hugging her and kissing the top of her head.

She looked up and smiled taking my hand and leading me towards her house. “You know, there’s at dance at my school on Friday.” She said.

“Is there?” I asked.

“Yeah, and I was wondering if you’d go with me.” She said.

“I’d love to.” I said hugging her again.

She hugged me back “Thank you!”

I laughed “You’re welcome.”

We walked inside her mom had made cookies and she offered them to us.

Major awwws again <3

Aww.
And about the soap opera comment.
I watch them so don't complain about it. They R so Aww.

E.P.O.V.

Abby’s mom had a meeting this evening so I had to stay late. “Hey kiddo!” I said as Abby got off the bus.

She ran up to me and hugged my legs. I picked her up “How was school?” I asked.

“Good. I got to eat cookies.” She said.

“You did?” I asked. “Did you bring some home for mommy?”

She shook her head no.

“Why don’t we bake some?”

“Ok!” she said happily and wiggled out of my arms to run to the kitchen.


((Ok, I know this is short but I wanted to get back to Jared's P.O.V.))

I have absolutely nothing against soaps lol....I watch them sometimes too Hollyoaks is my favourite...although I like Home and Away too

Keep writing Namine, tis really good

Nethier do I, I love the 90210 re-runs.

Thanks!

My fave one got canceled
But it did have a happy ending.
The grandpa died and a lot of people got married!
So yeah.
Happy ending!

Jared’s P.O.V.

Kim never noticed me seeing the dress and that just made myself feel guiltier. “Um... Kim?”

“Yes, Jared?”

“There’s something I need to tell you.”

“Can it wait?”

“Not really,” I said uneasily.

She stood up from the couch where she had been making seating arrangements. “What is it?”

“Um… I don’t know how to say this but just coming out and saying it. I saw your wedding dress.”

“The one on my bed?”

“That would be the one.”

She threw her head back and laughed. “This is not funny!” I said.

When she had calmed enough she said: “That was the maid of honor’s dress. I’ve hidden the wedding dress where you’ll never find it.”

“Oh, ok then. Never mind.”

S.P.O.V.

When I came to something cold was pressed against my chest. I jumped and the cold thing moved away. “What the-”

A nurse was taking my whatever you take with a stethoscope. “I’m sorry,” she apologized. “Did you know you have a very fast heart rate?” That’s what it was called.

“Um, yeah disease,” I made up quickly.

She named of something I couldn’t pronounce.

“Um, yeah that.”

“Oh, my poor dear! How long do you have?”

“Oh, not that the other one.”

“Oh,” she said relived. “I’m sorry we couldn’t do much better with the bedding situation.”

I realized I was on the couch in Emily’s room except they’d pulled out the bed part. “Oh I’m good.”

“Ok good,” she smiled. “You’re wife is asleep, it’s 12 a.m.”

“That’s good she needs her sleep.” I said realizing I was pretty tired myself I leaned back into the bed/couch.

“What are their names?” I asked.

“I beg you’re pardon.” She said.

“The twins.” I clarified.

“Oh, Samantha and Josh.” She said. “Samantha was 6 lbs. 11 ounces 20 inches long. Josh was 6 lbs. exactly and 19 inches.”

“They’re healthy?” I asked.

“Very.” She said. “Even for a baby born on the due date.”

“That’s good.” I yawned. “How’s Em?”

“She’s doing great; she’ll be out in a few days along with Samantha and Josh.”

“Ok.” I yawned again and was out.

Aww.
That is So Sweet!
Yeah! Jared didn't see the dress!
I'm glad you are giving Jared a voice in this.
In the book he didn't really due much.

this is so awesome u guys i love the wolfs hehe

this is soooo cool i love this story!!!

Yay I'm so glad Jared didn't see the wedding dress... I couldn't think of anythign bad that could happen (since it's bad luck)

Keep writing, I look forward to reading more

Thank all of you guys so much!
Yeah, I thought about changing it so he did see the dress but I couldn't think of anything bad to happen.

i can't wait for the next one!!!!

Jacob’s P.O.V.

I had fallen asleep in the woods as a half clothed human. I searched my pockets for a phone and I only came up with $.75 in quarters. That’d work, I would use a payphone. I ran to a local grocery store which, thank goodness, had an outside payphone which I used to call Sam’s cell phone number.

He picked up on the 4th ring. “Hello?” he said groggily.

“I’m sorry if I woke you.” I said even though I wasn’t. “I was wondering if I could come stay with you and Emily, I know she’s pregnant and all but Paul proposed to Rachel and I really can’t take him at my house all the time.”

“Well, we’re kind of at the hospital. Emily had twins.” He said. “You’re more than welcome to come and join us though, room 430.”

There were two heartbeats of silence. “Twins?” I repeated.

“C’mon, Jake, I thought you were smarter than this. Yes twins, you know like two?”

“Sure, sure. I’ll be there in an hour.” I said.

“’Kay, bye.” He said.

“Bye.”

The line went dead and I got ready to go to the hospital.

Ok noe that is cool!!
Yeah Jake got it!

i never new taht jack was that stuiped

No, I wasn't implying that. He was in shock that Emily had twins.