my poems

alright i think its time
listen im done
no one ever cares
what happens to me
well im done puttin up
with your attitude

you use to care
but now its like i
dont even know you
you refuse to be seen
with me just becuase
im not like the other
girls

and if im not good
enough for your social
list then we're done
you've been nothin but
mean, rude, and hateful
and if you loved me you
wouldnt care what they
thought... but i guess you do
so now your alone
and im movin on
*laughs im happy again*

i hope you like this one ^ i dont know what made me right it but i did so there u go

i think i might stop for awile

thanks im just in a bit of a block i got a poetry book to see if i could clear my mind it helps somtimes

hmmm...you should try listening to music you dont usually listen to. like, try this: it always works for me:

Find a song in another language, or scroll through a friends ipod and look for stuff you dont recognize.

then (if it is in another language, translate it first!!) look at the lyrics and get some deep thoughts on it, and look for the literary details such as emotion, point of view, and the tone. from there it should be pretty easy. try these:

Away ~ Nightwish
Beautiful Days ~ Arashi
Hitohara no hanabira ~ Stereo pony

thanks ill try that
(i should also try making my poems more cheerful to)

they do my mom would be mad if she knew the type of poems i write

my mom doesnt like deppresing stuff or well... im goth sort of and my mom dosent like that stuff

hahahaha thats funny i hit people when im mad in any way

todays the day
i get to go
ive let my heart break
but i was still living
and it was still beating
but now thats okay
cuase its time to go

i really dont know what i was thinking when i wrote this i just did

My mother's just like yours shallow grave ^^

My mother gets pissed at me writing emo compositions, poems and quotes. But after she read a few of my poems (with encouraging and depressed in them), she said that the depressed ones were better.

Well, and mari-chan's right! Our sweetest song tells the saddest tale.

tehe thats a change to me she doesnt even know i write them:(

my life isnt gonna last
ive lived long enough
yu never really loved me
so ill just kill myself
no big deal
you dont care
ive always cut myself
you never knew
to late
now you care
but im already gone

but for your age, you write brilliant poems ^^

When I was your age, I didn't even know how to write them. lol

your only one year older then me???????? right????????

oh and thanks for the coment

can life get worse
i cut myself
i live in black
my aura is wrong
im going to kill myself soon
help me when my life ends
im just so deppresd
i cant fight it
i slipped up so much
and then....
then i was gone
just like that
now ill finaly live in...
live in peace

wow these are really good

thanks

Yeah, I mean... I only started writing them in march this year.

i was doing it for awile but i didnt realize it

That's interesting. I started with making quotes.

Well, do write more. I'm drained and looking for some ideas. XD