my poems

same ive got a block cant think straight

i walked and walked
but for he never said a word
hand in hand
we walked but never spoke
i learnd so much
in one kiss
is all i need to know


i felt dramatic

so coooooool.

I haven't been able to write anything much lately.

thnx im going to right more

That's good.

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my sincerest apologes

It could help to use some rhyme and make use of more profound words to enhance the meaning. This poem doesn't really draw you into it because the words do not have an impact on the readers.

All in all, this is a poem with a good controlling idea.

i know what you mean im drained so that so that happens to my poems

gotta get off got at least 6 or more hours till sun rise gotta start sleeping in the day time well bye

when i see you smile
my heart skips a beat
and when you kiss me
your heart slows time down

you hold me tight
but when some one comes by
you shove me away
and i dont know why

you do love me
and i love you
but im starting to think
mabe i shouldnt
but i dont want to leave you

thinks are so messed up right now
i got hurt and you didnt let me explain
you just yelled at me
then i told you
you said you were sorry
but dont worry i still love you...

for now:(

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


i wrote this for one of my best friends shehas a boy friend but he wont say i love you to her if any ones around!!!! (he soooo rude but thats just my thoughts) makes her mad too!!!!!!

Nice, I've already got some thoughts running.

Don't know if I can use your idea XD

well sorry

okay i have a qute i found:

when life gives you lemons squirt them in peoples eyes

that quote is awesome, I should do that more often with those that piss me off. hehe

yea

a word of caution
to all who bear a tale
that makes them weep
life is short dont spend it
gazing from the side
lines please
be free, be loved,
be kind to those who
are kind to you
and mabe theyll tell you there storie

okay im feeling off so im tacking a break from writing poetry

my spirit is lost
and i cant find it
wind is carring it away
water is pulling down now
fire burns water
my spirit is stranded
earth has hidden my spirit
im lost for all eternity now
oh well i can wait

i like it

thank you thank you

THE TIME IS NEAR

come one
come all
to here a story
listen clear its time now
he was here and she was here
they will take your soul
and keep it forever
so be cautious
never be caut out at night
for they will come
and you will find no mersy
so please beware
for all who now the story tell it
pass it and you will be safe
but say this is a lie and
you will see them when you next wake
so i hope you listend clear and near
because now its the end
i warned you
but you didnt listen
there here run and scream all you want
no one will hear you
goodbye now have a safe trip
the rest of you are lucky
yoiu got only a warning
but next time you wont be so lucky
farewell all
this story is over
THE END




(haha hoped you liked it its just an early halloween story)

whats life when you feel dead
im not so lucky
i fell from heaven to hell
one angel was there and now there here
the time is near
to awaken
so take safty and grasp it tight
because when we awaken
you will find no mersy
this is your last chance

the time is now we have come
and you are still here?
you deside to fight what a pitty
you will die now we warned you
but now your dead
and we will return to hell and sleep
farewell and next time listen well

i will smile when you smile
i will be there for you when your here for me
i will hold you close when you hold me close
when you break my heart i will cry
when you say your sorry
i will say its okay
when you leave i will miss you
when you come back i will say dont leave me again
i will always be there no matter what
when you leave the world so will i
i will say goodbye
when you say goodbye

PAIN

very were i am
i feel with out love
or even happieness
only pain
its like a dream
never ending


NOT FINISHED

life is like a dream
im always asleep
i cant wake till day break
the moon i shining
the stars are bright
its when im alive
but when dawn breaks
my life will end
till the moon shines once
more apon my eyes

*lights go on*
*curtains open*
once the party starts
you cant stop the beat
it consumes you to the bone
you never stop
thats why you lost it all
now its over everything youve worked for
but the partys still going
but not for long
they always end and you know
you know they never end right
so dont come around
youve already lost me
and now the partys ending
its coming to a close
and thats all there is to show
now youll be alone
the beat is ending and now im leaving
this song is ending
the partys over
*lights go out*
*curtains close*