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Sylvia
Finally mastering Spirit
  
Age : 30
Posts : 1309
Join date : 2009-07-12
| | Subject: Comments - Ashes They Fall Sat Jan 23, 2010 12:41 am | |
| The story Ashes They Fall can be found HereWow. Loved it. Great work =] | |
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Katie-la
Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
 
Age : 27
Posts : 862
Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet
Name: Michiko
Age: 15
Affinities : Sound, Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Ashes They Fall Sun Jan 24, 2010 12:10 am | |
| Thanks. I just really needed to work on my descriptions, but I don't think this worked out they way I would've liked. I've changed the words about 5 times...lol | |
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Katie-la
Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
Age : 27
Posts : 862
Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet
Name: Michiko
Age: 15
Affinities : Sound, Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Ashes They Fall Tue Jan 26, 2010 10:16 pm | |
| 1, 2, 3, 4 I declare a dance war!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DANCE OR DIE!!!!!!!!! | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
Character sheet
Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Ashes They Fall Thu May 27, 2010 9:02 pm | |
| Nice, is there more to the story? | |
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Katie-la
Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
Age : 27
Posts : 862
Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet
Name: Michiko
Age: 15
Affinities : Sound, Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Ashes They Fall Wed Aug 11, 2010 9:50 pm | |
| o.o no xD It was just a short story t show myself how much skill I lack lawl. | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Ashes They Fall Wed Aug 11, 2010 10:23 pm | |
| it is a really good start you should continue | |
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Katie-la
Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
Age : 27
Posts : 862
Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet
Name: Michiko
Age: 15
Affinities : Sound, Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - Ashes They Fall Wed Aug 11, 2010 10:26 pm | |
| I don't really know where to go. She kinda died lol | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Comments - Ashes They Fall Wed Aug 11, 2010 10:37 pm | |
| well maybe she could continue her life dead. and maybe only one person can see her. and he or she tries to cross her over, but they fall in love. | |
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